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Reviews for A New World

By : HanyouMiko15
  • From ANON - TheSoulmater on November 04, 2005
    I think this fic is fanastic and incrediably detailed, I'm not bored with the flsh backs you need them to build your character, I can't wait to see Kagome's reaction to her husband, I hope it will be like the show and they erm clash slightly, lol! How will she react to having a couple of kids as well, and when does she find out about Inuyasha and does she have miko powers in this, I hope so too, hope you update soon.

    TheSoulmater aka Holly
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  • From ANON - no one important on October 05, 2005
    Man, this is deep shit that you write. I don't know how you're doin' it, just keep doin' ok? You got urself a new fan.
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  • From ANON - SamuraiSlayer on October 05, 2005
    Another job well done. I can't praise you enough for your hard work. I am totally hooked on this fic. I 'm trying to get my friends to read it so you can expect more reviews. I'm sure they'll enjoy it as well. I'll get them to read it now. I cannot wait until the next chapter is posted. Good Luck!
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  • From ANON - Neko89 on October 03, 2005
    That was fascinating chapter. You never cease to amaze me. Kagome's character was wonderfully portrayed (my opinion). I cannot wait for the 25. Maybe you'll update sooner? Like you did for this chapter. If you don't, it's ok, but if you do, you'll make a lot of people very happy!

    Keep up the amazing work!

    Toodles!
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  • From on October 03, 2005
    I SOO ADORE THIS STORY! You're so great and talented. Don't ever stop writing. I'm glad that you'll never give up on this fic. I love Kagome's character. You must update sooner...if you can...(puts puppy eyes).
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  • From ANON - Emiko on September 28, 2005
    I'm
    Lovin'
    It!

    Lol.
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  • From ANON - Ardinae on September 27, 2005
    That was a wonderful chapter. I love this story. Very informative and now gives the readers an idea of what some of the key players are like in the story. Although the flash back wasn't bad it did bring forth a thought. Although I would never indulge that I was a proffessional writer (my grammer and spelling suck too much to be one lol) or that my opinion means much I would like to give you a little hint to something I read once from an article in a writer's publication. "Often time new authors are compelled to perceve that a story 'needs' to be a certain amount of words or pages. This is not true to the fact, for too many words based on none ecential subject is often considered 'filler' to make the acquired amount of words necessary to acheive a pre-ordained conception that has been drummed into young minds of students in school to obtain the amount of words needed to accomplish an essay or short story forgeting about true content. Hense drawing away from the true intent of the subject and making the script boring. Some authors would disagree with this thought due to beliefs of their own not considering the subject but the substantiallity of words." I can't tell you right off hand who wrote it but I remember reading it, maybe not word for word but I do have a photographic memory that will allow me to remember some things pretty good from time to time, at least the ones that hit home the most. Anyway, this pretty much explained to me why I found it hard to consentrate on some stories that are written. They have too much 'filler' and make the story boring to a simple mind (like me =/ ) and they loose interest. Like I said the flash back was informative but I did find myself sifting past some things because I found them not so interesting or concerning. What does it mean? I don't really know. Maybe I'm just a crack pot who don't know nothing. But I wanted to be honest with you and maybe I'm the only one who felt that way. Believe me, I'm not flaming, I love this story and what you have done with it so far. I think you have something great going. I will continue reading it when you get a chance to update. Heavens knows maybe I should spend more time studying and I would have better grades. Like I said, I'm not a rocket scientist or an english scholar. Please do as your feel you must for school and your life. The loyal readers of your story will continue to look for it regardless of how long it takes for the next chapter. I will look for it every time I log on. It's GREAT!! Damn, I think that is the longest review I have ever written.
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  • From ANON - Rawben on September 25, 2005
    great chapter! i'm so excited about this story! you're doing great so far!!
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  • From ANON - not logged in on September 24, 2005
    cool story.

    update.

    it's interesting.
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  • From ANON - amber_eyes on September 24, 2005
    You updated early! After reading your AN I can see why.

    Anyways...I am truly amazed with your talent. This was an awesome chapter, as usual. I can't wait for the next chapter. Kagome seems pretty pissed at her dad right now. Are you going to write something from Inuyasha's point of view? I'm curious of what he thinks of this.
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  • From on September 22, 2005
    You're really good. I wish I had you're talent to write. Maybe one day I will. Can't wait for next chapter! I wonder what Kags will be like.
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  • From on September 22, 2005
    Don't cry...I will not cry...I love this story...
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  • From ANON - Emiko on September 22, 2005
    I'm so glad I came across this story! I love it so please update. Oh, and if you need help with your German translations, I'll help too. Three days to go...
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  • From ANON - Neko89 on September 18, 2005
    This chapter was great! Sept. 25 is coming soon!
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  • From ANON - Neko89 on September 18, 2005
    That was so very sad! Good work!
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