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By : Chew
  • From ANON - Ren on August 16, 2005
    Tee hee hee, sorry for accusing, just wanted to make a point, and also, tee hee hee, it's nice to know some people actually is willing to look up what they are, and know what they are before judging. My cousin unfortunately, doesn't and he said, "Yeah, I know, they're whores..." boy was I pissed. I respect them too, it's hard to live a life of performance, and greatly respect them for it, it's nice to know some one else does, tee hee hee, well other than that, great work, keep it up!!! ^_^ I'll be patiently wait for the next great chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - SquirtlezGurl07 on August 16, 2005
    What a cliffy! cant wait to read the next chap. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Jazmine on August 16, 2005
    I hate cliff hangers!
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  • From ANON - Nahau on August 16, 2005
    I really enjoyed this story and can't wait for you to update. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Emily on August 15, 2005
    I LOVED IT! it wasn't really a lime though... w/e. just one thing- u made a slight mistake when u said 'her hips looked so welcoming that made his blood boiled .’ srry but wrong tense it’s supposed 2 b, ‘her hips looked so welcoming that IT made his blood BOIL.’ Or something like that- I’m not smart enogh 2 no. BUT I ABSOLUTLY LOVED IT AND IF U DON’T UPDATE IN LESS THAN 29 HOURS I SHALL DIE!!!!
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  • From ANON - Jazmine on August 15, 2005
    KEEP GOING!
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  • From ANON - black iris on August 15, 2005
    update soon please
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  • From ANON - animegirl007 on August 15, 2005
    Mmmm....looks like something will be happening soon.....update!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - morwen re on August 15, 2005
    good story! you're keeping sesshoumaru in character, which is hard to do in most sess/rin fics. i hope you update again soon! ja ne for now!
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  • From ANON - Tejas on August 15, 2005
    LIked reading your story alot. nice twist with keeping Rin alive.
    I've also read about the belief of eating mermaid flesh, just the first time reading in a Sess/Rin story.

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  • From ANON - Ren on August 15, 2005
    Tee hee hee, no problem, and Sesshoumaru's being selfish, not that I blame him...*sighs* what'll people do for love...funny...^.^ Great chapter, short, but cute, tee hee hee, I don't know about you, but I say, KAWAII!!! It's so cute, I love it, hope you continue again some time soon once more! ^-^ tee hee hee, oh yes, forgot, for your new chapter, if you're going to make Rin a lady, which I'm pretty sure you are, she's going to have to know A LOT of things. If you are confuse as to using some techniques or such, look up what 'Geisha' girls do, and NO they were NOT whores, they are PERFORMERS!!! Sorry, but almost everyone think that they are whores which they are TOTALLY NOT! Sheesh, they're highly talented in many arts and performances, back in the warring era, which Rin is in, women of the court was expected to be great entertainers, sort of, but lady like, with a lot of clothes, like the juni hito crap, and knows how to sing dance and etc. Tee hee hee, other than that, great chapter, love your story, keep up the great work, I'm still here, be glad to review again ^_^.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 15, 2005
    nice! i love a good rin/sess! especially lemons!! ;)
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 14, 2005
    there'd better b a lime and/or lemon in the next chapter cuz' u teased all that reads! but i LOVED the chapter! Sessy cares! YEAHYA!
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  • From Mmoirai on August 14, 2005
    Well, I enjoyed your first two chapters. Your idea for immortality is a good one, and one I haven't seen before. Your writing flowed fairly nicely. Only a few errors. Good job. Ja Mata!
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  • From ANON - Jazmine on August 14, 2005
    UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE! OR I WILL FUCKIN KILL YOU! JUST KIDDING. BUT SERIOUSLY!
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