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By : inumom
  • From loretta537 on March 20, 2008
    this was great!
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  • From ANON - katie... on August 27, 2005
    ummm.. i was wondering if you could make a sequel to this, i loved your story! i mean it too! yea but.. please make a sequel, your a very skilled writer soooo you should.. just something you should think about ... hopefully! =D yea soo
    *katie*
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  • From ANON - Worship on August 15, 2005
    I absolutly LOVE this story! You think you might make another one branching off this one? It's too good!
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  • From ANON - Kat on August 15, 2005
    WOW good lemon...write more!!!
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  • From ANON - chanda on August 14, 2005
    Wow, that was a wonderful story. I loved it.
    I do look forward to reading more of your writing.


    Chanda
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  • From ANON - Kiyana Va Sala on August 14, 2005
    Good story, but as a rosary hater this latest chapter annoyed me. It's never anything else. It's always the same reasons for not removing it, no matter what the story. Ah well. There's always time for a change of heart (I hope :P).
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  • From ANON - AmberEyez on August 14, 2005
    Great! - and I've that same 'sit' idea floating around. You wrote it so well! The depth of detail and characterization is wonderful. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - BirdieBlythe on August 14, 2005
    *dabs eyes with a tissue* That was just sweet! I absolutely LOVE this story so cute and loving and *grabs the hubby* inspiring *blushes* Ja Ne!
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  • From ANON - kit master on August 13, 2005
    xxxxxxx!! cool!!! loved it!!! more please more please more please more please =) =-)
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  • From ANON - Jacqui on August 13, 2005
    Wow! I've been reading your story non-stop for a couple days (except for when I had to work! Hehe!) It is wonderful and you write really well. I can see the scenery before me and I can feel the characters feelings! You are an excellent writer and I will continue to read your works from here on out. Good Luck and if you need anything just email me!
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  • From ANON - Shyneamor on August 13, 2005
    Chapter 21 was too much for me....lol....you tickle me silly. I can wait to see what InuYasha has to say about this one. Keep up the good work, now I must attend to my own fic.
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  • From ANON - The C&C Bandit on August 13, 2005
    Extremely well-written. You have excellent style and a knack for wording. It's also nice to find an author who obviously employs proof-reading and possibly even a beta to catch grammar flaws that do not show up in a spell-check. Seriously, the flow of your vocabulary rolls off the tongue (or page, as it were) and THAT is truly rare. You don't burden your readers with excessive detail, nor do you leave us without imagery. Thus far, the plotline has made perfect sense and I certainly hope that continues.

    Places to improve? Honestly, I find it hard to believe that Inuyasha would become so open and affectionate over night. I understand your reasoning - he is simply no longer feeling the need to hold back his impulses. But habits take time to acquire and even longer to break. He has been living the whole of his life quite stifled and suppressed. I would have thought it would take him a while to train himself out of his ingrained defenses. The same also applies for the fact that Inuyasha is not exactly known for being a wordsmith. Saying all the right things at all the right times in all the right ways seems a bit unlikely. I would not go as far as to say it's OOC because you DID explain the reasons why he felt he could drop the pretense. I am merely taking issue with how quickly the change occurred. (Think of it like cussing. As children we are taught not to say 'bad words'. Yet as we get older, we become more exposed to the words and start to introduce them into our own vocabulary over time. You wouldn't often see a child go from pure to potty-mouth over night. And even after we're old enough to use those terms and not have it be considered a travesty, we might choose to go with a less-vulgar word or slip back into old habits. I'd imagine that Inuyasha learning to express himself would be much the same.)

    Also, I am not so convinced Kagome would be thrilled at the prospect of becoming a cave-woman. And I would think that even if SHE agreed, her mother would be a bit shocked. I mean, it is after all A CAVE. They're nice to visit and all, but to live in one forever? It would take adjusting to as a human girl from the modern era. And the idea of using Inuyasha's childhood home is somewhat cliche, and given your incredible creativity in other parts of the fic, I suspect you could have found something a bit more revolutionary.

    Overall, you have good characterization throughout the fic and you clearly have a talent for writing citrus. This is a very enjoyable piece and I look forward to seeing more from you.
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  • From ANON - kit master on August 13, 2005
    very nice. plz update soon. (oh, and plz make a sessy/rin I'm a sucker 4 that couple)
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  • From ANON - AmberEyez on August 12, 2005
    I just lllooovvvee this story. so sweet, so hot... much yumminess. keep on posting!
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  • From ANON - Shyneamor on August 12, 2005
    Damn, that was good. You are so quick to undate and each chapter greats better and better. I need to stop reading your fic and finish my own but I can help it...this is too good. Oh and the Rin idea is classic...I can't wait to see the trouble she'll cost.
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