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  • From ANON - Ren on August 14, 2005
    Konnichi wa, atashi Ren desu!! Tee hee hee, it's a nice story you're writing, I'm interested in seeing what is to happen next, what is going on? Moon mermaid? Face of a female, body of a MAN!?! *Faints* the horror, oh yes, and I also wanted to ask, the kimonos Rin is wearing, isn't it suppose to be called a 'Juni-hito' it means, 12 layers, I'm pretty sure you've watched Inuyasha, have you seen what his mother, Izayoi wear...that is actually called the 'juni-hito' it's a kimono that consist of many layers. It's said that it's layers color pattern reflected many things including seasons, directions, virtues, and elements of the earth as they related to spirits of nature. It looks good on Izayoi, but don't know if Rin is good looking, it covers practically everything, which is almost uncool, not to mention they wear it ALL the time, though it helps in the winter, I feel bad for them in the summer, I swear the males have it easy.

    Other than that, great chapters, I liked it, please continue again soon, I'll be waiting patiently for another great chapter...tee hee hee, keep up your great work and I'll always been here...tee hee hee, kawaii, he wants her to bear him pups...@.@
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  • From ANON - Rinlover on August 13, 2005
    It was very good! I have a rin site as well. the link is: http://www.geocities.com/theangelofdeath64/
    Rin and sesshoumaru are my favorite couples! I hope that you update soon! I want to see some lemony action! Oh, and your grammer would improve if you proof read it, and change alot of your present tense to past tense. Otherwise, very well written!
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  • From ANON - wishingtherewasashinzosection on August 13, 2005
    I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! does that give u motivation 2 update a.s.a.p???? PLZ PLZ PLZ! (srry i hyper)
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  • From ANON - animegirl007 on August 13, 2005
    I like it so far...but, question... Do you mean amber when you talk about Rin's eyes? You keep using the work ember.....But, other than that it great .....can wait until the next chapter....
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  • From ANON - Jazmine on August 13, 2005
    EXCELLENT WORK! UPDATE SOON!
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