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Reviews for A Sacred Treasure and a Hanyou

By : cukid9
  • From ANON - ArtemisMoon on October 09, 2005
    Wow...just...wow. The shock of FINALLY finding a good story worth actually spending a good part of the day to read! It certainly has been a while since I've read a story that is far more than just mediocre, and I'm very thankful that you wrote it!

    It was such an interesting plot. Kagome as a stripper, and being dominant in bondage...I genenerally tend to skirt around plots with those elements because they are just so...un-kagome-like, I suppose. And Inuyasha submitting to anyone is a little hard to swallow as well, lol...but suprisingly, you did such a good job with it! I actually read it all the way through and enjoyed all the aspects of the story, not just a few of them while scoffing at the rest.

    I seriously hope you continue and write a continuation for this story. I'm interested to see where you'll go with it. You did a great job! And don't put yourself down so much about your supposed inability to be funny. There were several parts in this story that made me smile and even laugh out loud (You have a knack for giving your characters amusing banter), and having a handful of moments like that are very good for balancing out a story just right. Not enough to distract, but enough to keep things a little lighter than they might have been otherwise. ^_^ Keep it up, and I can't wait to see more from you in the future!

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  • From ANON - Jaime on October 03, 2005
    excellent story! I actually like the way it ended. It did leave many unanswered questions, but now I have something to forward too! Can't wait for the sequel!
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  • From HotGimmickFan007 on September 28, 2005
    Oh my GOD. That was phenomenally awesome. This story is amazing and please, you have to make a SEQUEL!!! Keep it up, and you've got my rare "Two Seven-Ups!" which is sorta of a thumbs up, only with sevens in sign language (O.O yes, I'm deaf) and believe me not MANY people (fic writers) get this. I'm also currently working on a fic myself, Hot Gimmick "Love Equals Squared" and would be honoured if you could take the time to read it. Thanks! And seriously, Keep up THE GREAT WORK!!! I look foward to your next fic.
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  • From fallenangel7583 on September 27, 2005
    wonderful ending to a wonderful story. i can't wait for that sequel. i'm so honored that you have read my story, that makes me smile. this story is nothing short of amazing. you have a great talent for writing description and angst. poor kag!! damn naraku; i would have loved to see what inu would have done if they ran into each other face to face. damn. GREAT story!!! amazing, simply amazing. oh, the inuyasha fan fiction guild is a group out there that has nominatoins four times a year for the best of teh best fan fiction peices that readers come to find. i think there are about five hundred of us members but normally only a given fifty or sixty vote. it's amazing. there is another group being forged much the same under the feudal association. email me if you want to know more. :-)

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  • From ANON - sodapop0006 on September 19, 2005
    This was absolutely amazing! Normally I tend to move away from Inuyasha/Kagome pairings but you've done so wonderfully that I couldn't help but adore them. You've written fabulously on all the sexy scenes, but you didn't take away from the everyday scenes either. I couldn't help but sit here and read through the whole thing (even when I have work just waiting to be done... oops ^_~). You've managed to draw me into the characters, their lives and their thoughts, and you do have some amazing plot twists. The dancing scenes in particular drew me in, you were very precise with the details. Not to mention the craving for a cigarette after some scenes ^_~. Fantastic work, please write more!!
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  • From ANON - i am known by only one name and that is GAWD... er i mean GOD!!!! on September 15, 2005
    What happened to that sequel u had befroe for this story i read the 1st chapter and then it was deleted

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  • From ANON - meagans friend on September 12, 2005
    hey whats up, this is megans friend i've read your storys and they are quite interesting. very interesting bye!
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  • From ANON - penpaninu on September 10, 2005
    GREAT STORY. Its got my horns up in more ways than one. Very well written, and very enticing! Hope they get together! I love Inuyasha modern stories, adn yours is right up there!
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  • From penpaninu on September 09, 2005
    GREAT STORY! This is completed right? Going to read the rest
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  • From ANON - skittles on August 22, 2005
    sequel! sequel! you just have to do a sequel --- your story has become addicting!!!
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  • From ANON - LaLa13 on August 21, 2005
    Because I like you so much, I looked up what 'Jingi' meant. Here is what my online Japanese to English Dictionary said: Jingi: humanity & justice, duty, moral code (gang's).

    I read the other person's review (the one who suggested naming the story Tainted Dance) and I think they have something going there. Tainted Justice would sound really cool, but I'm not sure if it would fit. Tainted Morals would kinda fit with the whole stripper thing...

    Just a thought!

    your deranged reviewer,
    LaLa13
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  • From ANON - LaLa13 on August 21, 2005
    *sniffs, then starts wailing uncontrollably* NOOOOOOOO!! *Falls to the ground crying* It can't be over! This was the first fanfiction I read on aff, and... well, it can't end. *throws a fit and starts shaking the author(ess) by her shoulders* Are you crazy?!?

    ...Ok, sorry. I didn't mean to go so over the top but... every great author(ess) I've ever known (on the internet), except one, has stopped the story so suddenly. I mean, angelbabe17 didn't even finish hers. Oh, the tragedy of being a writer and reader. But I wouldn't give it up for anything. You are still my fav author(ess) on aff. May your words continue to flow, (should I copyright that phrase? I kinda like it... hehehe)

    your emotional and completely devoted reviewer,
    LaLa13
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  • From ANON - LauReN on August 19, 2005
    This is the ending? Why others may complain, I think it's quite good. She got the love of her life and everything was good. And if you plan to write a sequel, I'm sure it will be just as good. Please, write the sequel. I look forward to it.

    ~LauReN
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  • From ANON - TricksterGoddess on August 19, 2005
    I can understand this being the last chapter.. Kind of because it was just SO sudden. You better write another story^__^ Please write it soon and keep up the good work^__^!!!
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  • From ANON - Rei on August 19, 2005
    THAT WAS COOL!!! HAHAHA SO WHAT IF IT WAS SHORT? IT WAS EXPLOSIVE!!! I LOVED IT WHEN THEY DID THE TANGO! TEHEHEHE WELL SEE YOU IN THE NEXT CHAPTER!
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