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Reviews for HEARTLESS

By : tabatha
  • From Fourshotchild on December 24, 2007
    This is an interesting story. This is the first
    Kagura/Sesshamaru story I've ever read. (I
    hope I spelled the names right...) Keep it up.
    I'd like to see how their relationship grows.
    I'd also like to know what the pictures were and
    what's going to happen with them. Crazyness.
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  • From ANON - Soranji on August 30, 2007
    I really like this story and I hope you update soon.
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  • From FadedDreamKeeper on July 25, 2007
    Im so glad you updated I've been with the story sinse first post.But theres such a gap in updates...But its ok I do the same at time.But plz keep up the update no matter how many reviews I want to see this story through!!!
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  • From Jessica05lynn on February 01, 2006
    ooooh that'd be really funny if Akane walked in on that one.... lol
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  • From ANON - tess on January 22, 2006
    Tabatha,i like "heartless" a lot & wanna read more so please,please,please hurry up & update!!!Oh,and throw in a couple more steamy,hot lemons,plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - sauncha on January 21, 2006
    Great chapter! Keep it up :)
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  • From ANON - Too on January 08, 2006
    WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE. I would really like to see what going to happen in the next chapter. So please UPDATE SOON. UPDATE. UPDATE. UPDATE. UPDATE. UPDATE. UPDATE. UPDATE. UPDATE. UPDATE. UPDATE. UPDATE. UPDATE. UPDATE. UPDATE. UPDATE. UPDATE. UPDATE. UPDATE. UPDATE. UPDATE. UPDATE. UPDATE. UPDATE. UPDATE. UPDATE. UPDATE. UPDATE. UPDATE. UPDATE.
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  • From ANON - jhsgd on January 05, 2006
    lkjlkjlkj;klj
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  • From ANON - sesshywife on December 21, 2005
    hey i'm a begging writer my self so if you could help me with my story as well i'll enjoy much. oh yeah love the story and some edvice why don't you put a little bit of inuyasha and kagome love in there to just spice things up a bit. (killa story and can't wait for the next chappie) ^.~
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  • From ANON - gina on December 20, 2005
    great chapter!!! i love this story !!! more please??? =)
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  • From ANON - Mmoirai on December 20, 2005
    Well, this is just a joy to read! I'm loving your character development, and I'm really intrigued by the Yura/Muso pairing here. How sweet is that little love story! You may want to find a beta reader to catch some of your writing errors though. There were two very glaring mistakes, 'dough' instead of 'though', and 'rotting' instead of 'rooting', that distracted me and interupted the flow of the reading. Please don't take my comments as a flame. I am not flaming you. I really like what you have here! Believe me! I understand just how difficult it is to post a mistake-free piece of work after thinking up the story and sitting in fornt of a computer screen for hours typing it up. Even your proof reader won't catch everything, but it is amazing how much a fresh pair of eyes can help. Anyway, keep it coming! I'm ready for more!
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  • From XYZ on October 30, 2005
    Wow, I can't believe I didn't review before... I read it already, but somehow forgot to leave a review... *makes a guilty face*, anyway, excellent story, absolutely lovely. In a society where money equals power, there is so much corruption and scandal, it is amazing that Kagura is manages to abstain from getting dragged into ti. Interesting idea to make Naraku kagura's brother... Please continue, I'm dying to read more.
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on October 25, 2005
    there are a few mistakes and places where it could be better but overall i really like it. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Byako (Not Signed In) on October 10, 2005
    I love this story! It's great! Keep writing!!! And gosh darn you and the cliffy!
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  • From ANON - silent pluto on October 09, 2005
    I love your story. The whole set-up is great! I don't know how i can help your writer's block. But I'm sure you can come up with something!
    If you want to e-mail me for some idea's be my guest! Just hope you get some writing done, cause this story needs a climax!!!
    ^_~
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