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Reviews for Hate

By : Hrtofdrkns
  • From ANON - GV on September 07, 2005
    all in all a happy ending
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  • From ANON - Kursk on September 07, 2005
    Hey, your writing format seemed to change! On your last chapter, the first half was comprised of good sized-paragraphs, not the usual, single sentences. This is good - apply this tactic to all preceding chapters and whamu, everything will look much better.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 07, 2005
    Hey, you forgot a line...

    And we shall rule the galaxy as rapist and son.
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  • From ANON - penpaninu on September 07, 2005
    If you were going for a shock value, I think you got it ^_^ Very uhm...different? And gory. I confess I only skimmed your work as it was too flashy for my virgin eyes (laugh) I really don't know what else to say.... Shocking.
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  • From ANON - Me who hate you all on September 07, 2005
    Well...I just learnt one thing in this AFF...The more violence ..crazier the story...the more readers you got. It doesn't matter about the story is good or bad. What they want just the fucking and raping business. Inuyasha is some mediator only unfortunately...in your story. No wonder I found only a few talented and good writer in here. You may be feel you got the talent...but you also got the talent to brainwash all the reader who read your story to become a rapist. It's aint funny! Hey...that's your right as Author same as my right as reviewer...
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  • From ANON - arbute on September 07, 2005
    Alrighty, in response to the "critical acclaim" section... I think we should all remember that A: the author can write whatever the hell she wants, and the story is in NO WAY misrepresented by the summary, and that B: the point of this story, (as I've understood it) is that the author is trying to write an outlandish/dirty/crazy/dark plot. She has succeeded. While I can't say I agree with the actions of the characters or that I even TRY to contemplate the veracity of the story line, it's her prerogative to do what she wants with the characters as long as it's understood that Rumiko Takahashi owns them. Everyone who cannot understand the concept of literary freedom, (even when you might find the subject matter repulsive), needs to look more carefully at what they're reading before they begin.
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  • From ANON - Mahromi on September 06, 2005
    And ANOTHER thing! I just thought of this. Why is everyone getting so mad when it's just a fic? It's not like it's happening in the show or anything..
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  • From ANON - Tucker on September 06, 2005
    Whoever Kiyana Va Sala is, I thought you might like to know I am your personal fan. I just
    loved your 5 Myths of Life. But back to the story, it was truly beautiful in a dark sick way. Please do write more
    but with slightly less descriptive gore.
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  • From ANON - Tucker on September 06, 2005
    It was truly wonderful writing. Just please the next time you write, make it slightly less sadistic.
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  • From ANON - Mahromi on September 06, 2005
    Hey, man. Nice! It's so nice that you just take all those bad reveiws. If they were for one of my fics, I probably would have cried. xD;; But yeah, I'm sure you didn't expect evvvveryone to like it. But it's good, and if people don't like it.. they shouldn't read it. Get over it.
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  • From ANON - joy on September 06, 2005
    waaaaaa me want more syory
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  • From ANON - Sanguine on September 06, 2005
    Did you actually think you could post something this offensive and not get any negative feedback? Do you believe that your writing is so brilliant and infalliable that you are somehow exempt from criticism? You think THIS is resistance?! I should report you to GAFF, my whiny friend. Try countering your less-than-satisfied reviewers' points instead of starting a flame war. Would it kill you to ATTEMPT to write Inuyasha and company in character instead of petulantly mocking anyone with useful comments? Personally, I'd be worried that my fic had attracted that many sickos. Fans of this story, you want to explain exactly what's so wonderfully original and well-developed about this story? Random violence does not equal good dark!fic. There's nothing remotely appealing about "Hate" except pure shock value. It's extremely formulatic, predictable, shallow, and quite frankly, BORING.

    "Thank you. That's exactly what I was going for." So in other words, you weren't at all interested in improving your skills as a writer, entertaining fellow fans, or exploring a unique concept. Nah, you just wanted to piss people off. And maybe I missed something, but it looks like you made some of those flames up yourself.
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  • From ANON - Inferno Of Hell on September 05, 2005
    you sick son of a bitch you people are fucking crazy you have no sence this is just wrong
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  • From ANON - cerberus on September 05, 2005
    fic rocks. not as hentai, but as a good dark gothic story, this is the best I have seen on the internet. Inuyasha remindes me a lot of lestat, with kohaku, cept truly evil.
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  • From ANON - Kursk on September 05, 2005

    Doesn't anyone think it unjust that this has accumulated 1.26 times the hits and 1.38 times the reviews of Resmiranda's "Tales from the House of the Moon", in less than a third of the time?



    This is an absolute travesty!


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