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By : Menomaru
  • From Menomaru on August 30, 2005
    Okay so now i've fixed most of the problems, you ppl found here. Tell me if you find any more. :)p
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  • From ANON - TheBlackWitch on August 29, 2005
    Hey, your story is going great, but I noticed a few mistakes in this chapter that you might not be aware of, so here's a little constructive criticism for you.

    1. Near the beginning of the chapter, you put BAK UR YU UHA for the Wind Scar. Sorry to tell you, but it's not. The right one for the Wind Scar is, Kaze No Kizu. The one you might have been thinking of was The Back Lash Wave, which is spelt Bakuryuha, not BAK UR YU UHA.

    2. You miss spelt (though I'm sure not on propose) perverted. You hit the o not the p.

    Despite these mistakes, keep on writing, your doing really well.

    post again soon
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  • From ANON - putrikagome on August 27, 2005
    Hey...I have finished the whole chapter. It's so awesome. Please continue. :) Good Job!
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  • From ANON - putrikagome on August 23, 2005
    Hey...you are pretty fast updating the story. I haven't finished read the second one. Good job! Love you.
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  • From ANON - kagome10460 on August 22, 2005
    nice very nice please up date soon^_^
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  • From Menomaru on August 22, 2005
    Thx for letting me know=) i'll put it under construction! :)
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  • From kittenclaws on August 21, 2005
    well it's good but the last chapter was kinda skimpy on the details but it is still cool and don't worry with practice you get used to writing lemons
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  • From Menomaru on August 17, 2005
    Thanks for the encouragement :) its nice to know you like it:)
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  • From ANON - Anaidil on August 15, 2005
    Oh. My. God. I love this story is very interesting. I would really appreciate it if you cvan update as soon as you can please.
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  • From ANON - putrikagome on August 12, 2005
    Your story is good....please continue.... Wondering what will happen next...:)). Thank you for reviewing my story.
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  • From ANON - Jen on August 12, 2005
    this story seems interesting.. i wanna keep on going.. pleeeeeeease update soon!!
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