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Reviews for Broken Heart Healed

By : sweettormentedangel
  • From loretta537 on March 13, 2008
    this was a great story and i hope you write more.
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  • From ANON - Kikyou on September 08, 2006
    Really nice story. I thought this was going to be onf of those anti-Kikyou fics where she just dies and everyone rejoices..Miroku and Kagome are an odd pairing but I guess it could work.
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  • From ANON - inu_lover1978 on December 06, 2005
    that was interesting but very enjoyable.
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  • From ANON - ldyneptune on October 31, 2005
    Loved the story keep up the most excellent work.......
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  • From ANON - Tygerlily on August 12, 2005
    This looked like a really good fiction and especially since it's such a rare pairing, it really was distressing to find that it was really difficult to read. You really should look to break up your story a bit more. Giving the Dialogue its own line and then breaking it up into more paragraphs.

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    Now, this may just be me and if so then feel free to ignore this review but I would've pushed on to read past chapter two if the format was a bit easier on the eyes. I just kept getting lost while reading. Although I must say the storyline is very good [of what I read] and very interesting [so cheering for Miroku and Kagome even though I'm normally a Inuyasha/Kagome shipper myself] I do hope you continue with this and just take my suggestion into consideration. ^_^
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  • From swasdiva on August 01, 2005
    YAY! They're finally about to get to it! WOOT! This is such a charming fic! I can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - inuyashagirl5 on July 31, 2005
    I absolutely love Kagome/Miroku pairings and I must say that this is one of the best I have read! I look forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Maria on July 29, 2005
    Hey this is an awsome fic. I normally don't like Miroku/Kagome but this one is awsome!! I really like it, I mean like seriously... anyways I should be going thou... please update this fic whevever you get the time... Ja ne
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  • From ANON - Sirus4021 on July 29, 2005
    Awesome, pure greatness. It is great to see a actual complex story to this website which I don't see much of these stories around alot. This makes me glad, its a good fanfic and don't stop writting. My email is above if you want to contact me. ^^
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  • From swasdiva on July 28, 2005
    I absolutely adore this fic so far. It's a wonderful, romantic take on the seldom seen M/K pairing. I can't wait to see how they, uh, spend the next few days in Kagome's time. Is Miroku finally going to *show* her exactly how much she means to him? I can't wait to find out! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Knight2 on July 27, 2005
    Hmm, good fic. Except Kikyo should die and Inuyasha should find someone else.

    I'm waiting for more.
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  • From ANON - silvermoon134521 on July 25, 2005
    plz make more chapters soon :-}
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  • From ANON - joy on July 22, 2005
    more damn u
    lol gooood goooood
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  • From ANON - OutlawLanaya on July 21, 2005
    More Please! ^_^
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