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Reviews for Battle for my Heart

By : Kougaschild
  • From ANON - anon on September 19, 2005
    actually, this is the first story of yours that i've bothered to review. you have another 'fan' i suppose. and, by the way, there's a difference between making a lot of mistakes and being functionally illiterate.
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  • From ANON - kogasbabe on September 19, 2005
    wow, some people dont take criticism well.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 18, 2005
    Miroku/Sango, Inuyasha/Ayame
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  • From Kougaschild on September 18, 2005
    Anon i have seen you i almost all the stories i have written and you have said stuff like that. Lisen dude I dont have to spell all the words correct and its my stur so BACK OFF. because alot of ppl make mistakes.
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  • From ANON - anon on September 18, 2005
    sorry, the story is choppy and disorganized at best. the spelling is horrible, and i'm not really seeing much of a point. PLEASE get a beta. and it wouldnt hurt if the chapters were more than a few sentences long.
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  • From ANON - emi on July 17, 2005
    make ur chapters longer plez... update or die! jk
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  • From ANON - tash922 on July 11, 2005
    wow i loved it its an intersing story but ummm.... i don't mean to critec ur work but ur narrating could use some work
    try to dramaditsize discrbe to picture more clearly ... i hope that help i still think ur doing amazing well please updtae soon ^.^
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  • From ANON - Everqueen on July 11, 2005
    Well, Inuyasha is such a jerk. HEHE, awe, Kouga was so sweet to Shippou, me likey. YAY
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  • From ANON - Everqueen on July 10, 2005
    Ah, you are going to have Kouga give up his shards before the fight? I always see him helping in that fight and then giving up the shards (I think he would without a fuss, except maybe to be the last to give it up.) So, shippou views Kouga as a father figure eh? That's cool. Kagome and Kouga as parent figures, I like where this is heading. Oh and you are doing an amazing job on Inuyasha's speech. Keep it up, can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Everqueen on July 08, 2005
    I hope that's just the summary, if it is, then it should be good. Hope the real story comes up soon.
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