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By : Aleke

From ANON - Frimmy on December 09, 2005
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
ALEKE
ALEKE ALEKE ALEKE ALEKE ALEKE ALEKE ALEKE!!!!!!!!!!
(you do realize i said your name out loud, about twenty times before i wrote this? yes, my family is ready to slaughter you because now they have to listen to me pronounce properly ALEKE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!)
okay, now, i WOULD help you come up with ideas. BUT....i can't.
see, the thing is, i have a theory exam tomorrow (saturday) and i have another lesson today, to review all this crud i need to know for the exam. except i didn't do any of my homework. so i have fifteen minutes to do an hour's worth of homework.
so yeah.
but i shall think all throughout my lesson, and be back with ideas in aproximately one hour and twenty minutes.
so.
expect it.
(oooh, and just to let you know, i consider it my duty to the public to get authors to write more to their stories. it's like community service. think you could sign a form for me, so i can hand that in as my community service? that would be great...)

Frimmy
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From ANON - Ren on December 09, 2005
Hee hee...I hope you continue your great work...today is my snow day...so no school. ^_^ I'm home and catching up with reading hee hee. :D Hmm...I was thinking that Rin and Sesshoumaru's children should look almost fully grown, considering their blood is not of a humans. From what I've read, it seems more of their father's blood flows through them. ^_^ I hope to read the next chapter soon. ^_^ Nice german name by the way..hee hee, I've never heard much about German names, so this was a good new experience for me. ^_^
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From ANON - Frimm on December 07, 2005
gurgle-frigg
would you like to hear my newest issue with this story?
well, since i don't really care if you want to know, i shall tell you anyways.
you see dear aleke, not only do i have issues with your name, because i am still physically incapable of saying it. but i also have review issues.
see, i get very worried, every time i check the story, because i think that you have updated, and i have only sent you two reviews.
or three.
i don't remeber.
i lost track.
anyways, so i always pray that there will be no update, so i can review it, tell you to update, and then you will update. only i keep forgetting.
so when i actually want decent fanfics to read, there is no updating.
STUPID KARMA!!!!!!!
grrrr, so i am getting this off my chest, reviewing, so i can stop the stupid bad-wish-screwing-up-the-natural-updating-process-crud.
yup.
so sorry it's short, but i had to do this.
oh, and if you have already told me how to pronounce your name, but i have forgotten, blame the dancing chipmucks outside my window.
they mesmerize me, and make my brain cells implode, so precious memories are lost.
i tried telling my teachers, but they didn't believe me.
STUPID TEACHERS!!!!!!!!!
IF YOU HAD DANCING CHIPMUNKS BREAKDANCING OUTSIDE YOUR WINDOW, YOU'D GET DISTRACTED TOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
gurglefraster.
and shmoop.
you know what else is mesmerizing?
the aff.net banner.
the words move.
oooh.........*drool*
oh, and my pointy pencil tip.
that's mesmerizing too.
i know, easily amused...
Frimmy Frimela Frimster McFrimm
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From ANON - Me on November 28, 2005
Your story is really turning out great. I must admit to laughing quite hard when I finally realized who Jaken's 'love' was (I'm so dense lol). I also love the little poem about the Black Rose twins, its quite sad and sadistic. At times I feel like the story is a little rushed, but I enjoy it none-the-less. How could one not like a Sess. and Rin pairing?? Can't wait to see what happens when everyone meets up.
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From ANON - babe_galanime on November 19, 2005
continue plz.
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From ANON - Frimmy on November 10, 2005
I REMEMBER NOW!!!!!!!
only i don't, because then i would end up in lederhosen etc. (see previous review)
WAIT!!!
I DON'T REMEMBER THAT!!!
gaaah, the whole memory file deleting thing get's really confusing.
okay, my question is:
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...
OH YEAH!!
how is it that Sess doesn't ssense the godesse's aura? i mean, it makes sense that he wouldn't smell her approach, but once he was alerted tro here presence, wouldn't he have noticed that the human had an unsually large aura or something??
anyways, i apologize for any spelling mistakes that i missed, since i was typing with my toes.
it's actually quite fun, but very slow. see, i was thinking and typing to fast so it all ended up like word vomit, so i hadf to slow down and the only way to do that was to type with my toes. so i did.
only no i'm not thinking anymore, so i am typing with my fingers again.
i am ambidextrous.
only not, more like ambifootrous.
or whatever.
not i have to go put on socks or slippers since my feet are cold, so i will leave you to process my review and abnormal though processes.
have fun.
(btw, i couldn't pronounce processes, i tried, but it's like your name, unpronouncable.)
Frimmy Frimela Frimster McFrimm
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From ANON - Frimmy on November 10, 2005
hey-lo again.
c'est moi!!!!
yes, your lover-ly fantastical pally Frimmy!!!
WHEEEEEEEEEEE
okay, enough of the wonderfufl-osity of me, now for my story:
see, i wanted to review again yesterday, and had a whole nice, pretty, long, georgous review all written up and typed, with a detailed history on the events of my day (which included a lot of sleeping in class and teachers randomly leaving us with nutty subs in the middle of class...you really don't want to know..) and the summary of me and my friend matt's game history on text twist, and a whole bunch of "I WIN!!!!!!!!!" statements.
BUT....
unfortunately, i forgot to copy it before i sent it in, and because my screwy internet lives for moments like these, it showed the really annoying "page cannot be displayed" message, and efficiently erassed my entire review.
and because i was too busy cursing my laptop in Frimmish i didn't re-write it.
and now that you have that wonderfully detailed and quite pointless explanation to as why my review is late..
wait a sec. you have no idea if my review is late or not!!!
you have no idea when my laptop schemed against me and deleted my other review, so for all you know, i could have written it LAST YEAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
and you might not get this for another few days!!!!
so i could have written the other review a year and a few days ago really, when i actually wrote it a few days ago and the whole time-space continuem will be screwed up and i will grow a beard, only not, and end up wearing lederhosen in san-fransisco in aproximately five minutes!!!!!!!!!!!!!
GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
PANIC!!!!!!!!!!
*runs around in circle untill hits the wall*
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oww...
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WAIT!!!!!!!!!!1
BRAINWAVE!!!!!!!!!!
*lightbulb goes ding*
YOU HAVE TO ERASE EVERYTHING I JUST SAID IN ORDER TO NOT MAKE ME END UP IN LEDERHOSEN IN SAN FRANSISCO!!!!!!!
okay, so remind, delete, and let's start over:
hey-lo again.
c'est moi!!!!
yes, you lover-ly fantastical pally Frimmy!!
WHEEEEEEEE
okay, enough of the wonder-osity of me, now onto my second review.
(insert my question here)
only i have forgotten my question due to the deleting of my memory files to erase something i forget because i erased those brain files.
so good bye for now.
i will now go and re-read the chapter and re-rememeber my question.
adieu pour le moment!!!
(see, not always asleep in French!)
Frimmy Frimela Frimster McFrimm
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From ANON - yue on October 26, 2005
Aww. this is soo sad. i hope to rread more soon. I really enjoyed the tibbit of jaken wetting himself. lol.
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From ANON - animegirl007 on October 25, 2005
YAHOO!!!!!!! You're back....... Man, kids can be so cruel.....I can't wait until the main action get started....keep it coming........
ps
kind touch with the teardrop on each others hand...I really liked that .....
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From ANON - Ren on October 25, 2005
Hee hee hee, gomen ne? I've been so busy as of lately I haven't even checked my mail, so yeah, I will now that I have recieved news of your mail. ^_^ So yeah, I will check out your site as soon as I can, being a junior in school sucks butt...and it is hard at times, too many projects, and talking about Chemistry I had a test today in it. It was easy, hee hee...about the SI unit and all. So yeah, and well, enough about me, how are you? Seems like you stopped putting us reviewers on hold you meanie you >,< but the long chapter made up for it. :D Hee hee, keep up the wonderful work, I'm glad I caught your story, it made my day hee hee hee.^_^ So be sure to continue again sometime soon! ^_^
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From ANON - New Fan on October 24, 2005
Great chapter. When will Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru will collide? I hope that
it will be in the next chapter. Will you go forward in time? Update soon.
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From ANON - Devon M on October 24, 2005
Now that's just ignorant, singing songs about two little kids just because they are different. Sad part is that is realistic as well -_- Down with assholes. Love the chapter by the way and I am looking forward to the drama of epic proportions that you are about to release:)
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From ANON - Frimmy on October 24, 2005
check it out, new not retarted email.
wheeee.
anyways, let me tell you what happened today.
i woke up at an un-godly hour, (6:20) to catch a bus to my el-retartido school where i don't learn anything anyways, then i got on the bus, then i put on my cd player, and listened to my new inuyasha mix cd, then i got off the bus, walked into my locker place thing, saw my bizarro friend wearing a sparkly hat, and it was fuzzy in a beady-type way, and then i walked into my jh class, and dropped my annoying laptop on the desk, and opened it, and checked for updates on my fanfics...
AND GUESS WHAT I FOUND?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
that's right, i looked at the title on chapter 11, and saw that it was no longer notice, but a NEW CHAPTER!!!
so i freaked out, in the middle of class, and my teacher looked at me strangely, (he does that alot), and then i told my friend that you updated, because i was happy, but she doesn't realize the truth gold-ly-ness of inuyasha, and thins sesshoumaru is sushi-mooshi, and kagome is toyota, and has no appreciation for the finer arts of fanfics writing so she just nodded and smiled. (people do that around me).
so i read the chapter, but then i had to pay attention, so i couldn't review it.
then, i had French class, and of course i thought i could write my review in French, because of course i never pay attention in French. but it turns out we had to go to the library and meet these costa0rican kids who knew how to speak french. ver interessting, ver time-wastefull. the only good thing about that little, well thing, was that their accents were funny and they gave us costa rican candy.
WHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
it tasted like boiled sweet-potatoes, but it had an extremely high sugar content, so i was uber hyper for my canadien history class.
so i couldn't write the review in French.
then i walked into my canadien history class, and i was reallly REALLLLLLYYYYY hyper, and i was laughing and bouncing and my teacher looked at me weird (once again, they do that alot) but i felt that this time he deserved an explination for my odd behaviour, so i told him about the costa-rican candy in my usual speed of talking (a thousand words a second) but the only thing he got out of it was that i was hyper. and he told me that yes,i was just a little hyper. (sarcasm of course)
anyways, normally i don't do anything in Canadien history, but this time i didn't do my homework, so i had to hurry and do it in class, so i couldn't review your story once again.
then it was lunch time, and i had to study for a Yiddish test and had to eat, so i couldn't review.
then i had math, and i don't bring my lap-top to math, so i couldn't review.
then i had the said Yiddish class, and test, which wasn't really a test after all, but merely a pre-test before the test because our teacher is a spazzette.
so i couldn't write the review in Yiddish.
FINALLY, i got onto the bus, and because i thought in advance and bookmarked the site, i was able to access the "review run" button on the story, and here i am writing a review.
so.
now with that very long and hardly very interessting summary of my day, i shall write the actual review:
oooooooohhhhhh, me loves.
at the part where the twins tell Rin about the bad village kids, i literally started sniffling in my jh class. luckily, only the four people around me heard, but since they are used to my random-ness, the didn't pay attention. point is, that's so sad, but so touching-ly written!!!!
okay, also the part about the embodiement of beauty, where there she takes the form of kaede because no one else talks like that, you said she dissapeared without a trace. does that mean that the berries she was picking maggically returned to the bushes, or that they were never really picked at all. (yes, i am bored and am going to nit-pick BIG time).
the part where you first describe the blue teardrop, you wrote three day snow, instead of three days now.
and, did you mention the teardrop before, since i don't really re-call hearing about it before...oh well, matters not.
and i love the song. any particular song it should be sung to?
anyways, algebra and chemistry are indeed very good story writing classes, shame i actually like those classes or i would most definately use them for subjects not algebra and chemistry.
and now the reply's to your reply's to my reviews. *breathes*
yes, i do love jakotsu's sword. it is so much cooler then bankotsu's, his is really boring and big...plus jakotsu himself is honestly one of my very favoutrite characters EVER. he's so cool, in his exceedingly gay ways....
and as for my name, let's just say my freinds are uber nuts.
see, my real last name is Simmons, so my friends (well, one friend in particular, but it caught like wildfire, now evene my math teacher calls me this) decided to knickname me Simmy, short for Simmons. then of course, i had another friend who decided i reminded her of Frenchy the grease charater and French salad dressing. so she put two and two together (actually more like Simmy, Frenchy and French together) and got Frimmy.
so i hence became known as Frimmy.
but no, we couldn't stop there. we had to make it rhyme and make it cool to say, so i became Frimmy Frimela Frimster McFrimm.
and that's my life story. (only without most of my life, like the near-death-incident-due-to-a-camel parts)
and i do what i can to make author's lives enjoyable. if they are happy, then they update, if they aren't then they don't update. updates make me happy. and when i am happy, the world is happy. so i do what i can to create world peace. (only not)
and i'll have you know i take pride in my randomness, and don't share this talent with anyone. except maybe you. because aprently i am your twin separated at brith. that would be awesome. so because awesome things are coolio, and coolio things make me hyper, you are now my new twin with whom i was separated from at birth. and now that world hates you because you made me hyper. but that's okay.
and i just spent a whole bus ride writing this, and succesfully wasted at least two minutes of your life. but time wasted in my name is time wasted well. so if you have to waste time, do it reading my reviews!!!!
yup, i like being the cause of people's fuzzing wasted time. 'tis fun.
(since i am not allowed to swear, and i am a good little girl (pshaww, yeah right) i have converted all my swear words into Frimmish as not to pollute the authoress with my dirty, dirty mouth)
FRUIT FLY!!!!
sorry, i had to kill a fruit fly that was driving me nuts.....stupid fresshagennenn fuzzing fruit flys...
oh, another question, how do you pronounce your name?
i have a pronouncing and spelling issues, so most of my words end up in a form of Frimmish and unrecognizable to the human race.
so...yeah..
toodles,
Frimmy Frimela Frimster McFrimm
(your long lost twin separated at birth)
oh, just to let you know, this review is almost three pages long...wish my essays were this good...
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From ANON - Cassie on October 24, 2005
Yay!!!! I really love this story I'll be glad when Sesshomaru finally realize that Rin is not dead and he sees he again and meet his twins for the very first time and I hope he doesn't kill Inuyasha... and will Inuyasha and the rest meet Sesshomaru first or will Sesshomaru meet the twins and Rin first...... If he meets Inuyasha first will they tell Sesshomaru that Rin isn't dead and that he is the father of twins..... please update soon I can't wait to read the outcome of thsi really really good story.....^___________^
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From ANON - Altari on October 24, 2005
...............
^_^
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