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Reviews for The Love of Brothers

By : inuyoukai8
  • From ANON - Anon on August 17, 2005
    Don't listen to this marron person, I had no trouble reading and understanding the dialogue, and it doesn't seem like the other reviewers did either, besides even if their was a problem which I don't think there is then to fix it would take away precious time to update the story, and I REALLY REALLY want to read the next chapter so lol please hurry!!! You haven't updated in like two days or so and this is like the story ive focused on reading right now, so i really need my fix, which means I need an update lol haha
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  • From ANON - marron on August 16, 2005
    I was ganna read this, but it's too much work! You've got a problem with the dialogue. You're not suppose to have two different people speak in the same paragraph... it causes for confusion. If two characters that are talking back and forth: each time the speaker changes, you start a new paragraph. I'm hoping you'll listen and fix it, from what I've heard it's a good story, it's just looking at the paragraphs/dialogue the way they are gives me a headache.
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on August 15, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 14, 2005
    Yoiu're so awesome I love how you update :) Have to say what kagome asked of sesshoumaru was interesting, didn't see it coming, but why didn't she ask inuyasha? Well I hope you update soon and I hope more smuts ahead lol *winks*
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  • From ANON - Kams on August 12, 2005
    Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - bettychan on August 11, 2005
    A most excellent story. Please update as soon as you can. I can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - things dreams have come to fear on August 11, 2005
    i love ur story i can't for more i love that kagome likes it a little rough always knew she had it in her lol but anyway i was just finishing up chapter seven and thought u would like to know that ur story is awsome
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  • From ANON - Yasmin on August 10, 2005
    Wow , i just read alll 6 chapters here at work and all i have to say is ..........juicy lol i love it
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 10, 2005
    i love this fic, cant wait till they have a threesome, i wonder how inuyasha and sess are going to interact with each other when kagomes in the equation, please please please by all that is sacraligious lol, update quickly!!!
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  • From ANON - bookreader9999 on August 09, 2005
    I agree. It sounded like he did his duty.

    Great story!! Keep it up!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 09, 2005
    OMG that was flippin awesome, I can't wait for sesshoumarus claiming, not to sound like a beggar but please please please please update soon
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  • From ANON - NightstarAngel on August 09, 2005
    WoW! I love your story; I can not wait for your next chapter. I hope you update very, very soon. Till next time! ;)
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  • From ANON - Diane on August 09, 2005
    I really like this & can hardly wait for more. I do have 1 question though, is there a reason chapter 5 is posted twice?
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  • From ANON - Tiff on August 09, 2005
    I love your story! I like the stories where both brothers have Kagome. Yours is the best so far. I hope that you update soon so I know what happens next. Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - chanda on August 09, 2005
    Awsome story so far, I cannot wait to read more. Please update soon. Just to let you know, you posted chapter 5 twice.

    Keep up the great writing.
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