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Reviews for Fraternal

By : BlackberryPatch
  • From sampough on September 11, 2005
    *ovation*
    Thank you for the time, thought, and love you put into this story. And thank you for having Sesshomaru NOT say -the three words- but at least TRY to say them*. I keep repeating myself, but I'll say it again: I love how the brothers' intimate relations are so "competitive." It's both entertaining and authentic! And don't worry about your costume omissions (beads, fluff, etc.). Sometimes those things are like the bathrooms on sci-fi shows' ships; they're just THERE... they don't have to be constantly seen/mentioned. I hope school treats you well, and I look forward to your next quality SxI contribution.
    ~Sam
    *I sure HOPE that's what he was trying to say, and not "Inuyasha, I am tired; sit in that other tree."
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on September 10, 2005
    Ah, yes. I know that picture and am glad that it inspired you to write this fic. I couldn't stop reading it by the way. Very well written. I like the way it focuses on the relationship more so than external stimuli. Sesshoumaru coming to Inuyasha with so much need was intriguing. I like that you chose to have Sess be the one to give in first. It was sweet to have Miroku be an understanding priest who could see what was happening. Once you did add action and other characters to the plot, it had a great affect on Sess and Inu. I liked that it wasn't just a passing skirmish with little consequences. You delved deep into Sess's psyche. I like that, as I have attempted to do the same in my fics.

    Well, good show! I liked it very much. I'm glad you're writing in the Inu category and hope to see more fics here from you.

    Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
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  • From ANON - Oboro on September 08, 2005
    Ah, great fic!! I've actually been reading this since you first posted it, but I'm weird and usually wait until a fic's done before I review. I want to say that I thought it was very well written, and was one of the most believable Inuyasha x Sesshoumaru fics I've ever read. I also liked the OCs quite a lot too. They didn't seem out of place, and the whole idea of them being demons from another country was cool too. Great work, and I can't wait to read the sequel!!
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  • From ANON - vashta on September 08, 2005
    This was great, I just hope we get and epilogue, maybe a one-shot after the final battle. I have to know how Kags takes it and if Sess and Inu stay together, nothing big, just an afterthought, it was too good not to know.
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  • From ANON - Polka dot on September 04, 2005
    Yeah battle scenes are hard.
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  • From ANON - rin136 on September 02, 2005
    I thought the reason why tetsuiaga could be used against bakial(SP?) was because Inuyasha's fang was also in it. Either way you did a good job!
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  • From ANON - Sam on August 31, 2005
    Alas, Chernobog, we barely knew ye, ye gullible oaf. Chs. 9 and 10 are wonderful as always...
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  • From ANON - rin136 on August 30, 2005
    Ros is alive and the demon aura's can be deflected. The horror!
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  • From ANON - Polka dot on August 30, 2005
    Sesshomaru's like the grinch his heart has grown 3 sizes too big.
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  • From ANON - Polka Dot on August 27, 2005
    Aww that's so sweet, little inu sleeping in his brother's protective arms.
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  • From ANON - rin136 on August 27, 2005
    Poor Ros is now dead. Another human night and Inuyasha fell asleep! Good chapter!
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  • From ANON - SP777 on August 24, 2005
    You know I NEVER thought I'd would read yaoi stories UNTIL I ran across some real good ones, like Inuyasha/Sesshoumaru, with actual plots that engage you...and yours does that.

    I'm really anxious to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Polka dot on August 22, 2005
    And all before breakfast, it's just like the army.
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  • From ANON - Sam on August 20, 2005
    LOVELY! Some things I love, in no particular order: Inuyasha's little nagging moments of doubt (weaker writers would neglect this), how the brothers are still -fighting- although it's evolved from swordplay into.. well... foreplay!, the soft tactile moments you create such as the kissing of palms and a hand on a chest over a heart... beautiful stuff.
    "Maybe possibly a sequel"!? Yes! In the horrible event you change your mind, can you be bribed?
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  • From ANON - Princess Sin on August 20, 2005
    Wow, the story so far is wonderful. i'm dying to find out what
    happens next.
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