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By : tabatha

From evil on June 08, 2016
I feel like a proud mother because our little Sesshomaru is falling in love :) update soon its a great story and because you say said 'Hello' at the end of chapter 17........HI!
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From animefreak492 on September 15, 2010
How could you leave it off like that!?!? This story is AMAZING, so PLEASE update soon. ^^
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From rosuki on December 05, 2009
Amazing I hope you keep writing!
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From rosuki on October 22, 2009
oh how i hope there will be more. i loved this story and definitely cannot wait to be reading more. They are cute together.
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From Silent Pluto on July 25, 2008
Whoa! Now this stuff is really good!!!
You have to keep this going, I love this story!!!!!

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From Archfiend on June 23, 2008
now this story is really getting interesting, though I must say it is hard to keep track of all the devious games that are played by all those rich kids. God they behave as if life was a bad soap opera. Update soon.
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From ixxora on December 22, 2007
hey i love this story!!!..i'm was not really fond of other pairings besides kagome/sesshy..but this one made me change my mind! please update soon? i can't wait to know what will happen next!!
PLEASE UPDATE PRETTY PLEASE WITH ICING AND SPRINKLES ON TOP???!!!

cheers!
Merry Christmas!
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From ANON - sesshysdarkkitten on December 21, 2007
Yay a new chappie!! So they've arrived at the western lands...let the fun begin! Cute how Rin's taken a liking to Kagura...and Sesshy's trying to deny his interest in her. Wonder who was in the ending of the chapter.....

Great Story

~ sesshysdarkkitten (of ff.net) ~
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From ANON - T MAC on September 25, 2007
This chapter is very exciting, the author is very talented, and has a very creative mind. I really think that you need to expand your imagination, and put it to use in an on the market type deal. HuH I wonder if you are like your sex scenes, that would be very intersting to know!!!
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From ANON - sesshysdarkkitten on September 08, 2007
Plzzzz update soon....I love this story and want more :-)
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From ANON - sesshysdarkkitten on July 28, 2007
Alas I've come to the final (should have been first) review, until the next update anyway. It's been fun :)

Jaken fucks up the flow in the group, lol. He's the odd man out in the whole trio. Oooh Sesshy is sooo sexxxxxxy. I love the desription of Koga's eyes. Sapphire is a beautiful color :) Like I said, Jaken fucks it all up. You're right, all the money in the world couldn't help that one! And what an interesting conversation they are having...about some slut Sesshy banged! I can tell deep down Sesshomaru does not really like the women throwing themselves at him. (Well he does but you know what I mean, right?) "Once I made her cum the third time" - damn is he THAT good? lol. He must be! Lol @ Jaken you can have her when I'm done.

Aww don't be so down on yourself Kagura. I don't blame her though, I always felt sick to my stomach and down on myself everytime I saw a crush with another girl. Hey Kagura, it's better to be smart and poor than dumb and rich. (Though the money would help!) :-) You will make it big Kagura!!! Lol.

Eww @ Jaken will need a date. Kagura may be a peasant but even she's to pretty for Jaken! *Slaps Koga for that one* For a virgin, Yura does act kinda slutty, hehe. Jaken's got some nerve, he's no one to talk about someone being ugly when he gets no play whatsoever. He's probably a virgin himself. I liked Sesshomaru's sort of evealuation for Kagura, well up until the doggy-style comment. At least he doesn't think she's unattractive? There may be hope for her yet....

*********(You know what's coming)*********

Finally done with the back reviewing. Again sorry I did it all backwards but I hadn't realized till the update chapter that anonymous reviews were accepted, otherwise it would have been done the right way. (I really would have made an account to review if they weren't though.) Just letting ya know I've really enjoyed your story so far and I'm truly glad you didn't forget about it or give up on it. Since you mentioned it's a two parter I can tell it will be long and chock full of fun! (LOVE THE STORY/ CHAPS)

Till the next update

~ sesshysdarkkitten ~
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From ANON - sesshysdarkkitten on July 28, 2007
I don't like they way Sesshy and Koga treat women as just sex objects. And it is disgusting that they trade. (Vomits at any thought of Jaken getting any.) Words spoken out of true love: "If he finds the right woman he will change." I agree with Kagura there! But right now, he's an ass.

I looked up that little french phrase you used. "Le Petit Mort" translated to "The Dead Baby or the Small death" So he enjoys making his bed partners experience the dead baby or the small death? (Lol the translations sites suck! But I know what you were getting at, lol. Basically he makes it damn good! Sorry I was just curious as to the meaning. I thought it would be something different than what I actually found.)

Is it just mean or does it seem that Yura actually put the thought of losing her virginity before leaving in her head? Kagura didn't seem to be thinking about that until Yura brought it up. Poor thing! She loves him...! Well Yura put it straight up "Don't expect him to fall and no regrets." At least she meantioned Akane to Kagura...sort of a forewarning but not really. But at least Yura is a good and true friend to Kagura. I like how she looks out for her and even though it's a bad idea, will let her learn for herself by helping her with the Sesshomaru situation.

Lol Izayoi mentioned running into Akane on purpose to get on Toga's nerve and shock Sesshomaru. It sure worked! And I didn't know 17-year olds were allowed to drink. Then again, Japanese customs & laws are very different from American ones.

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GREAT JOB & LOVE THE STORY/CHAPS.
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From ANON - sesshysdarkkitten on July 28, 2007
Oohh she gets her crush's family's table tonight. Fate really smiled on her :)

Koga is such a perv in this. Another epitome of superficiality. (I actually used to like his character in the anime but then he just got annoying! How many times can you possesively claim someone, unrequitedly I might add, before it gets annoying? I shocked Kagome didn't put a sit command on him too! Wouldn't that be so funny?) The whole time he's 'talking' with "Yumi" he's leering at her and thinking pervy thoughts. Creepy! Very predator of him! A true wolf, lol. I thought it was nice he offered to escort her...even though he's just trying to fuck her!

Lol @ Ayame. I like how it's him after her instead of the other way around. Let him see for once how it feels to want a girl who has no interest in him (*cough* Kagome? anime? *cough*)

So Akane really is his fiancee? When was this established? Betcha she more decided it then he did. Oh wait Inu was getting back at Sesshy. (Very dumb of me. Like he'll really marry someone he won't sleep with. Hopefully ya have a good laugh at some of my reviews.) Sesshy shouldn't be so rude at her concern for him...what an ass! It's not like she's Manten and going to spread it around that she saw him coughing!

*******Anywho*******

GREAT JOB. LOVE THE STORY/CHAPS. Ya got a real fan here :)
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From ANON - sesshysdarkkitten on July 28, 2007
Lol go Kagura!! Show that meanie who's boss. Sesshy didn't have to be so rude to her she was only concerned! I thought she really poured the wine over his head but it was her daydreaming? Lol. That would have been interesting though. After his treatment I'd wanna strangle him too. Rin is on to something....:)

I didn't know scholarships were a bad thing. And here I was thinking they were helpful, hehe. Their family dinners are so hilarious. I loved Rin's reaction to the whole Akane talk. I mean, how bad do you have to be for a little girl not to like you? That has to say a lot. Would Sesshy, being the family man he is, really want a real relationship with a girl said family can't stand? It's gotta be in the back of his mind. (Bear with me, I know I"m repeating myself a lot in these reviews. I think to much.)

Sesshy is one slick bastard, lol, offering her a ride home. When did he become so sweet and caring? He's so wrong in his thinking, Kagura knows she's a peasant and not 'one of them'! At least she got $100 out of it as well. Kagura really needs a cell phone! I really hope all that happens (and has happened) in the later chapters isn't just part of him 'putting her in her place'. It would be kinda sad to know he was toying with her, though she's playing her own game as well.

Bravo @ her having some balls and asking him out for ice cream. Yummy!!!! Though it would have gone better had his mind not been occupied by his slut! I liked that he at least kept his word to drive her home and walk her to the door (all that was missing was a goodnight kiss!) but what he said to her brothers as he left was so wrong. It's not like she begged him for a ride or anything, he offered, more like forced!

****** Anywho ******

GREAT JOB & LOVE THE CHAPS/STORY: KEEP IT UP CHICA!!
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From ANON - sesshysdarkkitten on July 27, 2007
Ooh a doggy! Lol let me stop. Lol @ Sesshy climbing a tree, taking a page from Inuyasha, I see.. I love lemons! *Gawks at Sesshy stripping* I enjoyed the lemon. She should have let him do the foreplay, he obviosly likes to! I'm glad he's being safe about it though, with the condom and all! We wouldn't want our beautiful Sesshy to catch something from his slut now would we? Judging by Akane's reaction, he must be incredible in bed! (As if he'd be anything less than so)

Aww Kagura, don't contemplate Sesshomaru's actions, it'll only confuse you more! Love how Naraku and Muso are referred to as the Spanish Inquisition. Just two good big brothers worrying about their sister, nothing more, nothing less. (Yeah right!) I do think they should let her make her own mistakes though. She's a strong girl and she'll figure out what's right on her own. I feel bad for her, I know what it's like to have an unrequited crush and think you're in love with him.

And damn Sesshy can last! Wow, they went at it like rabbits! He must have been really in the mood. They do have a weird relationship. Seems like a borderline open-relationship consisting of mostly sex! Lol Sesshy's worried about a hickey, come on look at him, women want to fuck him regardless. And even after sex he's still energetic, though they fucked all night. Amazing! Go Sesshy, that thought alone is enough to keep a fangirl happy...even in a fic. I wonder why he won't sleep with the women afterwards, must be an emotions thing (though he has none!) or just a male thing.

Toga and Izayoi are a comical pair. Too funny at her reaction to being caught by Sesshomaru. Lol! Obviously Toga doesn't like Akane, but he'll like Kagura who has a mouth on her at times. :) I like...whipped cream!

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LOVE THE STORY & CHAPS.
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