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Reviews for Warmth In The Rain

By : Mmoirai
  • From ANON - BrucesGirl on November 03, 2005
    I love your style of writing. It's very poignent and beautiful. Keep up the wonderful work. I think this was beautiful just the way it was.
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  • From ANON - Des on November 01, 2005
    For practice, it wasn't too bad. Keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Imae on October 22, 2005
    YUM!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Nevaeh Azalea on October 20, 2005
    the lemon was GREAT! and it was only practice? wow. i cant wait to see more stories from you!!!
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  • From ANON - Cassie on October 19, 2005
    Oh wow this story is really good the lemon is perfect and the scene is breathtaking in a lighting and rainstorm how romantic is that please continue.......^________^
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  • From ANON - Death on October 05, 2005
    AWESOME!! Sorry. I really enjoyed this fan fiction, it was incredibly well written! You could be a novel author!
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  • From ANON - DarkLady on October 05, 2005
    hm pretty hot as is but maybe like after she gets off the first time have him lip her over doggy so he can get off and then she can again with him that'd be hot ~_^
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  • From ANON - Gemini on October 03, 2005
    WWWWWWWWWWWWWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is so good!^_^ I love it. This is just what I needed at the end of the day. Your writing is spectacular, please continue with more lemony goodness! I can't wait to read your other stories. You really capture Sesshomaru and Rin's character well. A+++++ Keep it up!^_-
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  • From ANON - mhika on October 01, 2005
    hey,for your practice lemon that was pretty damn good!! um, to make it more...realistic, i guess you could add more sounds, like "oh my god!!...master please take me,take me now...uhnnn...pplease, harder "etc., lolz. its really hot when your reading a story and you feel like your the one in it. anywayz, i recommend Kuronekosama's fanfic "The Hot Springs", not that you have to write like her, but if your a Sess/Rin fan like i am, you'll wanna get a look at this. its probably as hot as its ever gonna get. sorry for the long review...i ramble a lot, lol
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  • From ANON - Sesshomaru-chan on September 14, 2005
    you must have written lemons before cuz that waz the BEST EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU BETTER MAKE MORE CUZ THAT WAZ HOT (I LOVE RIN & SESSHOMARU STORYS/LEM)
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  • From ANON - Devon on September 14, 2005
    im going to be truthfull to you that was one of the BEST story/lem i'v ever read!!!!! keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - MJ on August 30, 2005
    I would try to offer you advice but after reading that totally hot scene I can't think straight. ;-)
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  • From ANON - Rin-chan on August 30, 2005
    woww...great lemon!!!! :)))
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  • From ANON - Kat on August 29, 2005
    I think this lemon was great
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  • From ANON - Marion on August 19, 2005
    I'm mailing from the France because I'm French mother (45 y.). Your lemon is very pretty, I was pleased and found it subtl. The only thing about lemon I just readed before and yours that is not wonderful, is when that's done, emotions, descriptions, thoughts... are dying very quickly ! Bouh ! I want more ...! Nevertheless, your writing begins very good and I encourage you to continue.

    Bye, Marion
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