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Reviews for Forbidden Love

By : lilmab
  • From ANON - Benji XD on September 29, 2005
    Not as many errors this time but the lack of commas got me confused. Other than that, XD still an awsome fic!
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  • From ANON - Benji!! XD on September 29, 2005
    >_< ...so ... many ... SPELLING ERRORS... you put 'mind' instead of 'mine', you put 'warped' instead of 'wrapped', and 'shock' instead of 'shook'. O_o plus I thought Sesshoumaru had only one arm. Oh well. Other than that, great fic so far ^_^
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  • From ANON - Mamimi on September 21, 2005
    your doing well on this!!! i cant wait too see another chapter!! i hope inuyasha's friends (except kagome) except inuyasha and sesshomaru's relashoship!!
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  • From ANON - Lilly on September 09, 2005
    So well Kagome ever find out about them? or win they come back as a couple well shocke eveone?...well there be Jealousy in the air?...well I hope it don't turn out that bad it a pritty good story.
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  • From ANON - person on September 05, 2005
    That was really cool. ^_^ So kawaii. I look forward to your update next month.
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  • From ANON - KuraRose on August 14, 2005
    *Drool* Great work. I hope you update soon even though. Your not going to be able to. But i'll keep on waiting. Nice lemon and yea for future Kagome bashing. :3. hehe. Well i'll be looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - ???? on August 12, 2005
    Yeah, Inu for sure... and i am familiar with this artwork... How does someone draw like that? I like to draw but i dont because i suck at it
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  • From ANON - inu\'s love on August 12, 2005
    Heh you'r not as bad at writing lemons as you think you are. i enjoyed it.
    Can't wait for updates and more stories from you.

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  • From ANON - jaylike on August 10, 2005
    I looked at those pictures and they are cute. I love them and I hope you get to the Lemon soon.
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  • From ANON - yami pandora on August 06, 2005
    please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Satsuki on August 05, 2005
    That is so cool more more more
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  • From ANON - Shantaza on August 04, 2005
    It's a great start. Thanks for sharing it with all us readers. I look forward to reading how it deelopes from here. If I may make a sugesstion, the parenthetical notes seem to interupt the flow... You might want to add them as endnotes rather than putting them within the story itself.

    You've done beter than me -- I still haven't posted a story yet.
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