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By : Aleke

From ANON - Chew on August 11, 2005
Finally updated . I Have waited for sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo long . But where is SESSHOUMARU ?????????? I want to see him and Rin and the twins together !!!!!! CAN'T WAIT FOR THAT CHAPTER TO COME !!!!!! UPDATE SOON , PLEASE !!!!!
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From ANON - sphinx on August 11, 2005
ah...y didnt sess continue to pursue after inu abt rin's whereabouts? hpe they cant reunit soon... glad tat nothing big happen in the western lands...
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From ANON - lady_hoshi on August 11, 2005
thank you so much for coming back and updating. this story is so good. i
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From ANON - Hiro on August 11, 2005
Dont worry Ill use a plastic spoon! :p Na, seriously it happens. Well, hate to say it but... I TOLD YOU SO.
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From ANON - Dimepieceleo on August 11, 2005
I liked the chapter, another good one
but where oh where has lord sess gone
he killed his wife for her and now nothing
OH AND inuyasha giving them the swords was priceless
can't wait for the next chapter oh and happy birthday to me 10th

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From ANON - animegirl007 on August 10, 2005
I was thinking about your story just the other day......I thought that I missed giving you a review on a new chapter......Whee!!!! I glad I didn't... I like to keep my promises....Mmmm...the twins have telepathic abilities.... that cool......I'm also happy that Yasuo seemes to have Sesshomaru's brilliant mind for strategy and his smirking way......When will they figure out that Inuyasha is their Uncle?????? If Kaori looks so similar to him, you think that the question would come up.....and I have to confess something....I looked at New Fan challenge...so I know what you need to accomplish...When I first read it ...the first thing out my mouth was ..."NNNNNNOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!" But, I know you're be able to do it..and make New Fan and all the rest of us happy.........As always....keep it coming, I'll be waiting......
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From ANON - Frimm on August 10, 2005
well well well...
someone updated.
IT'S ABOUT TIME!!!!
sorry, sorry, i know you were busy...*sigh*
but when you hang off someone's every word...then it gets hard to keep waiting.
and no worries, i won't use your skin as a coat, because i got lost trying to find your house.
seriously, i'm almost as bad as my mom. she can go around the block and not be able to find her way back....
aaaaaaanywaaaaysss....
moving along...
about the whole plot thing, yeah, i agree with you, it makes for a better story.
and i LOVE the whole miroku/sango thing. they go so well together.
i just hate it when people rush them together though. i mean if it took so long to get sango used to his butt-rubbings (well, not exactly used, but ya get my drift) that i don't understand how people can have them having sex after one kiss!!!!
i mean that just bugs me.
but i have complete faith in you, and i don't doubt that you will make this pairing work!
your welcome for the cheetos, have fun driving, and if i can think of anything else, i'll give you a call.
actually, i'll give you a review but you know what i mean (even if i don't ;) )
Frimm
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From ANON - Ren on August 10, 2005
Tee hee hee, ^i^ *passes a tissue over* Don't cry, you've been clean for so long, well longer than before, it was like, crazy caffine for you, but yes, I'm SO PROUD!!! I really am happy you've finally updated, I was so worried, but yea, when I checked your profile though, it was different. Tee hee hee, I'm testing for my learner's permit, and I'm so anxious to start, this chapter was indeed short, but it was also very nice, but not much on Rin and Sesshoumaru, but it was okay, we did learn about her children, or should I say, their children. I feel privileged that I've brought a smile to your face, tee hee hee, it's okay though, I'm having trouble with this month, 17 more days left till my horrible birthday, Aug 27, the lucky 7, yea right...I don't want it...~.~ I've always hated my birthday, because you see, in a way, I don't belong in this family. I'm always out of place, calm, quiet, if I'm not blowing tantums just to be entertainment so no one starts fights...and I don't want to anymore.

I thought my aunt and cousins was finally going to move, I was BEYONG HAPPY!! Not wanting to be mean, it's just, I'm tired, of them, of their constent always attention, spoiled, no good, lying family members. I really love them, but I really hate them, truth be told, I love everyone a lot, but their not really my BLOOD relatives, my aunt really is my mother's lover, yes, I mean it, my mother is going for the same gender. But I love her either way, with her experience with males, who wouldn't, she was married to a man whom cheated on her, even though she was pregnant with his children, 3 beautiful girls, talented, charming, little girls. Don't get me wrong, all little girls are beautiful, charming and etc. but he's MY father, but he...always abandoned my mother and I, along with my sisters. I remember how he left to New York with some Korean woman, because his boss was her brother and forbid him to see her again, and she took him with her. I remember over-hearing and asked what is MY father doing with another woman, that was NOT my mother. I remember the uncomfortable face, and told I 'wouldn't understand' as if. I understood alright, just like all the nights he came home, beating, yelling screaming at us, like he wanted us gone. Like we really...aren't anything of worth to him, I wouldn't blame him, he was a attractive male at Vietnem, he had it all, money, power, smarts, charm and all. Everyone wanted him, except for my mother, and my mother was wanted by all males as my father was wanted of all females. It was a typical fairy tale story in a way, but never a happy ending.

So here I am, typing what I've experience, my parents fighting, cheating on each other and caught red handed by no other than I myself, being abused, and more, never really had a child hood that I wanted. Is it hard to ask if my mother and father would get along with ONCE. I guess it was a yes, because they never got along, my mother cooks and ignore, my father works, yea right, and parties like no tomorrow. I swear, when I was born in this world, that night my father was with another woman, my mother told me, she told that he was the one whom named me the name I hate more than the life I had, Nguyen Thi Chien Thang...Chien Thang, a war victory...yes, he won something alright, he always wins, wins what he wants most, he took me out of my mother's weak grip after her birth, and named me. A name that was suit only for a boy...a boy, something he will never have, funny, usually, males in this 'fairy tale' has a heir to his success, a BOY to take over for him on his dieing bed, but oh no. Not him, never him, think of it as the best punishment to him, but yes, I'm sorry, this is one long review...

I guess I'm more troubled than I thought, but thanks if you read it all, I'm grateful to have authoress/authors whom are very sympatheic, and understanding, it helps, for my case. Sesshoumaru isn't a bad person, I KNOW what bad is, and he's not it, he might be mean, and even scary, but from what I read, he DOES love Rin, and I only hope for this...fairy tale to end better than mines...*smiles sadly* it's really nostalgic now that I think about it, I was the 'favorite' in the group of girls of his...my father that is. I love him most...and still do, but, in a way he's like Sesshoumaru, prideful, arrogant and more, I guess that's why I like Sesshoumaru and those other many cold yet mysterious characters, like in Rurounin Kenshin, the character Shinomori Aoshi. They remind me of my father, he loves reading, and he was quiet, cruel, tough yet gentle in many ways..too bad it never ends up well at all....

I love yoru work, I really do, sorry for burdening you, pass couple of days are wearing me out, and the next isn't helping either, school's starting soon, I'll be older, in 11th grade, alone this time, not that I mind. I never hated solitute, I was always alone..I like it, but it's nice to have company so I don't lose my sanity, but yes, I enjoyed your stories, especially you...you made me see things more clearly. Though Sesshoumaru was MORE loving than my father, they are similar to your story, my father having another lover, and Sesshoumaru with his mate, Kimiko, and I'm not naming my father's LOVERS, too many. But yes, only difference, Sesshoumaru DOES love Rin, while my father and mother had a understanding, she bared his children, and he worked to support them...too much of a fairy tale ne? Sad, but true, I really am happy though, there are still people in this world who isn't ignorant to pain, don't worry I will not 'track' you down. I appreciate your work very much, and and anxious to have another chapter, I'm glad I was able to read this before those accidents happen again...but yes, I hope you will continue your great work, keep it up, I'm still here, thankfully. And please, do tell about your life, I'm quite interested. Tee hee hee, ^i^ no e-mail sorry, but I don't want to follow in the foot-steps of my older, if there is one thing that I pride my self in, it is that I DON'T do or follow my older sister's foot-steps anymore, and that is that.

I totally am anxious to see how Sesshoumaru meet up with his kids, is it in a accidental way? A fight? A coincidence? What? Tee hee hee, continue again soon, I love your story, tee hee hee, and let's embrace the excitement of driving to together ne? ^i^
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From Altari on August 10, 2005
Hehehe. I've been checking your story daily for updates. I thought you'd forgotten about it, then we'd all be left hanging!!! =0

Anyhoo, great chapter. Are we going to see Sesshy soon? We need some angstful encounters, y'know?

And thanks for checking my recommended list. I was thinking people didn't do that because few people seem to use it. o_O Congrats on getting your license! Freeeeeeeeeeddddooooooooommmmmmmmmmmm
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From ANON - New Fan\\ on August 10, 2005
Great chapter. Its a nice break from Rin and Sess just to concetrate on the twins. Those twins are
more powerful than I realize. Update soon.
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From ANON - Snick on August 08, 2005
AHHHHHH!! YOU DIDNT UPDATE!!! THE WORLDS GONNA END!!!!
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From Altari on August 08, 2005
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Where's the update?
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This displeases me. :( I need closure!!!! =)
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From ANON - Frimm on August 05, 2005
grr.....
i'm back..and guess what?
no update.
well, you had your chance...
here i come
*starts sharpening butcher knife*
...

ummm....
i'm gonna need directions....
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From ANON - lady_hoshi on August 02, 2005
please update soon. I love your story. The characterization is especially good. please, please, please update! I reread your story every night even without an update.
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From ANON - Chew on July 30, 2005
OHHHHHHH The twins are sooooo cute . Sess is so poor thing . Hopefully u will let him meet up with Rin and the twins . I like this story very much and i always check if u update it or not . Anyway , keep up with the good work and PLEASE UPDATE SOON !!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON !!!!YOUR FANS CANNOT WAIT !!!!
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