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Reviews for Who are you?

By : HellsAngel19
  • From ANON - RAVEN on September 01, 2005
    iS IT OK IF WE ANSWER UR QUESTIONS IN REVIEWs?
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  • From ANON - Raven on August 31, 2005
    Hey girl its me again!! Your story is just getting better and better! I can't believe u made Sesshomarou act romantic (lol) but that was really cool. Anywayz review pretty please with sugar on top!!
    P.S. Is Amaris goin to be reincarnated?
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  • From ANON - Raven on August 05, 2005
    Your story is amazing!! I really hope u get a chance to finish it cuz its awesome! Oh and wats a beta reader? If u need one maybe i can be one if u want and dont already have one. Well keep writing. Your story is....too good for words!
    Sayonnara!
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  • From ANON - GothycCoalChambr on July 29, 2005
    interesting story, so Amaris is russian? can't wait to read the next chapter, keep up the good work. oh and if you're still looking for a beta i'll happily do it. i haven't beta-ed anything in awhile so i have lots of time to beta. just drop me an email and let me know.
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  • From ANON - Kagome on July 28, 2005
    Love your story can't wait for next chappie
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  • From ANON - Gyousei on July 16, 2005
    I think its cute the way InuYasha first thinks of her as a pet, 'can i keep her, huh? huh?' lol. and the 'little master' 'young master' thing i can just imagine a little inuyasha puffing with pride or something!! The tyrst thing was funny too, its bad to get caught in those positions, specially by a parent!!!
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  • From ANON - blueinferno on July 13, 2005
    OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG it was wicked! i luvwed it..ur a natural!! ^^ plzplzpzzlpzlplpzllplzlzzlzlppzllzzl update soon! your very talented.sooooo plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz hurry up and UPDATE! or ill kill u! lol
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  • From ANON - Cream on July 13, 2005
    Hun, I don't know how to say this nicely, but this is the definition of a mary-sue, right down to the overly decribed detail of her clothes and eyes, and who cares what else, you lose readers like that, and you don't write ages as numbers, use the words, try not to put A/N in the middle of your fic because it detracts from the story, and it's Inu-no-Taisho, not Inutaisho, thats a fandom mistake, just like mating mark bite things, try stay away from those, and try make your main female charcter as boring as she's heading, make her a character, someone that grows and develops, not someone that turns up perfect, and try not to make the sess/ami-whatever-her-name-is pairing so obvious, step back and look at your plot again, and read more fics, so you'll get a general gist of what people like and don't like.

    This IS constructive criticisism, well more or less advice, and I hope you take it.
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