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Reviews for The Pure Heart of A Child

By : SayuriNakamura
  • From ryukotsusei on August 22, 2005
    Do I forsee a rosary in Yusuke's future? I truy hope I do. He's being an asshole who needs a good ass kicking. Hiei needs to do something fast with her, I understand he doesn't like the idea of rejection but he can see what this is so obviously doing to her. I don't know how much longer she'll be able to go on with these self destructive thoughts. It is sweet though how he's going out of his way to help her even if he doesn't want to get too close to her. Another awesome chapter, I can't wait to read the next one. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 19, 2005
    omg please please update soon or ill go crazy wondering wat just happind!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! will kags get to meet all of her old demon friends please please say she does i wonder how much they all changed please update soon
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on August 19, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Tamiko on August 19, 2005
    Why hi there I don't know if i reviewed for your story but I read chapter 2 and it was good and no chapter is long enough. Good details and slight fluff with Kags and Hiei. Well Keep the good work up and I'll be waitting for the update.
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  • From ryukotsusei on August 19, 2005
    Hmm a burst of wind would indicate Kagura making an appearance.. Unless it's Jin but I seriously doubt he'd be making an appearance at this point in time. I love how Hiei has slipped into protective mode. Yusuke is going to get his head handed to him if he keeps it up. Then again,. Koenma might as well. Excellent chapter, I look forward to reading the next one. Update soon please.
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on August 17, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 17, 2005
    awsome story pretty lady

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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on August 17, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - dark angel-justice on August 15, 2005
    This fic is good,and well written.In saying that I think this should be a Hiei/Kag/karuma-Youko fic.Because you don't see alot of them on here any way,I think.
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  • From ANON - Ox King on August 15, 2005
    Hello there. Just dropping by with a frendly review. I love IY/YYH crossovers. More importantly I love the the Hiei/Kagome love stories. Love triangles are a little tricky. I'm looking forward to seeing how strong your plot idea is. So far I like it.
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  • From ryukotsusei on August 15, 2005
    Very nice Hiei/Kag fluff. I wonder what her mother is going to say when Hiei ends up taking her inside with her injured. Introductions will be forethcoming I am certain, unless he takes her to Kurama though I'm unsure if she would be ready for that. Excellent chapter, you may want to go over the formatting though, AFF has decided to throw in symbols and odd letters throughout the chapter. Can't wait to read the next chapter, I'm off to read the other stories update now. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 15, 2005
    i love this chapt as much as the first i llike how ur developing hieis n kagomes relationship keep up the awsome work!!! i love kag/kur(youko)/hiei pairings but i would sooo love to see a simple pairing of hiei n kags after akk that shes been through she needs a simple love that u and all the readers injoy please update soon^^thx
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on August 15, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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  • From on August 08, 2005
    hurry up and update person i want to what he says to her story
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 08, 2005
    very intresting fic i wanna read more !!! will inu be coming bk will kags see ne one from her past again???? ill b waitin for ur update
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