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Reviews for Missing Pieces

By : LestatsDarkAngel
  • From ANON - yo on November 21, 2005
    cool. :) i like naughty youko...heh update soon
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  • From ANON - huh? on November 16, 2005
    so is this a youko/yusuke paring? and whats the deal with Keiko? hmmm i need to know more....so write more!! lol ja ne
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  • From ANON - the one on November 16, 2005
    cool fic...love the naughty youko lol update soon k?
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  • From ANON - unknown on November 14, 2005
    interesting story.....you need up update lol...and evil youko...seducing yusuke like that...what fun!! as always i enjoy your story and please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Kage Otome (not logged in) on November 10, 2005
    Well...That certainly wasn't what I was expecting...I'm not really into Yaoi, but hey, I can be openminded...Sometimes. Anyway, keep up the good work!
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  • From DarkRainFiend on November 09, 2005
    What a naughty, naughty fox...but damn! Nice action in there. I have been waiting for an update to this. I am glad to see you have Shippou in it...he really is a huge piece of Kagome's heart. I hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - Ryukotsusei on November 09, 2005
    I do so like it when Youko is naughty. Pity Hiei didn't check out the shrine a bit more thoroughly, I'm sure he would have been surprised to find the girl of his dreams. Glad that you are updating again, can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From Meirun on October 25, 2005
    ack, i forgot to comment on the lemon/lime-ness and other such details ^^; the descriptions are good and the lemon/lime was convincing. damn kagome's luck! *shakes fist* >_O
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  • From Meirun on October 25, 2005
    i think you have a great start as a writer. i feel like there were some words missing and that it moved a little fast for the first chapter. i personally don't like crossovers, but as for the characters i think you got their personas pretty well. but i think hiei was a little more visably aggressive than need be, i don't think he'd be slicing up trees over an erotic dream. also, you mentioned her being penetrated by two guys when there were three... what was the third guy doing?

    also, yoko kurama and suichi are one and the same in that there is only one soul and one persona. the dialogue between them is akward to me that way and makes it seem reminicent of yami/yugi from yugioh and dark/daisuke from d.n.angel where there were two souls occupying the same body.

    the difference between those two examples and kurama is that kurama was a fox demon that possesed an unborn child, that child's soul is gone now. when kurama shifts from his human "shuichi" body into his demon "yoko" body it's just as him "traveling back in time," so to speak (remember their first tournament where kurama's opponent did that mist thing that should have turned him into a baby? it went back too far and turned him back into yoko kurama), or drawing out his full power (like when the other guy gave him that elixer thing kurama drank to become yoko kurama in the fight with kuronoue (i think i spelled that wrong >.>; )).

    at any rate, i think you have alot of potential as a writer and that you have a great start. keep it up :)
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  • From ANON - Anime Fan on October 07, 2005
    wow....just wow....this left me feelin hot...and damn if that an't one hell of a dream. i like tha stori :) it's cool. i respect inu for what he did. that was smart. but i wanna know more! lol and i like how you have Yusuke down to a T. he's really havin it rough :) well i look forward to you stori and please UPDATE SOON!!1

    JA NE ^_^
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  • From ANON - Ryukotsusei on October 04, 2005
    Looking good, glad to see that Kagome made it home ok. Even better that she has Kirara with her. This should teach Souta to watch what he says lol Can't wait for Kagome to meet the guys. As always I look forward to the next chapter. Update soon please
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  • From DarkRainFiend on September 01, 2005
    Another excellent, if sad chapter. I like that you sent Kirara back with Kagome. I haven't seen that done much. I also can't wait for the next update. I am really excited to see what happens when Kagome meets the detectives. Will she be meeting them seperately? Or as a group?
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  • From ANON - ChaosPixiie on September 01, 2005
    LOVE IT!!!!!! Please up date soon!!!!!(please please please) Are no longer writing on Nameless anymore? (i hope not b/c i like that one too) XD
    UP DATE SOON!!!!!
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  • From ryukotsusei on September 01, 2005
    Wonderful chapter, very well done on the scene goodbye. That would be an extremely difficult decision but she was right. As long as she stayed in the past it would be impossible to move on. I look forward to reading the next chapter. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Kage Otome on September 01, 2005
    Very good, your writting just keeps on getting better and better.
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