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By : tabatha

From ANON - sesshysdarkkitten on July 27, 2007
Mmmmmm ramen!!!! It's not a bad breakfast though it can get annoying! Lol Izayoi woke up on the wrong side of the Toga this morning.

It must make Akane feel like such a whore that Sesshomaru won't sleep in the same bed with her after sex. Haha! Why does miss sleeps around when she's abroad need an informant anyway?...it's not like she's very monogamus. But her conversation with the informant was pretty funny. It's not like she doesn't know most women want "her man"!

While most people would never want to catch their parent or parents in the act, Sesshomaru begs to differ. A little weird but he does learn more, uh tips from watching. Hence, the whipped cream thought.

*Earth to Naraku* Of course she likes Sesshomaru. Duh! It's a good thing she didn't tell them she wanted to lose her innocence to Sess, they'd probably hang him. And muso has the most perverted chauvanist partner in the world. Ewww!
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From ANON - sesshysdarkkitten on July 27, 2007
Ewww @ Muso's partner. I can't stand dirty old men, so disgusting. (The younger ones are better...lol well not too young. Muso this is Yura, Yura this is Muso! Muso- "eww" Yura- "Ooh he's hot" I think I put it simply, don't ya think? lol. But while Inderstand he doesn't like her, he still should have helped her up and tried to be nice - you know, like grin-and-bear-it?

I like how Izayoi writes eroticas. What a cute way to find out someone knows...at your youngest child's school, from a teacher no less. And despite her not telling him, I have a feeling Toga already knows about the eroticas.

How cool! Kagura is lucky that she got Totosai to spar with her. And how cute @ Naraku braiding her hair. lol @ "doggy got to behave" Interesting how Sesshomaru and Totosai were reminded of the same person with Kagura's stance.

Naraku is soo slick, betting on Kagura and Sesshomaru sparring. And he didn't even know he was fighting her. I know she must have loved seeing him in his armor. Sesshy lost to a girl! Sesshy lost to a girl! lol. Funny how finding out you're facing a girl, especially Kagura, can slightly distract ya. I feel bad for him though, she nailed his head really hard. What a stroke to Kagura's ego to have beaten one of the best and a blow to Sesshy's. But aww, all she can think about is concern for him.

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LOVE THE STORY!!!!
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From ANON - sesshysdarkkitten on July 27, 2007
Oohhh Sess in the shower! *drool* >:) I'd love to watch him...! I love the whole floyd thing, that was really funny. I dunno why Gatenmaru would ever call Sesshy floyd when the girls all want to fuck Sess.

Naraku is really sweet and caring when it comes to Kagura...all a big brother should be. He's so sweet to give her some of his winnings to go shopping for the party. Kagura needs a cell phone so that she will always get Yura's messages. I agree with Naraku, Muso probably would have deleted it, which would have been fucked up of him. But at the same time, his overprotectiveness is sweet, at least he cares. Shopping is fun!!!!!

Aww poor Sesshy, he got a boo-boo :( Headaches are no joke! Suckes for him that now everyone will know what happened, but on the bright side, maybe some of the school whores will want to help *wink wink* Well if ya want something spread around really fast, just tell Manten! Lol temper temper Sesshy. I don't blame him, I'd wanna break my phone to if I had a huge headache and wanted to relax and it kept ringing. He could've just turned the damn thing off though. I think it's sweet that Izayoi sang him to sleep. He's more child like than ya think!

DumDumDum Yura reveals the man she wants to give her virginity to. Lol Kagura's reaction was too funny. I can't believe she thought it was Naraku at first...ewww! (Well he is kinda handsome but in a creepy psycho way)

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Excellent story & chap
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From ANON - sesshysdarkkitten on July 27, 2007
Lol poor Inuyasha...forced to retrieve his elder, sexy, gorgeous brother. Very Marsha Brady of him when he said "Oww my nose!" I like how Toga referred to Akane as a distraction but it's funny how she can manage to be one when she's away for most of the year. I'm not defending her or anything, just making a point. Rio de Janeiro sounds like a beautiful place for Sesshy to go, but it's understandable why Izayoi isn't approving of the idea. I thought the whole "Mommy is Sesshy a prick? What's a prick?" thing from Rin was sooo hilarious. But did they really need to ask where she learned that from? It's obvios that Mr. foul mouth himself said it around her. The grounding was a bit unfair though Inu really needs to watch his mouth, at least around his little sis.

So much for a civilized dinner! Akane screwed that up and Izayoi didn't help, either. Izayoi is too much though, she doesn't like Akane, yet she made a place for her at the table to join them. I really don't like how she came over unannounced like she owns the place or lives there. Just because he wasn't in the mood for a date or feeling well doesn't mean she should have just popped over without asking. What did Akane mean by "It depends"? It was too funny how Izayoi was sort of defending Akane. (How do you pronounce Akane? I know it's probably a stupid question but I thought I'd ask anyway.) But she was sooo wrong to bring up Kagura, lol. She had to know Akane would get on Sesshy for that. But Akane dares to raise her voice at the great Sesshomaru??

Poor Yura never gives up. I love how Muso has been faithful with the same girl since 7th grade...how sweeeet! :) That's true love right there! Yura should be happy to know he's not a cheater, instead of saying "Dammit!" Monogamy is a good thing! And I don't blame Kagura for not really liking the idea of Yura and Muso. I know I wouldn't really want any of my friends dating my brother (though he's only 14 so that'll never happen!)

Love this story!!!!!! (Sorry for the backwards reviewing!)
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From ANON - sesshysdarkkitten on July 26, 2007
Sorry about the last review saying anon (The one that begins with Temper Temper Toga but look on the bright side, ya got another review, lol. Sorry!). I forgot to put my name & email. (Dumb of me) Will review the rest of the chaps l8r or tomorrow since aunt keeps coming in and looking over my shoulder. It would be too odd if she knew I read these, even though i'm not a kid or anything.

Anyways EXCELLENT STORY
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From ANON - Anon on July 26, 2007
Temper Temper Toga! So much for their civilized dinner. Lol daddy's pissed, time to make yourselves scarce. Rofl @ Rin wanting to see Izayoi and Aknae fight. Very clear that no one truly likes her.

I like how Sesshomaru just left that bitch where she was and was in his room before she realized it. Glad he manhandled her, she deserves pain for trying to slap him. But what an interesting position she ended up in. >:) She should have stayed her ass home instead of coming over unannounced and starting shit! Quite jealous for someone who has other lovers herself. And come on Sesshy you know you really don't care about her and vice versa or she would transfer to your school and you'd be a REAL couple, other than just sexually!

And I reiterate: Cock-sucking whore!

Did Toga truly expect Izayoi to be where he asked her to be? Come on now! And Inuyasha's too much.

Hehe! Muso's getting in on the action. I really like how sweet he is with rachel. Every boyfriend should treat his girl nicely!

I feel Kagura's pain, dress shopping is a bitch!! But it pales in comparison to swimsuit shopping! Hey there's an idea for you if you haven't already got it. Whenever Sess & Kagura start having sex...they should do it in a pool. I know! I know! So unsanitary but who cares, it's a story, lol. Just a thought. But of course since Yura made her try the dress it would be slutty. Seems like she really wanted to make Kagura look the part of a whore. LOL.

�This will not do, Kagura. How do you expect to make clothes for the mass public, but you can�t even dress yourself?� -- Yura made an excellent point, but of course Kagura would make better clothes for everyone else than she would for herself. She's just not that kind of girl. More confident than she knows.

BTW: Not only do I love this story but I love the chapter names as well.
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From ANON - sesshysdarkkitten on July 26, 2007
Ok...I'm thinking I should have started from chap 1 and worked my way to chap 16 in reviewing instead of doing it backwards. But I wanted to review anyway, I know I'd like it if someone would review my stories no matter the order.

Lol. Tell me, is it not annoying when you think your story is good yet there's at least one or two reviewers telling you how you should have written it. It's called an imagination anf fanfiction for a reason right? Why should everything have to be accurate, right? I like it when fic aren't just only in the feudal times...I mean they are already set that way in the show, stories should like, be imaginative. Let them out of the past, you know, have some fun. Ok sorry for the babbling......

****On with the review****

Such drama in the Tashiotaka household. Toga's one mad dog! They brought it upon themselves on that one. I like how he punished Izayoi by spanking the hell out of her so she can't sit.

Geez is Akane the "head" mistress or something? Lol. They ended up doing things even though he wasn't up to it in the first place. She brings new meaning to the term "Cock-sucking whore"

Lol @ "rich boy" Could Kagura's bro make it any clearer he doesn't Sesshomaru? Hehe. I like the sound of the dress she made for Yura. The whole Muso/Yura convo was funny. He could not be any more clearer about the fact that he doesn't like her.

Aww, she can't keep her eyes off Sesshy. I guess he gets sick of all the women clinging to him. At least Kagura isn't all over him, though she loves him!

*Dips it low* Great use of the song, I love this song!

Gatenmaru is getting on my nerves. You gotta love it when they're so clueless that they keep trying. When will he see that she doesn't want him? That she only wants Sesshomaru...like every other girl. Insteresting how he can't take his eyes off the sight of Kagura and Gatenmaru dancing. (Do I detect a hint of green-eyed monster?)

Signs of a true crush: Kagura checking up on Sesshy's poor head. He's showing more interest than he thinks asking her to show him how to disarm an opponent at the dojo in his house. Nice pause in Sesshy's response when she questioned him about the invitation. "Because I want you..." "too" hehe he wants her more than he'd think!

Akane needs to butt out. I'm glad he didn't come to the party with her in tow. I can't imagine how Kagura would react to see them dancing together. (And I'm sure Akane would make it quite the turn-on for Sesshomaru!)

Gatenmaru is such an ass...if you like the girl don't try to rape her! And just because you know she doesn't have a boyfriend doesn't mean she's not interested in someone! I'm glad she kneed his dick, serves him right!

Yay Sesshy plays hero! He's so sweet ^o^ Nosy much @ him following and listening to them talk. And he doesn't like seeing Gatenmaru's hands on her because he wants her for himself, though he won't admit it. He sure gave Gatenmaru what he deserved but that locker room comment was uncalled for.

He kissed her! He kissed her! Let her fantasy begin....

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Sorry if I seem a little crazy in my reviews. I hope you don't think I'm flaming anything with the way I speak about some of the characters *cough* Akane *cough* because i'm not flaming at all. I looooooove loveeeeee this story! :)
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From ANON - sesshysdarkkitten on July 26, 2007
What was Sesshomaru on? Little red riding hood? Big bad wolf? Roflllll. Psycho much? He came across really ooc there, but I like it! >:) *Gives Sesshy his reward*

I can see he will make it more than good for her when they have sex. She's already gotten a taste of his skilled fingers and by her reaction it must have been like heaven. Her crush of for years got her off by masturbating her! That's a fantasy most women can only dream of. *Jeff hardy are you out there?* I must say I loved the scene. (Such a perv I am reading these aff's. Oh well!) Seems he will find a girl who can please a man like him...and he'll be the one to teach her! I think he made her cum with his words alone. Very erotic *Blush*

�Come back little red riding hood�it�s not safe for a girl like you to be alone with the big bad wolf.� Roflll That would definitely wake me up out of my daze! The poor thing felt used :( God Sesshy is so hot!

Ohh they plotting against her, those bastards! Yikes @ use of digital camera & compromising position. They are so evil and all for nothing really!

Why didn't Sesshomaru want to be the valedictorian anymore? That I really don't get. But it's cool that they picked someone other than Garamaru. And oooh he's getting hard thinking about Kagura. Hehe

Lol @ Yura dragging Muso into the whole conversation. Geez she doesn't quit.

God it's really hard to read and review aff's with your Aunt coming in & out of the living room and looking over your shoulder from time to time, especially if you're playing a game while doing so. Kinda makes ya feel like a little kid instead of an adult! lol.

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I swear, this story is so good it seems like it's real!
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From ANON - sesshysdarkkitten on July 26, 2007
Ooh Kagura got a letter...Dum Dum Dum! Lol @ chicken fuckers! This girl is too funny! She's none to pleased about it though. But they want her to be valedictorian which is a great honor considering she's a peasant amongst greatness! I don't blame her for her outburst and not believing them. I'd have a hard time believing it if I were in her shoes. Like, out of nowhere the people who never acknowledge you want you for such an honor. Though the whole pity thing is annoying, lol. Kagura doesn't need pity from anyone, nor will she accept it.

Mmm Muso, what can I say? Yura picked a good one, but a taken good one! Then again...so did Kagura, sort of. He is so sweet to Rachel. They seem perfect together. I feel a little bad for Yura because she likes him a lot but as of the moment she has no chance and they keep going back and forth with insults.

*Thinks to herself* If Garamaru has no power then why is he even in the room with them? Jealous bastard. He's hating just cuz every girl he has had or wanted preferred Sesshomaru! Who wouldn't prefer that sexy, golden-eyed, silver haired, hard-bodied...god of a man? Que bello! How cute that Garamaru brought up his own conclusion that Sess is just doing this cuz he's trying to fuck Kagura. Little does he know that Kagura would indeed allow Sess that priviledge willing, but not easily.

Lol @ I didn't sleep with Yokiro. The whole scene before Kagura even came in was hilarious. I like how he offered Akane back to Garamaru. Too funny! It sucks how he ignored Kagura though. At least acknowledge her, seeing as you keep coming on to her and leading her on...sort of. I'd be pissed too if I were her.

*Is shocked there's another woman who could make Akane seem like an angel. ROFLLLLLLL*

See Kaura, he comes on to you of his own free will, without being asked to, he does like you.

Sesshomaru can manhandle me any day....
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From ANON - sesshysdarkkitten on July 26, 2007
Hehe climbing trees must be fun. Lol, go Kagome...expressing her dominance over him, for the moment. 'She's trying to kill me' - yes, Inuyasha she is, but only cuz she loves you. :)

And for someone who is not so innocent herself, Akane sure keeps tabs on Sesshy. I just don'tget how she can get mad when she fucks around herself. Does she really expect him to stay hard & lonely while she fucks away in Switzerland? You've got the hottest guy around so it comes naturally.

*Throws herself at Sesshomaru*

Lol @ magic stick, that was funny. I hate the way Akane's informant made it seem like Kagura initiated the whole thing when it was Sesshomaru who came on to her! I feel for the poor girl. *Note to Akane: He's not taken if you're countries away from each other for most of the year!* She's such an evil person to have drugged Kagura and just left her. I don't see how Sesshomaru can even like her but I guess looks come before personality right?

Lol poor Sesshy got his balls scratched. Go Kagura! Take no shit from him! At least she stands up for herself despite being in love with him. She's a lot stronger than she thinks!

Great job :)
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From ANON - sesshysdarkkitten on July 26, 2007
Yeah, I know i'm going backwards with the reviews, lol. I wonder what will happen when they find out who drugged Kagura. And yes Akane, you are no saint either! The fact that Sesshy felt slight jealousy that Kagura didn't harm Gatenmaru for touching her shows that he likes her more than he'd ever let on. 'So much for a crush' (aww i felt bad for him) A part of me is surprised he didn't ask Akane to go with him to the festival or even tell her about it, but the other part isn't because he knows Rin doesn't like her! Which makes him considerate! (Am I reading to much into it?) lol anyways great story :)
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From ANON - sesshysdarkkitten on July 25, 2007
I was almost gonna make an account just to be able to review this story. I absolutely love it!! I found myself checking like every day to see if there was an update...that's how addicted I am! I really want to wring Akane's neck...god she's such a bitch! I can't believe he'd consider marrying her. Sure she's rich and obviously a good fuck but if that's all there is he can find another. I mean, he's gotta consider the fact that his family doesn't care for her very much, him putting family above money & power. Glad he broke up with her for now. Lol, the poor boy can surely find a better girl that will fuck & suck him right! Lol, but I know this is a SessKag fic not SessAkane. (Glomps Sesshy earning a glare from Kagura and other fangirls.) I'm loving Sesshy's character although he's more of an asshole in this. He's so sexy though. I can't wait till chapter 17, and to know what happens on their trip. Anyways I think this story is excellent and keeps me wanting more! Lol for a girl who said she wasn't a writer, Tabatha you're doing damn good on this story! Keep it up, hun. BTW do you do those email alert things for your fans? And hope you enjoyed your trip.
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From ANON - Anon on July 25, 2007
And another chapter of Heartless...this is good..
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From Milady747 on March 08, 2007
Hi, frined, i very, very sad when i conclude you no finished this fic...
Oh, please!

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From ANON - Eta on December 28, 2006
Argh!
I NEED the end!!! Please! You cannot let us at this point! I really want an end!!!
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