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Reviews for Wanna Bet?

By : Kurushii
  • From DarkInuLord on December 27, 2007
    The last comment Sango made, made me laugh so hard. Great story.
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  • From Mustang on July 16, 2007
    nice i really lik ethis story
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  • From xxPuppyEarsxx on January 12, 2006
    hahaha this was great!
    i laughed at the beginning and at the end
    and lovedd the middle
    awesome job!
    ^_^
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  • From ANON - josh on October 30, 2005
    that was f'ing awesome! it's to bad for kagome that she can't sit inuyasha even if he finds koga and brags!^-^ good luck with more fics!
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  • From ANON - Kirah on August 23, 2005
    O.o... both hot and kawaii... I like.
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  • From ANON - InuGrrrl on August 20, 2005
    That was really cute.
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  • From ANON - kagome10460 on August 19, 2005
    i loved it one of the best keep writing. email me
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  • From ANON - zane on August 06, 2005
    this is so cute!
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  • From ANON - Cac on August 06, 2005
    Ooh, sweet, hot, cute, funny. "Oh hi Inuyasha what's up" says butt naked Kagome...!! And they may be lovey know but Inuyasha WILL still be annoying, and Kagome on't be able sit him for the next week... he he
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  • From ANON - T on August 04, 2005
    is der goin to b anothah chappie??? i hope so. wat else could dey dare each othah in da hotsprings? will da guys b invited in der little game? or wat will happen wen 2 drunken guys start 2 dare eatch othah late at night? mabey to kiss one of da sleeping beauties? or mabey to grope? or even fondle? but anywayz 5 stars!
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  • From ANON - dee on August 04, 2005
    The story was okay but it was ruined in some parts by serious word errors and typos. The worst one was when you used the word 'menstruations' (which means a woman's time of the month --as in her period or menses) instead of the word 'ministrations' (which means services or attentions).

    Here's the sentence: "...producing a soft moan from their owner and halting his previous menstruations."

    So since when does Inuyasha have a menstrual cycle to halt?

    I would rate the story high if there weren't so many similar word usage errors and typos. As it is, the enjoyment factor was severely decreased because of all the mistakes. I give it only three stars because of the errors.

    Get a beta reader or take more time when you edit/proof-read your story. You have a good imagination, now update your writing skills or get help from someone with good writing skills. I'm not flaming you, I'm being honest and I hope you make an effort to improve.
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  • From ANON - inugirl on August 04, 2005
    AAwwww that was cute, loved the ending, thanks much :)
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