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By : putrikagome
  • From ANON - animegirl93 on August 07, 2005
    Hey your getting better at your writing you have less errors UPDATE!!!i love this fic
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 07, 2005
    kool
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  • From putrikagome on August 07, 2005
    I have corrected the uploading story (again)! Enjoy......Big thanks to Shyneamor...for letting me know.
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  • From putrikagome on August 07, 2005
    Thanks for your correction Shyneamor.....I didn't realise that writing is looking weird like that after it has been uploaded. SOOOOOOOOORY for all the readers. I try to correct that. Thanks again for your interest for my story. I'LL BE BACK!!!
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  • From ANON - Shyneamor on August 07, 2005
    One, I will like to say that I love this fic and I think I've mention that before but damn it I'll say it again. Two, on your chapter 16, you might want to check back over it because you have many typos...I can tell that you must had 'cut and paste' this from an email because I get the same conclusion when Original Sinner edits my fic's....Please update soon....I'll be waiting...

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  • From ANON - Christine on August 07, 2005
    I am loving this. When is Inuyasha going to see kagome? Soon i hope. Oh, can you mixed this chapter by put in "" when the charators are talking. But besides that is was great.
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  • From JunaBlossom on August 07, 2005
    Here I am again!!!
    Damn.... why do you must stop here... huh? Thats soooooo unfair *cry*
    I wanted to know how Inuyasha go trough the well... I mean... there is allot of cement^^ And yayyy... the baby got an japanese Name... *kissyouallover*
    What else?
    Please continue... I really like your FF... I said that a few times^^ its the truth...
    See you next chapter
    Juna
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  • From ANON - Amanda on August 06, 2005
    OMG!!!!this story is amazing i cant wait until u right more!!it is sooooo goood!!please update soooooooon!!!
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  • From ANON - Shyneamor on August 06, 2005
    Damn, you had to stop it there didn't you....I can't wait to see how Inu will get his Kagome back...plz don't let the child grow up without him...
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  • From JunaBlossom on August 06, 2005
    Here I am again... This time with my logg-in name... so as you could read... The review from Juna... was me..
    So... now to what I had to say...
    DAMN RIGHT!! Why shouldn't you write your FF further... because your english isn't the best... Who said this? Man... this sucks... really! My english is also... awful... and? Who don't want to read... go away!!! I like the FF!!!
    Now to the FF: HAAAYAAA!!! The Baby is born wiht little cute doggie-ears!!! I like that ;-) Wich haircolour has it... midnightblack like Kaogme... I mean... little black doggie-ears... KAWAI!! And the eyes? Amber?
    Back to the serious things... Kagome has many thought... it is good. To know what she thinks about all the people and things around her. She is a person who held many things deer in her heart. Despite her situation.... she must look ahead again... and find a way to collect the pieces of her broken heart. Long way to go... right? And Inuyasha won't get her easy back... even she loves him, and wish him back. So I think... Maybe... my thought are wrong... but the next chapters will show it.
    A little help... you said that you don't know who the FF will end?! Make a plan... one sheet of paper will be enough. Write down a few words... slogan what you wanted to write. Like... 1. Fight 2. Back to her Family 3. Inuyasha come to her... you know what I mean... and then... I think you have enough phantasie. Picture it... and you will find your way trough your FF.
    Mybe it help you... I write my FF like that... One is also posted here... Mistakes we made... also posted in german...
    Bye
    Juna
    PS: I beg you... don't give the Baby a wrong name... please... there are in Japan... so I beg you... please give the Baby a japanese name... (http://www.kunigunde.ch/japanische.htm) I thinks it awful... Kagome is a nice name... and Inuyasha... Dogdemon... ha... but then the childs name like... steven... jonothan... you know... it don't belong there...
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  • From ANON - darkjakken on August 06, 2005
    Absolutely....hilarious!! Very Good story..........I can't stop laughing.........Kikyo....she deserved it! Please keep on update! You are getting better in your writing....I say.
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  • From ANON - putrikagome on August 05, 2005
    RESPONSE FROM THE AUTHOR FOR ALL REVIEWS

    First of, I wanna thank for all of you who have been given your reviews both positive and negative. I appreaciate them so much. Writing a story of Inuyasha story....is something like my obsession since I don't like the ending of the series which everything is still uncertain.


    Writing in English also is a very first time for me to try......yes....may be English is my Second language to me but I know English since I was bornt...something familiar....you can say. I will try my best to get better in my writing....


    For one of the reader who said I should stop writing because my English is poor. I am speaking this on behalf all the others Author who got the same problems with me (if they have...) For one, I WILL NEVER STOP WRITING IN MY LIFE JUST BECAUSE MY ENGLISH IS NOT GOOD....because if I stop.....it will be the same as if I got only one feet....then I should stop walk....I must say you are being discriminated in your review. I only know that ADULT FAN FICTION is a freedom of speech....freedom to tell what is your imagination.... If all the reader thinking like you....there won't be any good writer in this world......I always believe everybody deserves an equal opportunity to try their best.


    Second.....Don't you know of the words saying "PRACTICE MAKES YOU PERFECT".


    Third....If you don't like my writing just simply don't read it.....just shut down your computer..... .That's simple. I didn't see in the introduction of this website saying the author which has the poor English....is better get lost....


    However, if all my readers.....didn't like my writing.....I will remove it from this website.....and looking for somewhere else which can accept the equal opportunity to write. I WILL NOT GIVE UP.


    Thank you for your supports...Byako, animegirl 93, Chanda, lady D, darkJakken, Nikki, Juna, ....Markeesha...........and hope many more to come.


    Because of your reviews guys I am still writing....Thank you. Please keep reading and don't get bored to leave some review for me.


    Signed by putrikagome with the footmarked by Shippo :))
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  • From ANON - Markeesha on August 05, 2005
    Great story, I loved it! Keep writing, I want to hear the epilogue!
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  • From ANON - animegirl93 on August 05, 2005
    EVIL CLIFFY!!!!!!!i love the story your grammer is getting better update soon

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  • From ANON - Juna on August 05, 2005
    Hello!!
    I like the little FF of ours... really. Its a shame that you have become just this few reviews, because the story is really good. I'm write FFs on my own... but not in english... so I can say. The backround is good! And the thing wiht Kikyou... oh man... poor Inuyasha... but also... he is such a lier... How could he???
    With Kagome... it's the same... poor little one... with the new life under her heart. Will she really give-up? I don't think so... even she will be with Hojo... what would be a mistake... or not?
    I hope you will write the FF till the very end... I want to know... is there a Happy-End... or flows more tears?
    Hopefully waiting for the next chapter/s
    Juna
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