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Reviews for Family Ties with Business

By : dragonfireyhime7
  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on December 06, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on April 02, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on December 27, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 13, 2006
    Your plot seems alright, but the story is ruined by the grammar usage. you should really find yourself a beta to overlook your work, try typing it up in a word processor before uploading it, or try to editg or reviseit before you load it. It woudl really help your readers understand your fanfiction better as well as gain other readers.
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  • From Rebeldedm on November 12, 2006
    Wow wow wow there's alot of mistake I mean like every where but other than that in what i understood it's cool......update soon....
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  • From HaleyBrooke on December 16, 2005
    good. update please
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  • From ANON - dark Child [am a girl on September 20, 2005
    I like it Please hurry and Update
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on August 19, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on August 18, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on August 17, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on August 17, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Kamui on August 16, 2005
    The plot seems good but ur grammar is HORRIBLE. Please do try and fix it.
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on August 15, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on August 15, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - sesshomarugodess on August 14, 2005
    you really need to work on your grammer i had a hard time understanding the story. but from wut i could u it was good
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