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Reviews for Warmth In The Rain

By : Mmoirai
  • From ANON - Rainia on July 23, 2005
    Whoa!That was spectacular!*fans self*
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  • From ANON - Olivia on July 23, 2005
    Dear Sir or Madame,
    I really love this chapter. I always love sexual tension like that. Keep this up and you might get an award.
    -Olivia
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  • From ANON - Rawben on July 22, 2005
    ohh! i know you! i've been reading your other fic! :P lol
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  • From ANON - Rawben on July 22, 2005
    wow. you know, i'm really hesitant about reading the fics that have a summary of "this is my first lemon..." but this was damn good!! amazing really! i'll be looking for your upcoming fic... ;)
    and just so you have some constuctive critisim: i found the exclamation points distracting. in the dialog and thoughts it's great, but in the normal stuff... i dont know, it seems strange... just a thought.
    but yey for lemons! i hope you end up practicing more here! woohoo! one-shots! ;)
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  • From ANON - Zera on July 22, 2005
    I love Sesshoumaru and rin fics! I kinda wish you would write more though...
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  • From ANON - TheFavoriteBabySister on July 22, 2005
    That was really good, there was no practice about it, that was a lemon and one of the better ones that I've read. But hey who am I to stop you if you want to leave anymore 'practice' lemons. Great detail, can't wait until you write one in 'One Life', good luck with it.
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  • From ANON - animegirl007 on July 22, 2005
    I love it!!!! This was really good.......MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!! PLEASE TELL ME YOU WILL DO ANOTHER ONE!!!!!!!! RIN AND SESSHOMARU FOREVER!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - DPM on July 22, 2005
    Hey, this was plenty hot !! sure you haven't written one of these before !?!?? wink wink !!!! Very romantic, making love in the rain.

    I expect One Life's continuation to be scorching.
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