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Reviews for Racing the Moon

By : MidnightsKeeper
  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on March 02, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - rin.dee [currently offline though] on January 12, 2006
    one word - AMAZING!
    this not only had plot, it had correct spelling and grammar, excellent quotations, and above all, it was just a fantastic story.
    i read the little preview you gave the audience on your newest story and i must say i cant wait to read it.
    you are a great author. maybe you should call someone who knows someone and start your own little manga book haha!
    if you ever do make sure to email me to tell me xxpuppyearsxx@hotmail.com
    thanks for the story of a lifetime!
    ^_^
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  • From ANON - kagome10460 on August 25, 2005
    i loved it please continue this sory sounds like it going to get good ^_^ email me

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  • From ANON - sailorgirl16 on August 23, 2005
    That was really great. It's nice that Inuyasha and Kagome go out for midnight walks and such....
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 20, 2005
    heck yeah! you need to continue. Well written, I see so much more story to be told here.
    Don't just give up here. Love the title too, the magical calling of the moon.
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  • From inuyoukess on August 20, 2005
    Awesome story, you should definately continue this if you find the time. =) good job!
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  • From ANON - inuyashaloverr on July 29, 2005
    I like Racing The Moon. Even if it was a one-shot. It would be rather interesting which way you would take the characters if you continued with it , though. I always like the canon pairings more, and I just love a good Inuyasha/Kogome story. Guess thats just the hapless romantic in me. Anyways, great story, and keep it up.
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  • From cukid9 on July 29, 2005
    I was actually perfectly content with this story being a one-shot, that I didn't even notice that there was another chapter. I am glad, though, that the other chapter wasn't a continuation. NOT because I don't think that you are a good writer, but because I almost felt as though adding anything to this one-shot would have been pushing it. I envy people who can write one-shots and write them well. I tend to just spout and spout and never get to the point ^_^ I think it takes more talent to write short stories than it takes to write longer ones sometimes. The only thing that I noticed wrong with this were some punctuation and grammar errors -but those are just technicalities and are easily fixed (and I'm totally crazy when it comes to stuff like that ^_^).

    Your next story looks promising and I do hope that you write it. I will keep an eye out for it ^_^

    Great work! For a first-timer at this you certainly do very well at painting beautiful images and leaving your reader completely satisfied. Keep writing! I look forward to the next story you have to tell us.
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  • From ANON - dog demon on July 29, 2005
    LOVE THE NEW STORY. PLEASE PUT IT UP SOON. AND YOU SHOULD READ " NOT SO DIFFERENT " BY BATMANSDAUGHTER. IT A READLY GOOD STORY TO READ.
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  • From ANON - SapphireBlade on July 29, 2005
    I really like the one shot it was perfect, not too sweet, not sappy, and just the right amount fo brashness needed. As for the preview, very cool! I would love to hear what happens next so I'm looking forward to your post.

    Ja ne!
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  • From JebusOfNazareth on July 27, 2005
    Even though Im so guilty of writing them, POV's usually dont turn out well. Lord Archive's Rejected(A Ranma fanfic) series is one of the few written entirely in POV that makes it work. I write mine as one shots. They are ragged, immediate, and quick. As I think that they should be. However, having said all that. I adore WAFF. I adore Inu/Kagome sweetness. Its not as brutal as Inu/Sango. Its not as immediate as Inu/Ayame. And it isnt as insubstantial as Inu/Rin.


    So madam, you have made me a happy man.

    Please, expeiment, continue to write. Make more people happy.
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  • From ANON - lilly on July 27, 2005
    i loved it . it was romantic but i dont get why they would do that tho . well they love each other . please keep writting please it was so good.
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  • From ANON - ChibiSamuraiX on July 26, 2005
    That was beautiful. I love it!!!
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  • From ANON - TheGreenGauntlet on July 26, 2005
    That. Was. Awsome. And so, heart warming. I guess would be the right word. I personally loved it. *Applause*
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  • From ANON - morwen_re on July 25, 2005
    No! don't give up writing! you're good, even though there were a few spelling errors, but everyone has those. that was a sweet story, one of the sweetest i've read yet. maybe you could even write a sequel? i think that you could...
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