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By : Aleke

From ANON - Mrs. Dark Frost on July 13, 2005
something hard to find but a story where the people..act like they would, i hate it when they make Sessy all nice. anyways i love your story please update
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From ANON - Altari on July 13, 2005
=) Awesome! I'm so waiting for more...oh...............dammit I hate picking up stories at a cliffhanger. Where's the next chapter??? Nicely done. :)

`~Becky~`
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From ANON - Ren on July 13, 2005
Tee hee hee, it's nice to know someone agrees with me when I want to straggle kids, tee hee hee, oh course I wouldn't do it truly, but you know what I mean. I've ben baby-sitting since I was 5 and that annoys the hell out of me. Since now, I have 4 kids to baby-sit. Greee, oh wells though, I'm thankful you chose one of the names I suggested....tee hee hee, I'm happy, I had a feeling you were going for Kaori. ^+^ personally, I like that name best too, tee hee hee, I am thoroughly happy with the outcome with the chapter so far, oh yea, about the chapter becoming different from what you planned is actually a good thing. It means you are becoming better at what you are doing, and becoming more creative, trust me...I know..it happened when I was drawing, I was planning to draw a female all sad and stuff, the next thing I know she as smiling...SMILING!! Seriously, it's better sometimes to not have any idea but one and start off with it and go from there. I doesn't mean your bad or anything, it's good, tee hee hee, helps me a lot, tee hee hee, well I am still here, and don't worry about the long update, I'm happy you took your time, it's a great chapter so don't sweat it. I love this story, my favorite autor...so keep it up, relax...enjoy life and write the story base on what you do in life to, or better yet...relate your feelings to Rin's or someone in the story, it will help with descriptions you make in the story. Not that it's not good, just a suggestion, I had a lot problems with descriptions, not with emotions, but descripting some thing, that's why I'll turn out ot be one terrible writer...te hee hee, still rooting for you!!! Keep up the great work, very honored for being mentioned, and hope you will continue again some time soon.
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From ANON - bob on July 13, 2005
i heart this story!!! i can't wait for you to update!!
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From ANON - Cassie on July 11, 2005
Hi, I really love this story I can't decide what name or sex of the baby.....could the child be full demon by any chance... that would be so great and exciting for Rin to give birth to a full demon child that looks exactly like Sesshomaru. And will he be able to find her and their child, so he could tell her that BITCH Kimiko or whatever her name is dead and she could be his mate..... I can't wait to read the next chapter please consider my idea to make the child full demon.... somehow because she was so worried about what Sesshomaru would think about her having a hanyou child that it somehow her worries and fears turned the child in her wound to a full demon because she feared what his or her life would be like.... please please please make it like that or either you could write it the way you intended it to be and please forgive me, but could you please please please with sugar on top reconsider what I have said.....^_____________________________________________________^....... Thank you for reading my review...
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From ANON - REadER on July 11, 2005
This story is great! And yet its sooo sad :-( Poor Sesshoumaru *tear* After the baby is born is Rin going to stay with the old lady? Or is she going to find a new home (and decide to be a healer)? Lol, the healer part would be cool. Is Rin going to meet Inu-Yasha and they're going to be best friends? It would be really cute, cause the baby would be like "Uncle Inu!" and Inu-Yasha would teach the kid about how to be a hanyou. And then Inu-Yasha meets up with Sesshoumaru and things get interesting.
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From ANON - hiro on July 10, 2005
Great fic, a little short (the chapters) but, non the less great. Pls don't take this as a flame but, you really should use spell check or a beta to edit and correct spellings. Other than that continue on with your work, it's coming out splendidly.
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From ANON - Oceanna on July 10, 2005
Wow great story you just need to add more more chapters I'm lovin it a whole lot please UPDATE SOOONN I am really interested in what happens to Rin lol ok thanks I will look for your next chapterssss.
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From ANON - New Ffan on July 10, 2005
This is a great story so far. I can not wait until you update. Does Sesshoumaru knows that Rin's pregnant?
Will there reunion be soon or will it be far into the furture? Update soon.
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From ANON - Anon on July 10, 2005
Write More! Good stuff!
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From ANON - New Fan on July 10, 2005
I read the first chapter. I like it very much. I would read the next four chapter and I will give my final review.
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From ANON - New Fan on July 10, 2005
I am so sorry I did not do a review. I just notice your story. I will start reading your story right now. I feel bad right now
that i did not notice it but I have a good reason. I have exams right now, but I won't let that stop me.
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From ANON - Raeysama on July 10, 2005
I'm not good at writing these, but I like this story. Keep it up.
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From ANON - Ren on July 10, 2005
Tee hee hee, I didn't know I was a dear *blush* it's nice to know some one in this whacked world agrees with me, I mean, really, lusting after every guys pants is so shameful, if it was me, I would feel down right dirty and shamefull. Tee hee hee, I'm glad I make you laugh...Tee hee hee, it's easy to make my family laugh as well, but it's really hard for me to laugh as they do though, because in real life, I'm cold as ice...but in this case, DIAMONDS!!!! I love the whole tear/diamond thing, it was a GREAT idea, I loved it. Tee hee hee, though personally, I will never wear it, because I don't want to get robbed...tee hee hee, I loved it, I'm sorry I put more pressure on you, T.T huuu, I didn't mean to, gomen su....T.T but I really hope you don't push yourself too hard. Because personally, I don't care what name you pick. Tee hee hee, I thought Yuki was best if you want the child to be a boy, it fits a girl too, that's what I love about japanese names, males and females names can almost always be given to the other gender.

*Sighs* also sorry if you are pushing yourself harder to update soon for us reviewers, I just want you to know, I don't mind waiting, heck, I probably possess the patience of a god now...you have to when it comes to kids. And boy do I hate kids...sorry if that offends you... it just I'm surrounded with them twenty-four, seven, you can imagine how I feel. Tee hee hee, always so energitic, oh yes and the covabulary and grammar was good in this chapter too, and please don't stress over litttle worlds, as you and I know...not all people are gifted with brains that will wrk unless it's for pleasure...well I really had a good time talking and typing this review. I hope you enjoy it as much as I do, I'm looking forwards to seeing another excellent chapter, as always, still rooting for you!!! Oh yea, now I remember, I was your first reviewer...tee hee hee, I'm such an idiot...*laughs nervously*... that day was so boring to me too. Tee he ehe, seeing this story perked me up, thanks a lot!!! ^_^ I really did mean it when I said I enjoyed your story. Tee hee hee, keep up the great work, there's still people who is reading and enjoying this story, new and old are here still rooting for you and still behind you! So...work that magic GIRL!!!!

Oh yes, I wanted to know if you have ever watched the anime, Vampire Princess Miyu, it's a goth/horror/etc. anime, I'm obssess with it too, especially about the guy named Larva... *squeals* HE'S SSSOOOO HHHHHOOOOOOOOTTTTTTTT!!!! You really should see his pictures. You can down load it from box torrents. com, don't mind the spaces, I have to tape it like that or it might not come out. Thanks for also answering my question, my eyes are killing me, it's freaking 2:16 am, damn, no glasses on either, now I'm pissed. I got to go to the picnic too, aaaahhhhhhhhh!! *Pulls her hair out* darn it all to heck!!! At this rate I'm never gonig to get slep. Thanks again though, really look forwards to the another chapter from my favorite author!! ^_^
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From ANON - animegirl007 on July 10, 2005
WHAT'S UP WITH YOU????!!!!! ARE YOU WORKING ON COFFEE FUMES OR WHAT !!!!!!!!!! You have put up a chapter up a day!!! That's amazing!!! I'm not complaining ...I'm just in awe of you!!!!!! Sweet chapter....the tear that Sesshomaru shed because of Rin that was so sweet!!!!!! I can't wait to see what the baby looks like and how many will be???? Until next time.........
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