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By : Aleke

From on July 30, 2008
I just finished reading all your chapters so far. Your story is really good. I can't wait to find out what happens next. nara and his horrible tricks. hope sessho really doesn't do something stupid but who could blame him. I like the whole tear drop on their wrists thing connecting sessho with Kags. Waiting patiently for your next update. I might not when it is though it's hard for me to keep track of stories on here, since there are no alerts like on fanfiction.net. I write down the name of your story and check back ever so often.
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From LadyHoshi on July 02, 2008
I've missed your writing so bad. I know real life gets in the way alot but even small chapters would be nice.

and aff is so mean, Everytime I try looking up this story by the title it won't find it. I had to go thru over 20 something pages of fics to find it again.

If you are writing somewhere else let us know.
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From ANON - Frimmy on November 09, 2006
DUDE.
WOAH.
LIKE.
YOU.
ARE.
ALIVE.
DURRRRRRRRRRRRR.
(will leave a more coherent review when this information properly goes through my central nervous system and hits the squeeing-fangirl nerve)
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From ANON - lady Hoshi on October 15, 2006
YEAH!!!!! this is such great news. I have missed you and your story.
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From ANON - Frimmy on August 15, 2006
so you'll be glad to know i'm not dead. just...absent. and the fact that aff was being baka and weird, and i couldn't find your story again... :(

anyhoo, lemme know if you're still alive k? because for all i know you've been eaten by a monster cricket? then what would i do?

Frimmsical.
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From ANON - Frimm on February 05, 2006
guess who?????
yes, you have me to blame for sara's review.
aren't you glad? i'm recruiting readers!!!

HEDGIE: glad to see i provide amuesment, and when else will i read it? class is the best time, since i have nothing better to do. and most of the recent updated aren't THAT bad.
website? i can't even do html, nevermind a website. but if get smart, you will be the first to know. i do have a livejournal though...kinda the same thing.

back to aleke. (HA! I CAN PRONOUNCE YOU'RE NAME!!!!!!!)
anyways, i'm NOT RABID!!!! i had my rabies shot already. so be scared not. i'm only hungry. for fresh author meat. update dammit!
hedgie here has considered a restraining order, even though we live far. distance is nothing.
i will hunt you down.
with my shnoz.
(figure that one out and i will retract all previous death threats)
now i have to go eat supper. i could be wrong, but i think we're having chicken. pineapple and apricot pizza, mom's concoction. feel free to call the health control department.
must be going, if i die, i'll let you know.
Frimsey
(I SEE YOU HEDGIE!!!!)
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From ANON - Sara on February 05, 2006
I've not read this fic but I am sure it's just awesome!

I am here reviewing the impeciable one and only Frim. Her crazy reviews have long overtaken the fic and honestly I just come here to read them.
Frim you crazed stalking Frimmster nut you.
You should have your own website!
And stop reading this questionable site in class you shameless girl.

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW......

And author lady...update soon cause Frim over here is foaming..*holds back crazed Frim*
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From ANON - Frimm on February 05, 2006
update.
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From ANON - Frimmy on January 31, 2006
ooh, and this does mean you are forgiven.
for now.
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From ANON - Frimmy on January 31, 2006
gurgle pop.
i'm bored. so i'm going to review. again. because i said i was in my latest death threat review. aren't i the coolest.
half day yesterday. went to a mad-study session with my friends, and ACTUALLY STUDIED! i was blown away. that's the very first time that has EVER happened. ooh, and i passes that test today.
half-day today. did nothing. really, BUT i MADE IT TO THE PUBLIC SPEAKING FINALS!!!! and watched the magic school bus in biology. that's how crazy my teachers are. soo fun. they went inside Ralphies throat.
no school tomorrow. thank god. i can sleep all day again. funfun.
report cards on Friday. i for sure failed everything. play practise on Sunday. i have to kiss my worst enemy. well technically, i don't have to kisskiss him, and he isn't my WORST enemy, but still. it's on the cheek, and it's very akward, since he has a girlfriend, and i really don't like him. i want to seriously injure the play director for pairing me up with him. just because we're both short. grr.....
so i get to take out my misplaced agression on you dahhling! UPDATE!!!!!!! add some spice to my boringo life. i'm going bonkers just thinking about it...gah.
blah and bleh.
fazz.
dooddy-trun
gersh....(just for kicks)
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umm....i danced for joy when kikyou died? and that's all i have to say.
good day.
Frimmy
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From ANON - Frimmy on January 24, 2006
RARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGG!!!!
i get back from my month-long trip and wait with bated breath for an update! but noooooo, of course not, Aleke never updates.
ever.
except on those rare occasions when she does.
hmph.
*pouts*
when i'm in a better mood maybe i'll leave a nicer note.
MAYBE.

poopey-head.

stupid baboon.

renkotsu.

Kikyou

okay that was out of hand, i'm sorry. i should never have called you by the name of the bigget bitch in hell. i apologize.
but just for calling you kikyou.
update.

Frimmy
(is still mad)
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From ANON - Frimmy on January 08, 2006
gurglefraster.
here i am, half way across the world from my usual habitation, and STILL checking for updates and guess what. none. how long was that snow day MAY I ASK!!
because unless it was completely taken up by either a random family activity (i.e being dragged off by whoever to do something probably boring with your parents, siblings etc.) or making out with your secret crush for two years then i would think you'd have something to post right now.
but NO!
so i'm taking it was one of the two above options, and i would like to take this moment...rather, review, to either console you for the loss of precious time or congratulate you on your recent aquirment of a boyfriend-thing. either or.
or you could have just been lazy, in which case, i shall come over and have amputate several body parts, yada yada yada. you know the drill. really, i'm getting sick or the whole update or die shpiel. just updating would make it easier on my poor abused fingers then making them type up death threats to those who don't. think of the caterpillars! and the fuzzy fruit flies!

yes i am perfectly aware that made positively no sense. i pride myself on my random-osity. dissage will be punished with severe fossil attacks.

okay, leaving you alone now.
guess why:
a) because i feel bad about taking up your valuable time by sending you useless reviews giving you unpleasant pictures and unimaginable mental pain.
b) because my sister and cousin (whom i am babysitting) have woken up and decided to torch the house.
c) because my laptop batterie is about to die.
d) because i have better things to do.
e) part of my new Year's resolutions was to not issue death threats to lazy authors
or f) because i'm feeling contrary and will offer up as a valid answer: because i feel like it.

enjoy your life, however short it may seem, it's long enough for everyone who knows you! muahahahahah. we all wish you were dead. only not really. because then run wouldn't get updated and i would lose my quasi-separated-at-birth-twin-person.
so actually, don't die. just update.

Frimmy

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From ANON - fluffylover1978 on December 17, 2005
I love this so far. Please update soon.
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From ANON - Frimmy on December 10, 2005
ahem.
cofcof.
you're late.
i'd write more, but i have to pack.
*taps watch*
we're waiting!!!!
Frimmy
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From ANON - Frimmy on December 09, 2005
I'M BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACCCCCCCCCCCCCKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ok, now where was i?
oh yes.
see, during my loverly piano lesson, i had the chance to think up a few ides for you. see, theory is so horribly boring, that i always manage to feel extremely tired, even if i arrive there bouncing off the walls. which was the case (ALEKE ALEKE ALEKE!!!!)
and the old person smell didn't help naught.
nee ways, so:
1) Sesshoumaru is alone now. he thinks Rin is dead, has killed Jaken, and doesn't have any one else tagging along. so truthfully, he doesn't have anyone to protect. what happens if he meets inu yasha, and get's injured again, like he did the first time they fought and he didn't have anyone to protect. Inu Yasha did, and that boosted his power, so if put in the same situation, Sesshoumaru might be wounded again. and if he goes to recuperate, how cool would it be if the twins found him, and nursed him back to health, much like Rin did in the real InuYasha. eventually, Rin would have no idea, since she wouldn't be able to smell or sense sess on her kids, and sesshy would probably be too injured to smell the pups at first.
also, it could take a while to find Inu Yasha, since of course, he will have to go after Naraku on the way there. what might happen is that together they kick Naraku's butt, then they fight, then sess get's wounded, etc. etc.
also, by then, the pups should be bigger, afterall, they age faster then humans, but i bet that it has something to do with the swords or the presents that Sango left them right?
oh i am too cool.
anyways, voila, a great idead.
and just in case that wasn't enough, i shall dd more to this review so your brain juices will get moving faster. first off, i still have to give you my exam rant:
so. i have a theory exam tomorrow.
TOMORROW!!!!!!
THEORY!!!!!!!!!
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaggggggggggggggggghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
not only is theory the most boringest thing in the entire world, it is insanely hard and complicated, and i have to do an exam. thing is, on my practise exams, with my notes and references, i have gotten an average of 78-79. not bad huh? well, my teacher expects me to get over 90. personally, i think she's finally lost it, but that's just my opinion. all i really know is that there is NO WAY IN HEAVEN OR BARNEY'S KIDNEYS THAT THAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN.
no way. so now i must face her wrath for not getting over 90. for an old person, she is really scary.
andyways, the other thing is that it is at ten in the morning. which means i have to get up at eight.
ON A WEEKEND!!!
kill me now please.
oh, and since it's going to be done so early, i will for sure fall asleep in the exam room, and waste half my time dreaming. that's what i did last time.
so, the reason i am telling you this is because chances are i am not going to live to see another chapter of this story published, or i will be grounded until i am seventy nine for not getting over 90. so, make it long! and good!
YAY!!!
okay, moving on.
ALEKE ALEKE ALEKE ALEKE ALEKE ALEKE ALEKE ALEKE ALEKE ALEKE ALEKE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA (yes, i am still saying that...)
and my family ISN'T HERE!!!
which means i can say as loud and as many times as i want. YAY!!!
yeah, see, before i left, i wrote this note to my dad syaing how i didn't elop with my beloved professor Kringle-finch who is twenty four years older then me to kazhakistan, and was really just at my piano teacher's place. and then, before i left, i called home and left a message saying how i was going to come home now, at (gave the precise time) and not to worry because i hadn't been eaten by man-mauling shrimps under the sewer gratings. or kidnapped by rabid monkeys.
but when i got home, what do you know, there was no one there. so now i have to go erase/burn/destroy all evidence of my notes so my 'rents don't freak out.
ahhh........yes, the joys of over-protective parents. they'll believe anything.
so i must bid thee adieu, and leave to prevent groundation for the next five months.
toodloo.
FRIMMY!!!!
(ALEKE ALEKE ALEKE ALEKE ALEKE)
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