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From ANON - Vanessa on July 10, 2005
Great sad chapter. Poor Sesshoumaru. I still love him... Oh well. Continue to update okay. This little girl or guy are really going to be like his father. Almost Inuyasha's feet. Not the same thats why I said almost. Well keep writing because it will be great.
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From ANON - animegirl007 on July 09, 2005
Thank you...thank you....thank you....for giving me the best laugh I had in a long time!!!!! I was cracking up when Kimiko thought she was better than Sesshomaru only to be killed!!!!!!!! I was I could have been a cheerleader on the sidelines yellling...." YOU'RE GOING TO DIE BITCH!!!! YOU'RE GOING TO DIE!!!" I LOVED IT!!!!!!!... But, I wouldn't believe she's dead until Sesshomaru holds her skill in his hand... And Rin having Sessy baby.....Yea!!!!!! but she runaway...just keep her safe until he find her.....please!!!!!

Now, I believe she should have twins...a boy and a girl. Sesshomaru is a dog demon, and dogs have litters....Now, for the names that you are suggesting I like Karaina and Jouta. But, I would also like to suggest some names "Tani" meaning valley, sweetheart, youth , and bull that charges randomly( the girl being more like Sesshomaru, and "Yasuo" meaning peaceful one( the boy being a little more like Rin)

And just one more minor thing...you are spelling Sesshomaru name wtih two u's there's only one................So, until next time I'll be waiting ...........keep it up....
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From ANON - Anon on July 09, 2005
Misogynist much?
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From ANON - Vanessa on July 09, 2005
Yup here I am again. Poor Rin : ( Well I know it wil turn for the best. Hopefully I see the characters fro the original gang appear. A half demon sun. Wow he would look hot! Fro the names I was thinking of eather Hikaru or Haruo. I actually have one you can use if you want and it's a boy. Oukan. Well keep writing because I wonder what will Sesshoumaru do when the babay is older. Hope is a boy, but oh well is your choice right? Muah
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From ANON - Ren on July 09, 2005
Tee hee hee, since you're interested, you see, whores in my school always come to school either overly dressed, or under dressed, I mean really, flashing your body like that isn't doing any good for your grades, unless you're sleeping with the teacher...but that's too freaky, because I'm sure they're not that old yet to do that. *Shudders* Just thinking about it freaks me out...Tee hee hee, it's funny you know, how they dress, all those flashy clothes, geez, you're going to school to LEARN, NOT a club to have fun, NOT to get males drooling on you, and ESPECIALLY NOT show off as though you're life depended on it. I mean really, who cares if you're rich, with all your great clothes and things, who cares if you are poor, with barely nothing at all, because I don't. I really don't care about any of that stuff, I live my life not depending on that type of stuff, that is why PEOPLE actually likes me, guys and girls alike, at the same time hates me...Tee hee hee, because I dress like guys with female mannerism and actually have a brain that is beyond anything they can ever match up to.

Geez, I'll never understand, in my school, it's like everything has to be, top class, low class, or weird and unusual, which is totally not the case, right? You go to the same school, learn the same things, do and participate in mostly everything together, so why do you have to exagerate the whole classes and levels you are. It makes no sense to me, whores in my school thinks they are top class, *snickers like an idiot while tapping on her table* which is totally not the case. They're only top class because their willingness to give out pleasure to all whom they deem worthy, like in teh story, A Deeper Look, the line, they who are a playground for all those whom they deem worthy. I loved that line, based on Sesshoumaru's point of view on Rin.

You know something, I realize I think I like your lemons, blunt, short and to the point, not many are like that anymore, has to be too detailed, too freaky, or just VERY creative, I mean really, whip cream and all...*goosebumps* I don't think my husband and I will have such type of CREATIVITY, since I'm rather a blunt, cold, calcutive, and wise person. It's nice reading about them though, my sister told me when I have a house, or my own dorm, she's going to come with her husband and have sex in my bathroom. *Wrinkle her nose in disgust* she's so weird, I told her if I'm in a dorm and she does that when my room mate in with me, I'll die of embarrassment, and if it's my house, I'll break the door down and kick both her and her boyfriend out of my house with no clothes what so ever to show them what embarrassment really means.

Tee hee hee, I loved the face she showed me then, it was priceless...lol, it's fun making fun my my sisters, I win because when I argue I always keep a cheery dementor up, it's like I'm impossible to tick off when that happens. My sisters goes into rage and once my younger sister broke down crying telling me how 'unsensitive' I am, I really don't care, though, she didn't live my life, tee hee hee, so why waste my breath explaining what is just a waste of breath if she's not willing to change. She's young and will not understand me as well as I do her, nor will my older sister due to the fact she's head over heels for some guy in Maine, so I dont' rely on them as much anymore. I'm always putting on a act to make my mother happy and that's all that matters to me.

You know I really would like the child to be a boy, his name could be Tenshi (angel) or Yuki (Snow) would be nice if they look like their father. Or the following names would be good to, Hiroshi (Generous) if like thiskind mother Rin, Kiyoshi (Quiet) if like his quiet personality. Isamu (Bravery), Kyo (Proud), Tegowai (Tough), Yasashiku (Gentle, Polite).

If you want a girl then I have no objections, like Gin (Silvery) if like her father's appearance, Yumi (beauty) would be nice too if she resembled her father, Kaori (fragrant beautiful child) cute name, Aiko (beloved one, little love), Ai (love), Kimi (whe who is without equal) powerful name if you ask me, Mai (brightness), Kaiya (forgiveness), Akina (spring flower), Nozomi (hope), and Takara (Treasure, Precisou object).

I really never liked picking one if I had a choice, I would pick TWO!!! ^_^ I think twins would be nice, then you wouldn't have to go through such frustration becuse you have either one of each and one of each name you like, or two of each gender and would be able to pick your favorite name. I di that in my story in fifth grade, Tee hee hee, I like Hideaki and Akemi, Since both means bright, Hideaki has excellent and bright, while Akemi means Brigth and beautiful, I think it's a great pair name. Suki and Yuki would be nice to, and it rthyms, Suki means beloved, Yuki means snow as you know.

Other than taht, great story, thoroughly enjoyed it, thanks fo rhte short update, keep up the incredible work, hope you are not bothered by my long review, continue with your great and wonderful grammar and vocabulary, still rooting for you, and one more thing...

Question: How long was Sesshoumaru in battle?

A woman never gets her pregnancy symptoms until 2-3 months later, that's all...a litle confustion...oh yes, I want to know what happens to Kimiko's body, Tee hee hee, you can grind her bones and throw it in the hottest fires of magma of the earth, or take her bones and give it to the dogs to eat...how ironic that would be...tee hee hee, or you can make her live and watch helplessly as Sesshoumaru takes Rin as his new and improved mate and with their child. The satisfaction in that would be great, for me at least, I'm pretty sure many others would want her to suffer more than just her flesh being ripped off her body. Tee he hee, other than that, GREAT WORK!!! ^_^ LOOOOVVVEEE IT!!! CONTINUE AGAIN SOON, LOOKING FORWARDS TO IT, OYASUMI NASI, AND HOPE YOU HAVE A GOOD EVENING....
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From ANON - Kat on July 09, 2005
WOW!!! good work!!!
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From ANON - bob on July 09, 2005
i really liked that story and i'm glad i'm not the only 1 who goes around singing the oscar mayer theme song but please continue with the story, and for some reason i just think it should be a boy
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From ANON - anonn on July 08, 2005
i liiike ! a nice little backrub and some angst..l.. good job
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From ANON - Ren on July 08, 2005
Forgot, still checking for your updates, tee hee hee, and I'm still rooting for you, I'm such an idiot too, and don't worry if you act funny, I'm a mainic at heart, tee hee hee, still rooting your you, oh yes, and tell your other reviewers that I am happy to know others support great work when they see one. And to your other fan, anime-san, I agree wtih you, I hope Sesshoumaru gets some happiness in Rin's arms as well, and like you, I am waiting for that moment, I hope Sesshoumaru-sama, gives her the embarrassment of her life...tee hee hee, he did once already, but not in front of others...hopes he does though. Geez, Kimiko is really stupid if she doesn't noticed Sesshoumaru's attraction to Rin, I like how you make her an idiot, out of all the stories I read, this one is the most hilarious, and most, greatest one so far. Tee hee hee, I've read countles of Sesshoumaru and Rin fanfictions, and some have it where he is with a mate or even with kids, but hey in they end, the chick Rin gets him to herself. She's so nice, it's god you made her aggressive in this story in a way, you know when she was about to berate Kimiko for what a whore she was. Tee hee hee, I like it a lot, hope you update again soon, still rooting for YOU!!!! ^_^ Keep it up!!! Doing great!!! And what's up with Newfan's challenge???
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From ANON - Ren on July 08, 2005
Forgot, still checking for your updates, tee hee hee, and I'm still rooting for you, I'm such an idiot too, and don't worry if you act funny, I'm a mainic at heart, tee hee hee, still rooting your you, oh yes, and tell your other reviewers that I am happy to know others support great work when they see one. And to your other fan, anime-san, I agree wtih you, I hope Sesshoumaru gets some happiness in Rin's arms as well, and like you, I am waiting for that moment, I hope Sesshoumaru-sama, gives her the embarrassment of her life...tee hee hee, he did once already, but not in front of others...hopes he does though. Geez, Kimiko is really stupid if she doesn't noticed Sesshoumaru's attraction to Rin, I like how you make her an idiot, out of all the stories I read, this one is the most hilarious, and most, greatest one so far. Tee hee hee, I've read countles of Sesshoumaru and Rin fanfictions, and some have it where he is with a mate or even with kids, but hey in they end, the chick Rin gets him to herself. She's so nice, it's god you made her aggressive in this story in a way, you know when she was about to berate Kimiko for what a whore she was. Tee hee hee, I like it a lot, hope you update again soon, still rooting for YOU!!!! ^_^ Keep it up!!! Doing great!!! And what's up with Newfan's challenge???
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From ANON - Ren on July 08, 2005
Tee hee hee, it's nice to know I can help, tee hee hee, I guess I got you worked up, huh? Well let me tell you this one time in my life, this guy came up to me and told to get out of his so-called 'territory' because I as a girl... and man was I angry, I practically fumed iwth outrage, with that, I then told himi to 'prove' to me it's his territory. You should have saw the look on his face, it was priceless...*cracks up like an idiot and rolls on the floor laughing* He looked so surprised, scared, nervous and everything, I never saw someone's face changed so fast. ^_^ that taught him, his mother happened to hear it too, she yelled at him and apologized to me. Tee hee hee, that was when I was 8 I think, yea it was, geez, men are so stupid some times.

Just to make this a comic, you know women can be so stupid too, not that I'm trying to offend anyone here, I'm a woman too, but some times, it's not only the males that are so lustful. Did you know, 75% of my class is girls and more than half of them was either pregnant before, or is having at the moment. None of them is a virgin either, I find that disgusting, I'm only in what 10th grade, and their already this lustful, I'm pretty sure their husband will enjoy them. But for me, that is nasty...ewwww *squeals like a girl* and some girls I heard talking was talking about how 'big' their man is...I thought is was hilarious, the teachers heard too, and was talking abd about them...Tee hee hee. It's funny what happens in my school, you know something else, I heard some guys say, "Girls are easy..."

I nearly roared out loud and yelled, "YOU SICK, DISGUSTING, NO GOOD, PREVERT, GOOD FOR NOTHING, MALE!!! IF YOU WERE HALF THE MAN YOU WISHED YOU WERE, YOU WOULDN'T SAY THAT BECAUSE 1) FEMALES YOU CLAIM IS EASY, ARE NOTHING BUT WHORES OR WANNA BES. 2) YOU'RE JUSTING TRYING TO BE A STUPID PRICK WHO ISN'T BETTER THAN ALL THE OTHER PIMPS IN THIS ROOM. 3) YOU DON'T HAVE ENOUGH BRAINS TO MATCH UP TO THIS, 'EASY' GIRL, SO YOU COVER IT UP TO SAY THAT I'M EASY, WHICH I'LL TELL YOU NOW....NO ONE...AND I MEAN "NO ONE" WILL EVER TOUCH ME UNLESS I PERMIT IT. OTHERWISE I WILL BREAK THEIR BONES, TEAR THEM LIMB FROM LIMB AND RIP OFF THEIR BALLS SO THEY WILL NEVER BE ABLE TO PROCREATE UNTIL THEIR NEXT LIFETIME!!!! AND LET ME TELL YOU THIS NOW, EVERYONE IN THIS ROOM IS NOT EVEN HALF AS DESCENT AS ME IN THIS ROOM, YOU ARE ALL GOOD FOR NOTHINGS TAHT SI TRYING SO HARD TO FIT IN YOU ARE WILLING TO CARRY BAD WORDS BEHIND YOUR BACKS. YOU'RE SO CALLED FRIENDSDITCH, USE AND TALK CRAP ABOUT YOU AND YOU IDIOTS BRUSH IT OFF. EVEN IS THEY ARE CALLING YOU WHORES BEHIND YOUR BACKS, YOU ALL ARE NOT EVEN HUMAN, DAMN IT ALL (PARDON MY LANGUAGE) YOU ALL ARE ANIMALS THAT THE TEACHERS SAY YOU ARE! ALL YOU DO IS GIVE INTO INSTINCT, TO BE LUSTFUL, AND PROCREATE EVERY CHANCE YOU GET, YOU ARE NOTHING BUT THAT, DISGUSTING NO GOOD TO THE COMMUNITY, LOWLY ANIMALS WHO CAN'T BEHAVE EVEN IF THEIR LIFE DEPENDS ON IT...." Catchs my breath, "IF I WAS YOUR MOTHER AND FATHER, I'LL DIE OF SHAME, BUT HTEN AGAIN, PARENTS ARE IDOTS TOO, SINCE YOU ALL ARE ACTING AS SUCH ANIMALS, HUMP, THIS IS A WASTE OF MY BREATH..."

Arigato, (which means thank you) for the update, I really liked the chapter, triggered a lot of funny things in my mind, but yea, interesting and I love it, keep up teh great work, if you think this review is funny, I'll tell you more, I have countless of them up my sleeve, tee hee hee, hope you have a good night rest...Oyasumi nasi...^_^
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From ANON - animegirl007 on July 08, 2005
Yes, it is fun hating her!!!!!! Another great chapter....I'll be there for you when you update so at least you know you will always get a review from me......update soon
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From ANON - Vanessa on July 08, 2005
I like that Rin has guts. I would pist of too at my husband if he were sleeping with my servants. Well Keep writing. I do enjoy this story alot. It is speacial in someway. Never mind me. I am just a freak. : )
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From ANON - Blackat on July 07, 2005
Wonderful i loved it please hurry and finish!!!!!!
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From ANON - animegirl007 on July 07, 2005
It looks much better visually and the story content......."OUTSTANDING!!!!!!" You brought out so much more of the characters descriptions...good job...good job....Now the Sessy mate( Sorry I can't remember her name yet) What a hoe!!!!! Did she forgot that Sesshomaru is a dog demon??? and he will smell the scent of that servant on her???? whether he cares for her or not ...you show my baby respect!!! I hope you will make Sesshomaru do something to her, so she will remember that one truth......You made it so easy for me to hate her more.....keep it coming....I can't wait until Sesshomaru finds real joy in Rin's arms.....I'll be waiting........
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