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Reviews for Bonds of Betrayal

By : michelle5137
  • From on August 01, 2005
    update soon pleaz update very soon
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  • From ANON - Marina on July 31, 2005
    Like it so far, you've done a good job from what i've seen so far. whose kagome gunna end up with?? anyway, update soon.
    JA NE
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  • From ANON - Tris on July 27, 2005
    very good i love it, you have to up-date very very very very very very very very very very very very very soon.
    Tris
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  • From ANON - koimiko on July 27, 2005
    i am strating to love your story more tham my own..it's great i think i cried while reading it. than cheer when i found out they didn't die. keep up the good work and please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Olivia on July 27, 2005
    What the heck are the characters of "Yu Yu Hakusho" doing being mixed in with the characters of "InuYasha"? Not bad though!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 27, 2005
    r there going to be charactor deaths in this fic omg ur story is good please update soon
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  • From ryukotsusei on July 27, 2005
    Very good chapter, I wonder which of the team will choose to go with them back into the past. Can't wait to find out, update soon please.
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  • From ANON - Leslie on July 27, 2005
    I just found your stories and I am enjoying them very much. I don't think that I have read a fanfic like this one. Very original. Thank You. My only question other than when will you update is why is Kag acting as if she is scared? I get that she was betrayed and that she lost her first love and best friend, but wouldn't she get angry and have trusting issues, not scared when someone raises thier voice or looks like they are in a bad mood. I don't mean anything bad by my concern I was just wondering. I hope you update soon. Leslie
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  • From on July 26, 2005
    oh yeah.I LOVE KURONUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE BAT AND WOLF DEMONS. I LOVE THIS STORY CUZ ITS PLOT PAIRINGS AND BECUZ YOU PUT KURONUE IN IT. UPDATE SOON PLEAZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From on July 26, 2005
    My.God. I love it you did a great job you are now one of my close friends kay? Talk to me some time. I really love your story.
    Ja ne
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  • From ANON - KitKat on July 26, 2005
    This is sooooooo good plz plz plz continue!!!!!!!!!!!! I LUV your writing ^_^ although i never pictured Sango to do something like that. I like that you thinking outside the box. :P



    ~KitKat (or clouded angel)

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  • From ANON - Kage Otome on July 26, 2005
    How could they, those fools! Hmph. I'm sure they'll get whats coming to them, baka's. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 26, 2005
    i do like this story even if sango an iny betrayed kags an the others put i love kag/yoko/the bats(i dont really know how to spell his name) pairings i cant wait till chapter 2
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  • From ANON - Reader65444 on July 26, 2005
    Excellent story, while I am an Inuyasha/Kagome shipper I'm willing to stray off the beaten path for this one. I enjoyed the begining however I am going to leave one comment but please don't take it as a flame. You're writing style within this first chapter hits me as 'impersonal' with the character emotions and interactions. If it's just because this is a summary of sorts, ignore me I love it anyway! :)
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  • From ryukotsusei on July 26, 2005
    You're not going to get any complaints from me with what you choose to do with the characters. Personally I like to see things that haven't been done before and I believe you are right. Sango is an easy character to manipulate from as to what I could tell by watching the series. If that turns people off then so be it. It's your story. I look forward to seeing what your plans are for this fic. Update soon please.
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