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By : inufan625
  • From ANON - PJ on January 30, 2006
    Great chapter!!! I see Eri is still jealous and being an all around witch. Thx for posting update soon.
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  • From RoSharla on January 28, 2006
    hey i love this story as well as 'blood and tears' from doggieearlover. as well as some others. please continue this story.
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  • From ANON - Inu Hanyou Nikkie on January 25, 2006
    WOW!!! Another great and brillant chapter!!! That was very nicely done and really touching!! Thank you for this chapter!! I really enjoyed the fact that Miroku and Sango have both matured enough to say they need to leave the group and start their own lives just like Inuyasha and Kagome need to start their own lives. I am glad they will always care for each other. I kind of felt that before the attack with the seroent youkai- her friends were starting to take Kagome for granted again. I just guess they needed another wake up call. I just can't see them all living together under one roof ESPECIALLY with the way Miroku is. That was a really great way you did it. I don't think I have come across another story that had them making such a decision so responiblly- inside a story. Poor Kagome... she has suffered so much pain for everyone. Her heart is so big. I wonder what the others will do to show her that she is very much valued and beloved. I can't wait for the next wonderful update. I look forward to see poor Inu squirming with the wedding. Poor dog boy... he hates so much to stay still.. and that is what will occur with the wedding... I hope he willl be gifted with patience and not lose his temper. Hopefully, with the wedding- Kagome's future friends will lay off Inuyasha ( they do act like a bunch of sharks circling their prey sometimes) or have Kagome tell them to leave him alone. THANK YOU again for this wonderful chapter!!! ANd don't worry about the number of chapters that the story will have.. It is the story itself that tells a writer how long it should be. KUDOS to YOU!!!! YOU TOTALLY ROCK!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Chio on January 24, 2006
    Thanks for updating. I love your story so much.
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  • From ANON - Diane on January 23, 2006
    I really like all your stories & am looking forward to any of them being updated. I do have 1 comment/correction, you have a common word choice goof in all of your fics when you use the word, you have preformed instead of performed which it should be from the context it's used in.
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  • From ANON - Hanyou Slave on January 21, 2006
    This is a wonderfully written fic. I tend to skip author's notes, though I shouldn't. It appears that you have experience with this. I have, but the source was a different injury. I know what it's like to come to awareness in a place that is familiar, but you don't know why. Then you realize that the silence is wrong and it takes a while for you to figure out that there should be the sound of children. You run outside, your heart pounding a hundred miles a minute. You find one, then another, occassionally staring down out your fingers to count, desperately trying to remember how many there are because you are in the country with coyotes, and panthers and snakes, etc. You find them, but can't remember their names. And there seems to be one missing (the one you miscarried, but don't remember), so you're still afraid. Then slowly, it starts coming back and you just want to cry. I understand this. I understand not being able to say the right words, or the right words in the correct order, or even to get the words from your brain to your lips. This does bring back memories.

    You've done an excellent job. Your pace isn't hurried and you take the time to explain and describe events, emotions and thoughts. Words don't come out of characters without an explanation.

    I'm going to go back to reading this wonderful fic.

    Hanyou Slave aka Snowfall
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  • From ANON - penpaninu on January 15, 2006
    I know how annoying it is to see so many hits, and a sparse few reviews. So I thought it be fair I reviewed after eight chapters of reading :D Great story, dramatic, but not overly done, and highly tender. Great job and I can't wait to read the rest
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  • From ANON - inu hanyou nikkie on January 05, 2006
    I am so ashamed of myself... I hadn't reviewed this story in such a long time... Gomen nasi.... Well this is the sweetest chapter I have the pleasure to read.. Inuyasha Proposes to Kagome!! How sweet!!! I loved it!!! And the wedding was touching as well. I absolutely love your writing and as I had mentioned with the other story you should definitely get awards for your stories!!! I really am touched by how you master the worl of writing!!! I wonder when will Kikyou make another appearance? Or if Kikyou will finally pass on in peace? and Koga will he return and be a butt head again? I can't wait to read about the wedding!!!! chuckles.. I enjoyed how both girls were freaked out by Miroku's odd looks and goofy grin..... I thought Sango would have fainted in shock... Laughs.. or smack Miroku.. Wow!! This is great!!! Poor Inu he is sooooo going to suffer if Kagome chooses a Western style wedding!!! Inu in a Tux... LOL!!!! ... another thought the incident with Sesshoumaru and Rin.. will it have a hint of what is to come in later chapters with the realtions between the three.. referring to of course Inuyasha/Sesshoumaru - brother wise and Sesshoumaru/Kagome - respect and human/youkai wise? Will it also reflect in the future? Love the story!!! I can't wait!!! YOU TOTALLY ROCK!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 05, 2006
    I'm glad to see you updated. You have been missed. Another nice chapter. I hadn't even noticed Inuyasha and Kagome hadn't had a human wedding. The way you've written this story, it just seemed so right and natural for them to be together. Poor Inuyahsa, having to propose twice before he got it right. I've got to say, you get the most interesting reviews and I'm really glad to see some of my favorite authors enjoying and reviewing your stories. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - kokoro no miko on December 18, 2005
    I just found this, and raced through it in a day (time that I honestly couldn't afford to spend at this time of year, but that's how it goes). Absolutely beautiful.... I always thought that Inu was a lot brighter than he let on, and that much of
    his pissy attitude was a sort of defense mechanism. I'm glad that you chose to reconcile the brothers, as it always seemed to me that they were really a lot more alike than different, if only Sesshoumaru would lose a little of his own attitude. Some of my favorite bits--when Asami and Inu had their "moment," when she called him her son, Kouga finally getting pretty much what he had coming to him--gods, he's dense!--and, of course, the citrus, which was some of the most beautiful and touching I've ever read. Can't wait for the next part!
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  • From ANON - smurfsicle on December 18, 2005
    *squeals* ah school girl giddyness lol..well I dropped my computer and now i'm having to pound my space bar.. sigh but please update soon this is an awesome story one of my favs!!
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  • From SkankyHime on December 16, 2005
    As always, wonderful. And, congratulations (!)(?) from the way you said it i wasn't sure if that was a happy "im expecting" or .... a not so happy "im expecting". If it is a happy one, then mazel-tov!
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  • From ANON - lithium88 on December 11, 2005
    Another great chapter!! This is a quick review since I don't have much time. Keep up the great work! glad to see that now all of kagome's family know about Inuyasha and Kagome's 'mating'. till your next chapter, take care
    lith*
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  • From ANON - chanda on December 11, 2005
    Wow I had alot to catch up on, sorry havent reviewed in a while been busy, Still loving the story, not to mention your others as well.

    Look forward til the next chapter,
    Chanda
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  • From ANON - Nathaniel on December 07, 2005
    The whole story was awsome,great and totaly wowed me. I hope there will be more added to the story. Maybe you could finish the story until it's done and add what happens next? For instence when will Kagome concive a child? Also when Miroku and Songo get married. Other than that the story was out of this world.
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