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Reviews for Emergence

By : inufan625
  • From ANON - lithium88 on October 31, 2005
    aww, another great chapter. i really liked how you portrayed Inuyasha as having 2 different personalities in both worlds. He actually acts very much the way he would probably act in the series, embarrassed and a bit uncomfortable in front of others, but caring and compassionate when he's alone. it's turning out to be a great story, and it's quite interesting how u portrayed kagome as being more empathetic then before. it makes sense that she would act that way, considering she is uninfluenced by past experiences and incidents. you've developed this story very well, and i can't wait for your next update! til then, take care! ^_^
    lith*
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  • From ANON - InuGrrrl on October 31, 2005
    I really love this story. I seconded it at the IYFG.
    It's well written and I love InuYasha's time of
    reflection. I also liked that you showed him
    reverting back at the Sengoku. It's believable.
    Well done!
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  • From ANON - smurfsicle on October 31, 2005
    damnit... now im all horny, sad, and i dunno... tingly.. lol well neways, keep up the goopd work and update soon please?!?!!
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  • From ANON - SoutasSister on October 30, 2005
    Great chapter. And that is so like Inuyasha to react like that when he's embarrassed. Good job. Update again soon. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - SneakyMantys on October 30, 2005
    You've done a wonderful job with this story! Its easily the best I've ever read. And I've read alot. And I'm picky. The plot is wonderful, and very touching. I just wish it updated more than once a week. :(
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  • From ANON - kashudoreineko on October 28, 2005
    This story is definitely within the top 10 Inuyasha stories I've ever read. I'm not going to tell you where in the top ten it's ranking - I wouldn't want you to get a fat head.

    BUT, I will say this, only about three fanfic stories I've ever read have made me sob uncontrollably. And this one did.

    I hope you continue this story.
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  • From ANON - inu hanyou nikkie on October 27, 2005
    I love the story so much... But I have been pondering several questions for a while now... Since I read the chapter about the male therapist... How is Inuyasha and Kagome going to be when Miroku goes to grope her? Will Inuyasha lay it down for Miroku? (Please I would like to see that.. Inuyasha telling Miroku to keep his hands and hentai ways to himself... But you *sighs* dramatically are the Authur ) AND A PRETTY DAMN GOOD ONE AT THAT!!!!! Will he tell them about the therapist? Or will Miroku just grab her ass and then the truth comes out? Also what has happened to Kikyou? Is she still Undead? or really Dead? And Naraku? Have they fought and won the battle against Naraku? Will these answer be in future chapters? I really love your story and the way you have the characters evolving ( I wouldn't tell Kagome about the command yet either) Will Shippou be making an effort to improve his realtionship with Kagome? All this and so much more... I love stories that get you to sit back and think about things for a while... YOU ARE TOTALLY AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please keep up the good work!!!!!!!!! Look forward to next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Bree on October 27, 2005
    I have a hard time reviewing this fanfic because I need a thesarus just to look up new words to decribe how good it is. With or without a lemon, the romance you have included in this fic make it a wonderful read. I'm glad Kagome is finally home and that Inuyasha told her their past history. I'm wondering though since Kagome didn't remember the shrine as home if she's going to see the past as home. I am also wondering if you're going to bring Kouga into the fic. It would be interesting, with Inuyasha's new found confidence in his feelings for Kagome, to see how he responds to Kouga now. Will look for your updates to see how it all plays out. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - chanda on October 27, 2005
    I can't wait until the next chapter.... Its still really good, yeah she starting to remember.


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  • From ANON - SoutasSister on October 26, 2005
    I like this story. Keep going, please.
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  • From ANON - Cathy (aka doggieearlover) on October 26, 2005
    I still love this story! I'm so happy he finally told her everything and can't wait to see what happens.

    Cathy
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  • From ANON - InuGrrrl on October 26, 2005
    Took a couple of hours off to read this.
    It's really good and original. I love fics
    that show InuYasha opening up & changing.
    It's a refreshing change.
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  • From ANON - Starfury386 on October 25, 2005
    I love the story so far. I think you've gotten better and writing because I'm enjoying the story even more than I did your first. Please continue to update!!!
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  • From ANON - smurfsicle on October 25, 2005
    WOW.. that was a really good chapter! I loved the part with the stars :D keep it up and update soon!
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  • From ANON - Inudaw on October 25, 2005
    Really great story.. I like how things are progressing, but not moving that fast. Makes it believable. Can't wait for an update. Back to reading. ^^:
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