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Reviews for Twisted Deception

By : HypnoticUchiha
  • From ANON - Peacemaker on August 05, 2005
    Ch.2 was a very good chapter but I was slightly confused about the pairings. Was sesshomarou with keada or kagome? Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
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  • From ANON - Backlash Wave on July 29, 2005
    Update soon please.
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  • From ANON - Peacemaker on July 29, 2005
    This story looks really good so far and I was wondering how was with Inuyasha in the begining of the story? Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
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  • From ANON - Bookreader9999 on July 29, 2005
    I think the story is off to a good start. Nice suspense if Sakura is already a character we are familiar with (i.e. Kagome or Sango) or someone new.

    But, you might want to double check the spelling on some of the words your using. For example, morning should actually be spelled mourning in this case.

    Overall, good effort.

    Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Knight2 on July 29, 2005
    Story looks very intresting. I hope you update soon.
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