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Reviews for Help me out

By : Leilani
  • From ANON - Beth on July 27, 2006
    Hey this was an awesome story, I really want you to finish it no matter wat anyone else says, only because techncally this is your baby, because you spent your time righting it and who gives a flying monkey butt if its no realistic!
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  • From xxPuppyEarsxx on January 13, 2006
    this was very well done. a few spelling mistakes here and there but overall it was really good.
    it was a bit awkward how inuyasha and kagome had sex right after her being raped.
    thats the only part that i didnt really think fit in with the fic being realistic.
    either way, i really enjoyed it. thanks for giving me something to read ^_^
    and i hope your friend is okay, i send you many wishes!
    - Diana
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  • From ANON - chubbers on November 27, 2005
    THATS CRAP! dont EVER let people make you think your work is not good enought to where you delete it! screw what they say... and THANK GOD you dont know everything about having a baby! if they dont like your work then they can stop reading or skip the chapter...... i loved what you have done and its a shame that you let people talk you into deleting your work. im sorry about what happened to your friend and i hope all goes well :) keep your chin up and your hopes up!
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  • From ANON - WickedSmile on August 17, 2005
    I don't think it's unrealistic, just another take on what could have happened if Inuyasha didn't kill Musso. But some of the things Kagome was yelling weren't things I could picture her saying.
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  • From ANON - Sauratos on August 13, 2005
    what are you talking about? if your friend is in er, you should not be sorry about delaying a stupid story. Your friend is much more important than some words on a screen, and anyone who thinks otherwise should be ashamed of themselves.
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  • From ANON - Yukana on August 08, 2005
    Hi O'm new but it might not ount but me and my friends think you should keep going it is very good and I have read a lot of stories and so far I think that this story could be great you should keep going.From the affn group of editors.
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  • From ANON - jess on August 08, 2005
    i really enjoyed your story i hope tht you update as soon as you can. I am sorry about your friend I hope everything is ok, take your time on the story and help your friend heal, for that is the most importent thing right now

    jess
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  • From ANON - Zelix on August 07, 2005
    I know how you feel... i remember when my grandfather died, i couldn't write anything for a whole month... as soon as i tried, i was just overcome with regret since i missed my last chance of seeing him before he died... the last memory i have of him is a telehone call with my mother telling me he has passed on, i could have been there but i wasn't... to this day, i still regret it, so i know what you feel... at least partially if not fully.
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  • From ANON - lanier on August 07, 2005
    I am very sorry to hear about your friend.. I sincerly hope that she comes through all of this. Will look forward to your update when you are ready. *hugs*

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  • From ANON - Sarah on July 31, 2005
    I loved it. I think the story lines great.
    I hope you do another chapter after this.
    I'm with it 100%
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  • From ANON - Inu-chan on July 26, 2005
    it's a great story! Keep up with the chapters! I'll be looking for them!
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  • From ANON - Cleo on July 25, 2005
    I love this story! It's GREAT! Please update soon, I know you have better things to do, it's just it's so interesting! :)
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  • From ANON - flamina on July 24, 2005
    Pretty good. Hope to see more soon!

    :-)
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  • From ANON - ZEBZ on July 22, 2005
    OKAY- at first i didnt want to read this story- because i read the reviews, and well i hate it when something happens to Kagome. But i finally did read it, and im glad i did- it was well written and suspensful, it was a well written story. Now i didn't read the chapter that you deleted, but i can guess what it was for the most part. I just want to tell you that i did something like that a long time ago, and i let it get the best of me- so i didn't write again for months. Well i guess my point is dont stop cause a stupid mistake gets in your way. KEEP WRITING AND PEOPLE WONT EVEN NOTICE IF YOU DID SCREW UP
    ZEBZ
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  • From ANON - Jessica on July 21, 2005
    Um, I've had 2 children and was wondering why she would be released the next day when hospitals keep you for at least 48 hours, and why they were having sex so soon after having a baby...she would be bleeding for at least 4-6 weeks after having a baby, most likely had stitches, and would be REALLY SORE!!! Think of doing 10,000 sit-ups...that's what your whole body feels like. Not to mention being EXHAUSTED! Goodness, I did the birth process the natural way and it was not easy, and certainly not without pain. I do like the story, but wished that the info was more realistic. Thank you and good job otherwise.
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