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By : Aleke

From ANON - Altari on September 10, 2005
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Yeah I know I'm demanding! I'm loving how it's going!

Yayxxors for driving. Getting your wheeled freedom is awesome.....Just don't drive too fast! The State of Illinois has taken more of my money because I was 'speeding.' I think the speed limit should be subjective...
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From ANON - Frimmy on September 10, 2005
sure, have all the time you need.
anyhoo, yeah, that pretty much answers all my questions....
and one more thing, what's your website url? cause i'd really like to see it, i didn't even know you had one! and not to mention i am in it! *basks in her own glow due to uneeded ego boosts*
hey, it's your fault!
anyways, now to review the last chapter.
GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!
unexplicable plot twists will drive me insane. and here i was thinking that this story would end with a happily ever after but NO!
that's not allowed to happen. instead stupid freakin NARAKU has to come into the already-over-complicated picture too!!!!!!
grrr....
nee hoo, i think the idea works, having sesshomaru kill inuyasha sounds...so naraku-y-ish that i could swear you are him in disguise! *yanks off baboon pelt* AHA!!
you ARE naraku, i knew it!
now i will have to kill you. *runs after you with jakotsu's crazy sword thingy*
hang on, you're not naraku! you're a girl!
oops.....hehe....pay no attention....
sorry about that, i got up early and it's hurting my brain.
so. my usual message.
update or death.
or cookies. one of the three.....
Frimmy Frimella Frimster McFrimm.
ps, if you want another hint, the matess company is also the name of a famous aroebics guy.
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From ANON - Chew on September 10, 2005
Ahhhh.....finally....finally ......what can i say ? Naraku is damn evil . Sess is ....well....cool la . Hopefully Sess can meet the real Rin and his children soon . I don't really care about inuyasha , but don't kill him , not yet . Anyway , please update soon , i LOVE you . Please update soon .
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From ANON - New Fan on September 10, 2005
Ooooh!! That was very clever what you just did. I can not believe that your mind came up with that.
When Sess sees those childeren, he will think the worst. Great chapter and update really soon.
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From ANON - Ren on September 10, 2005
Tee hee hee, you're so funny...tee hee hee, *hugs back* arigato...even if it's a simple hug on the net, I haven't recieve a hug for the longest of time. It's not that people don't want to give me one, it's just I can't stand for when they hold me, it feels...awkward, how can they do such things? Hugging someone without asking them first, I didn't say anything to make them want to touch me, so why? I don't get it, I told you some things to get something out of it, a piece of cake, and a hug was nice, I thank you so very much, but them. Lets not talk about it anymore, I look forwards to talking to you on mail, and well for my school..hmm, I can sympathize with you on Chemistry and Alegbra, though I'm naturally good at those stupid subjects, for some odd ball reason, I always hated them.

I already took Physical Science, Biology, and more, but never Chemistry so this year, I took and, and so far, it's a piece of cake, literally, the teacher put shaving cream in a pie container and SMASH it into a volunteer's face, *luckily it wasn't me* hahahahahahaha. It was hilarious, he said, "If you didn't want to do this, you shouldn't have volunteered without knowing what you were volunteering for, or at least ask something about before participating in it..."

HAHAHAHAHAH, he's so funny, then there was my classes being messed up, my cramps setting in, it was one word, HELL! I hate this...I'm in pain as we speak, okay I've got to cut this short, but please, if you're free, go here, and check it out please...

http://crazievikki.deviantart.com/
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From ANON - Dimepieceleo on September 10, 2005
oh you are so bad that chapters was great I can't wait to see this fight about to go down
DAMN YOUR MIND IS EVIL
I had teachers like that to at one time

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From ANON - Lady_Hoshi on September 10, 2005
thank you so much for the update. *sighs with contentment* i need more sesshomaru. and more of the twins and Rin. thank you for before on the compliment of my name. i will be eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
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From ANON - Frimmy on September 06, 2005
YAY!!!!!!
now i won't have to kill you!!!!
whoopee!!!!
and of course, i know what you mean by getting your period....every time i get it i get all screwy (-er then normal...) and start acting really random...and there are no bitches from ehell in my new school so CHEER!!!!
unless of course you count my french teacher, who is a big bitch...
she hates me. after three classes... *sigh*
what did i do to deserve such hatred and pain. simple, i'm too hyper and smart. (and modest wink wink!!) and thus she hates me.
buuuuut, that's kinda off topic.
so. i was bored, extremely bored doing dome french assignment that i re-read your whole story and have a few questions.
1)(chapter one, i know i know..) so. seshy says he has no interest in kimiko, but then why all the forplay. i mean he could have just done it wuick and fast, gotten it over with, but no..he has to go sticking his fingers places and doing a whole bunch of really random things first.
but it was well written, don't get me wrong, it just kinda doesn't make sense...
2)(canpter 2) how come seshy only began to notice her lately? i mean he brought her back from the dead and let her trail along with him for go knows how long, how could he only just start to notice her lately???
3) (chapter 3) why on earth would seshy be real honest to her then abruptly cut her off. i mean i know we have conflicting feelings playing a moajor role here but still, he could have just ordered her to do something. of course, wether or not she did it, is another matter entirel, since we know sesh loves her for her spunk! know what, ignore that last one.
4) (chapter 9) naraku didn't kill shippou's father, it was the thunder brothers who did that.
5) slightly random, but when i saw that comment about bologna and lunch meat, i died. seriously, i had spent the last two hours singin at the top of my lungs with my friends that song, and the whole school could probably hear it and could memorize from what i know. so i read that, and laughed out loud, alone, in my room, all alone...
yeah...
neehoo, so happy to hear that you are updating soon!!!!
and yes, class is a great time and place to do things that have nothing to do with that class. like french!
fun fun.
Frimmy
Frimela Frimster McFrimm
( i decided to use my full name, bonus points if you can figure out where it comes from.
hint: it has to do with matresse and a combination of salad dressing and a character from greece.)

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From ANON - Robyn on September 06, 2005
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!You take as much time as you need k?
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From ANON - hiro on September 05, 2005
�En busca de que? �Por que semejante mensaje?
Mira mija yo se lo que es tener periodo y sangrar, sangrar, sangrar, mencione sangrar y no morirse. Pero eso no es excusa para un authors note! Me perturba!!!! Como es posble que me subas las esperanzas de ese modo?! Hay joder estoy apunto de llorar. =-{ No me hace sentido.

Um sorry about that is just that when Im upset I burst in whatever language the emotion registers. Im so glad Im not you I just finished mine! tee hee ^_^ Well anyway its not the end of the world and youll finish some day and then maybe you can make an old lady cry instead of you. How about it tell them ugly or something, rub in the fact that you are young and beautiful and they are old and well... fucked up haha.

Sorry I can also get mean when my daily dosage of lord fluffy is denied to me. Well anyway... que te mejores y que puedas seguir con tu trabajo (get well and may you be able to continue with your work)
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From ANON - Ren on September 05, 2005
Tee hee hee, sounds like you have it tough, wells, I just wanted to know since you are a favorite writer of mines, please e-mail me if you want to put out some stress, don't worry, if it's long, I will not mind, tell me more about yourself, and don't stress yourself out too much okay? I'll be here for you if you need me, and I hope for the best for you, have a good day, be safe also okay? See you soon. ^+^
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From ANON - Frimm on August 29, 2005
need.....update....
dying...from...lack of......decent....literature....
need.....acurate....portrayls...of the...all-knowing......holy...fluffy one......
must....have.,....more....to.....story.....
Frimmy
(Frimela Frimster McFrimm)
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From ANON - Frimm on August 18, 2005
no.......update?
but but but but but but....
there was the next chapter button...and chapter ten...and and and.....
no update?
just an author's note?
are you trying to kill me???????
grrrr....i have loyaly checked your story every day (well, almost) to see if there was an update, and when i finally saw it, i was all happy, but then it was just an author's note and and and...
i was heartbroken!
can't you see the things you do to me?
well, aparently not, unless of sourse you have spy camera's hooked up where the computer is....
but i'm betting on the fact that you don't so....
alright alright, i'll skip the banter, just update already!!!!!
because it's about time sesh came into the picture. we need more fluff!!!!!
both kinds.
no, not lemon-lime fluff both kinds.
lime/lemon-seshy's-gorgeous-fluff both kinds.
sooo....ya....i'm undergoing a severe case of sesh-deprivation so please give me some fluff before i blow up.
it's greatly appreciated!
Frimmmmmmm
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From ANON - Ren on August 17, 2005
Have fun..don't slack off school though, keep up the great work too...^+^
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From ANON - Vanessa on August 13, 2005
Another Great Chapter. Yes I will e-mail them to you as soon as I finish. I am pleased that you liked the idea of the pony tail. Sorry for the delay I just really want to do a good job knowing I am not as experiece on drawings as I would wish to be. Don't worry Thwy will look at least like a big OKAY or A Good!!! I'll send them to you in around 2-3 days I promise.
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