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By : Hrtofdrkns
  • From ANON - Youkainu obsessed on September 05, 2005
    Despite what others say I love this story!!! Keep up the good work!!!
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  • From ANON - rin136 on September 05, 2005
    Wf this is just stupid! LOL! My side hurts!
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  • From ANON - Inferno Of Hell on September 05, 2005
    !@#$%^&*!@#$%^&#&$^&&%$#@&$^*wtf@^*%@*mother@#&^%*#@^bitch#^$&&%


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  • From ANON - Cuddlefish on September 05, 2005
    I don't know what everyone's complaining about--- I thought that
    it was about freaking time somebody decided to do something like
    this. Too much love, I tell you.

    Cheers.
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  • From ANON - non ya on September 05, 2005
    you are one sick bitch
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  • From ANON - Kyla on September 05, 2005
    this is one of the worst fanfics i've ever read. not only are the characters completely OOC, which you don't even mention in your summary but the dialogue and description is weak and below amateur level at best. and the number of reviews you've gotten does nothing to reflect just how pathetic this story is. i mean the premise is good, inu going over the edge, but the character motivation and plot and reaction of other characters is completely off and implausible. your chapters can't even be considered chapters since you're just stringing along sentences and providing vague descriptions that, to take from what another reviewer said, seem like watered down "manga summaries." im sure that you are a somewhat decent writer and if you focus on actually making a story as opposed to writing things fit for tabloid "shock value" you might have a piece of work that makes sense and isn't utterly disgusting and debase.
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  • From ANON - Kintrada on September 05, 2005
    Forgot in my last review to say, PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
    if you ever have writers block you could have inu come to the future and start slaughtering people, or have kagome escape and find the "future" changed by inuyashas actions in the past. But like I say it is your story, so please keep writing. (wimpers pathetically)
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  • From ANON - Kintrada on September 05, 2005
    I actually think your story is fascinating. I read the complaints people sent you and I honestly wonder why they are so upset. It's your story, if you say so Inu could sprout wings and dance the cha cha.
    and besides there is balance to all things and with the hundereds of "too sweet" stories on here it is to be expected for a truly gruesome fic to pop up.
    the last reason is the way Inuyasha's mood swings it is entirely possible for him to blow a fuse. Besides that I like it becuase I'm a sadistic asshole.

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  • From ANON - DeadMeat on September 05, 2005
    If you ever end this story or stop writing...I will hunt you down and do to you what you did to the characters in this fan fic. NEVER STOP WRITING THIS!!!!,-,';...;',-, keep up the good work :D Have a nice day. XD
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  • From InuGrrrl on September 05, 2005
    Aaaah...I see the well wishers of AFF have graced you with their presence.
    Love your response to it all...classic! ^_^

    I for one LOVE your story, it's original, disturbing and damn addictive.
    Anyone who can come up with something so forceful and bizarre for
    an anime like InuYasha...I tip my hat. I anxiously await the next
    chap and I completely respect you and your freedom of speech/expression.
    I found myself in some AFF crap as well (Not nearly to your degree) so
    I can relate about the overzealous folks. Don't let anything deter you
    -you have fans!

    Ja Ne
    InuGrrrl
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  • From on September 05, 2005
    very good man, give me dog demon blood, and jewel shard and you might as well be writing my biography, well except the ass raping.
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  • From ANON - Spud on September 05, 2005
    Personally, I really enjoy this fic. I like the way you explore the REALLY dark side that nobody knew InuYasha had, and you're pulling us along with it. It's well-written, well-plotted, and simply put, an awesome story. Kudos.
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  • From ANON - Darkwillow. on September 05, 2005
    Goodness. This is about as shocking as month old soda. Actually, the only thing that is shocking about this piece of tripe is the number of favorable reviews it has received.

    Now, are you sure you're old enough to be writing for this site? Your writing seems to suggest not.
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  • From ANON - Kursk on September 05, 2005

    I just don't know about this fic. There is just far too much M/M and OOC going on. Furthermore, the grammar is rough at times. It isn't as bad as some fics, but there are punctuation and capitalization mistakes that I find highly annoying. Also, your writing style feels highly watered-down, too cheaply plastic and stretched out for its own good. The text almost never turns into a decent paragraph, just waddling along from single sentence to single sentence. Worse, the whole thing reads like a manga summary done in the past-tense, so all in all, it just isn't a satisfying story. The whole thing is simply shock appeal turned into text.


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  • From ANON - pyrovash on September 05, 2005
    Dude you FUCKIN rock I like how you made a darker side of inuyasha and I also love how you made sesshomaru beg.Also how you dont care about what people think and no mader what you PS.i am not gay or bi or into rape you are just a really good writer and you rock

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