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By : Chew
  • From Starryice on June 27, 2019

    Love it!! Please update & finish soon!!


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  • From ANON - Anon on June 06, 2006
    Hey get back here and finish your story, that is not nice to leave us like that we need to know the rest.
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  • From ANON - the cridic on December 12, 2005
    i remember this storie ivread it before did you copy this because i remember reading the samne storie just finished
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  • From ANON - Ren on October 29, 2005
    Hi there my friend, ^+^ How have you been? Well...I'm reviewing to ask why don't you update anymore? You know something, I've been reading on Fanfiction . net and found that your stories are on there. And you know something, I can't review none of them. I pissed me off...roar, but yeah, I wanted to, and I was interested on your two new stories, hee hee. ^_^ I hope you update them soon, and well..keep up the wonderful work, ne? ^_^ Ja ne!!
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  • From ANON - drummergrrl on October 26, 2005
    this is reli weird how rin is so CLUELESS - lik she doesnt even knoe wut KISSING is..which is kinda lame, she has NEVER heard of a PENNIS?? lik tht is jus...=o. no making sense..lmao. itz cute tho. lol.
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  • From ANON - Gemini on October 20, 2005
    Sweet!^_^ I liked it a lot. Though it was kinda weird that she wasn't told about differences between men and women. I would have thought that Fluffy would want an intelligent mate as well as a beautiful one.:P
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  • From ANON - eiskoenigin on October 09, 2005
    i want the ending!! nice work
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  • From ANON - hiei on September 30, 2005
    yo good story but when are you going to update? you are leaving me hanging. so plz update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thnx.
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  • From ANON - Nahau on August 21, 2005
    The vision you have for this fanfic is really awesome, and your style is good too. But the way you made Rin too innocent made her seem as if she was still a little girl and Sesshoumaru was some kind of child molester. Also, you lemons scenes could use a little more work. I found it too vulgar and the feelings of the characters needed a little more detail. But that's just my opinion. But your story is good and this is not a flame. But I think you can do better.
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  • From ANON - Ren on August 20, 2005
    Tee hee hee, good work, please continue again soon!! I'll be waiting patiently for your next wonderful update..^+^
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  • From ANON - voltron-x on August 20, 2005
    sesshomaru and rin make an interesting couple, and i must say i love rins innocence. i am awaiting the next chapter with great anticipation.
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  • From ANON - Emily on August 19, 2005
    A LEMON! YIPEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!! (but off spring- is really speeled 'offspring') BUT I ABSOLUTLY LOVED IT AND U'D BETTER UPDATE! oh, yeah- *throws coconut* that's for not updateing within 26 hours!
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  • From ANON - Jazmine on August 19, 2005
    I DIDN'T KNOW SESSSHOMARU DIDN'T TEACH RIN ABOUT MATING. I LOVE THE WAY YOU DID THIS LEMON!
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  • From ANON - animegirl007 on August 19, 2005
    That my friend was a very good and sweet lemon........but quick question????? Why is Rin still so naive???? update soon......

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  • From ANON - Emily on August 17, 2005
    Dat b okey dokey. Dur’s just a few in this chapter- like, ‘I’m scare(d) …..Rin is so scared…….’, and the others r just 2 many spaces between words or punctuations. I suck at grammar 2, and have no idea on how I can catch this sorta thing… w/e. neways----- I LOVED THE CHAPTER, AND I GOT MY LIME, AND I CAN’T W8 4 THE LEMON!!!!! AND, IF U DON’T UPDATE IN 26 HOURS I’LL DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (4got meds., srry)
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