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Reviews for Making Things Right

By : inufan625
  • From ANON - *lithium88* on August 15, 2005
    *cries while jumping for joy*... and so it's finished. ^_^ great work, as usual. i can't believe it's over thou, this really was one of my most favored stories! glad it ended well, and i'm also glad that u are continuing to write!! *cheers for Inufan* Woo! Loved it! anyway.. haha... before i get emotional or something.. i wanna thank u for posting so often and for writing a great story. haha i wish i could have ur talent! anyway... hmm.. all the stories seem to have kool plots but i guess i would have to go with um.. Escaping Umbra or Emergence! ^_^ anyway, once again Great job!! t.c. can't wait to read more of ur stories!
    -lithium*
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  • From ANON - jules on August 15, 2005
    Ah, I am one of those that read and don't review mainly due to the fact that it seems like every time I review the story is then discontinued (I swear I don't leave nasty reviews)...so, since this one is now finished, I can review :P

    Truly AWESOME story. I adored Inuyasha as he was in this timeline and as a full youkai...had to skip the chapters where he went back to normal (gah! don't see how Kag stands him like that) - lol. Again, this story was AWESOME and the LEMONS juicy :)

    Your frequent updates are appreciated and I sincerely hope you continue to do so. I wanted to vote for Emergence, I always like a good 'Inu needs to realize what he has' story. If you promise not to quit the story, I promise I will review (just don't want other readers to come after me because my reveiws seem to be cursed).


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  • From ANON - @N0nymUS on August 15, 2005
    VERY VERY GOOD
    this by far is the best inuyasha lemon i have read
    and i still havent read all of it

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  • From ANON - Anon on August 15, 2005
    awww i love it that they marriend that way ur story is so intresting and im saddend that its almost finished now that i just found it but as much as i dont want it to finish would u please udate soon^^
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  • From ANON - Mikah on August 14, 2005
    HI there! just found your story today. i loved it! hook, line and sinker.. great story. i've read all 33 chapters and i just have to say, you have done an amazing job! -cheers for Inufan- WOOT! can't wait to read the completion of your marvelous story. til then, adieu! -walks away, still cheering for Inufan- Woot Woot!

    ~mikah~
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  • From ANON - Lithium88 on August 14, 2005
    ....NOOOOO!!! por que!?! i can't believe it's almost over. when i first found this story, i loved it! i couldn't wait for ur updates, but now... it's ending! -_- .. oh well! glad u had fun writing it! i had fun reading! ^_^ great story, as if u need to be told, but i'm telling u again anyway!! can't wait for the 2 last chapters! Hope they're both a great way to conclude this pants-defyingly sweet story! and sry for my impudence, haha i just really liked ur story! anyway, once again great job! t.c. ttyl bye!! ^_^
    lithium*
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  • From ANON - SakuraNeko on August 14, 2005
    O.o ::twitches and swoons::....................
    ::girl pokes at her w/ a naginata:: Vea: Um, this would be a 'please update soon'...... I think..........
    @.@ ::twitching on the floor::

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  • From ANON - gina on August 13, 2005
    i didn't finish sorry 'bout that too.. well ok OMG!!! your story is amzaing!! really please i can't wait for more!!!! i love it!!!! =)

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  • From ANON - gina on August 13, 2005
    ok first i have to say sorry, i didnt' read and review as i went along. i found your story late.. and read all the way through!!! OMG!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - lithium88 on August 12, 2005
    sneaky.. sneaky... not really, hah. i'm just really oblivious and at the same time, an overthinker. so the youkai she helped wasn't kousotsu... oh well! ^_^ sad that the old , shy, pouty inuyasha left, but i'm glad that the one from before has returned. boy.. was chpt. 27 a glass full of Lemonade. haha. anyway... glad that u're gonna keep updating everyday til ur story is complete! *tear* thou i can't believe it's gonna be over in... 8 chapters!! *sobs* por que?! sry.. hyper, anyway.. no dice, can't wait to read how this all wraps up! t.c. , later!
    lith*
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  • From ANON - AmberEyez on August 12, 2005
    o_O blink - lemons lovely lemons - and a good plot line, too. nice development / continuation. more please !
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  • From ANON - HMPrune on August 12, 2005
    I am duly ashamed - I have been following this story avidly, but have yet to leave a review... Sorry.

    This is a really interesting premise - canon, yet not quite, AU, but not really. Somehow you have managed to write it well, keep it interesting and keep the characters true to themselves. You've also kept track of a lot of different threads and made it all consistent.

    I really thought that you might have missed something when Inuyasha (now without his modern memories) said something to Kagome about Kouga - but then you explained it. Amazing!

    Anyway - I'll be sure to review from now on - great story - wonderful updating (for which I truly thank you!) Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - lithium88 on August 11, 2005
    hi ... again! ^_^ anyway finished reading chpts 24-25. sweetness! and i bet.. just bet that the youkai she helped is ..kousotsu... but maybe not.. anywyay it's great that u're updating so often!! ttyl, t.c. bye!!
    lith*
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  • From ANON - lithium88 on August 11, 2005
    *sobs* that's soo nice!!! no one's ever dedicated a chapter to me!!!! but i didn't do it for any dedications, i love ur story!!!!!! it's so great, and ur writing style is fantastic!! ^_^ glad i could at least give u some reassurance that this is a good story, thou i doubt u need any!! anyway.. sry i didn't review earlier.. had lots of errands and stuff... i just finished reading chpt's 21-23! it's so awesome!! i felt bad for kagome, but u did a great job portraying inuyasha as someone who is rather shy with expressing emotions in public. it fits his character well, it's good to kno that thou he's a 'tough hanyou', a shy, emotional side is hidden somewhere in there!! hope u continue updating!!!!!! til then, t.c. *hugs* bye!
    lith*
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  • From ANON - AmberEyez on August 10, 2005
    Glad you added more ! I wasn't quite sure where this was going, but it's been getting more and more interesting as you develop it -
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