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Reviews for Emergence

By : inufan625
  • From ANON - chanda on September 27, 2005
    I will probably update again after I read your latest chapter, I just wanted to say I agree with your A/N and this is your story only you know how its going to go. So far I absolutly love it, this story it is very heart-warming.

    I just wanted you to know you have my support.

    Chanda
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  • From ANON - lithium88 on September 24, 2005
    another great chapter! ^_^ though the whole ken thing had nothing to do with the story, it was a good little 'side-event'. i also agree with you, the 'inuyasha/kagome's mother' moment was one of the warmest, very sweet. anyway, good job with the story thus far, and you shouldn't be worried about reviews. alot of people just read and don't review, it happens.. , but i'm glad u'll continue to post this story. well t.c bye
    -lith*
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  • From ANON - jodibetz on September 24, 2005
    I have to say, I don't think this incident with the ken guy does anything for the story, you know? It's pretty good so far though the story's development is slowing down. More than a 1,000 reviews and you don't think anyone reads your story?
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  • From ANON - inu hanyou nikkie on September 23, 2005
    Damn!!! More excellent chapters!! The one one you had considered not as good was prefect I felt. . It gave the reader a chance to take in the story as it progresses without having too much at once. A kind of 'take a step back look at the work in progress' type of moment similiar to what I would do with my art projects. It is all stunningly brillant and honestly there ARE no words to describe this work. I just finished chapter seven and WOW!!!!! I mean HOLY MOTHER F*** KAMI WOW!!! You keep them in character so brillantly. I really enjoyed the touch with Kikyo. I feel the REAL Kikyou would have been like that telling Kagome it's Ok to be with Inuyasha. Have you seriously thought of being a author and publishing novels? Cause Lady Genius, I would buy your books without hesitation. Please keep this up.. I can't wait for the next chapter. I bow to you.
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  • From ANON - Daniella on September 23, 2005
    I read fanfictions a lot (here, MM.org and FF.net) but I never thought that good writers such as yourself need reviews telling them how good they are because they've allready knew it, and maybe they felt annoyed that someone little as myself write telling them that, and what they really need is a constructive criticism. You are good, really good, I've read your three stories, my favorite is Making things right. I hope you update soon, because LOVE this story, so keep going, you are good you don't need people telling you that, just read your story and tell me what you feel (is good, isn't it. dam right.. keh). You have a gift.

    PS. I apologise for the spelling but is not my born language. I am from Peru
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  • From ANON - Paul on September 23, 2005
    Thanks, I like angsty fics, especially in canon universe.
    Inuyasha attitude change after this terrible tragedy is good portrayed and believable (just like after incident with Mukotsu poison gas).
    Last chapter was very disturbing, I'm interested what happens next in this molester therapist case, Kag may have to make a testimony.

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  • From ANON - chanda (not logged in) on September 23, 2005
    I am happy to review this story, its so original. I love the way you write. Very detailed. I look forward to your next update and will be happy to review again soon.


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  • From ANON - beccapatty on September 23, 2005
    heyy there.. this story is freaking awesome.. ive been reading it since the beginning but ive never had the time to review.. cuz i normally get time on the computer right before work. and am always in a rush!.. today i woke up early! hehe so i jus wanted to let u kno that u are doing an excellent job.. I love how Inuyasha can understand Kagome and how hes acting nicer to her while still maintaining his character perfectly! :) :) I wonder what's happening with Sango, Miroku, and Shippo.. Shippo prolly misses kagome alot considering hes like her son.. I bet Kagome would remember him a lil bit as well.. Maybe Inu should find a way to bring shippo to Kagome.. like maybe Kagome has a dream where shes holding the lil fox kit.. and she says his name in her sleep.. so as a surprize Inu brings him? that'd be sooo awesome then the cute lil family would be back together again! hehe.. anyways plzzz keeep up the excellent work and i will try to review next chappy when ya get it up as well! :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 23, 2005
    I haven't been home in weeks because of Hurrican Katrina and am sitting in front of a computer to keep myself occupied. I read your fanfiction and its different to say the least. I thought I'ld only read a little to begin with and ended up reading everything you wrote. I find the last chapter a bit disturbing but It was something that I'm sure was not easy to write. It is part of the story so I'll contine to read when I have a chance. Now I'm dealing with Rita so Possibly will be losing power again. Don't feel bad about reviews there might be some in the same boat as me.
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  • From ANON - Me too on September 23, 2005
    I was sorry to hear you feel discouraged about lack of responses. Please don't be. I've thought the whole Inuyasha site has been in a slump recently. Anyway, I just wanted to let you know this is one of the best stories I've read. The plot is engrossing, your portrayal of the characters is beautifully done, and you know how to entertain your readers and keep them coming back for more. Like a previous poster, even when you haven't updated, I pull this story up to read. Please keep up the good work. You're one of my favorite authors.
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  • From ANON - Jared Morris on September 23, 2005
    Hey, I just wanted to take some time and comment on your story. I like it... I like it a lot. I hope you keep posting because I'll keep on reading. I know you like to update once every week, but I find it hard to wait that long. So I just have to read your story from beginning to the current chapter like everyday. I hope you write more because you have a fan in me.
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  • From ANON - Alvida on September 23, 2005
    I am enjoying the story. I have it flagged in IE as a favorite and I check every day to see if it has been updated. I like the fluffiness of it.

    I was glad you made Kagome scarred, thoguh then you wimped out with them being healed. It she has to be pretty on the outside its not love. I did wonder where the heck this hospital is that is took Mrs. Higurashi and Inuyasha a week to drive there.

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  • From ANON - jules on September 23, 2005
    I'm with Kag's mom - why does everything have to happen to Kag. Your story is AWESOME, never thought non A/U Inu could be so sweet and Kag's mom, well she has to be something else, I mean who else would let their daughter run off to Feudal Japan. TGIF and have a great weekend :)
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  • From ANON - Dimepieceleo on September 23, 2005
    Sorry about not reviewing but I have little time but read and move on before work
    This is a very good and unique story I really like it and have been reading every update
    SORRY AGAIN ABOUT NOT REVIEWING
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  • From ANON - SoutasSister on September 22, 2005
    You have every right to poke me with a cattle prod for not reviewing more often. I've been following this story from the beginning and I'm still very much enjoying it. Please keep posting and don't be discouraged by lazy people like me who enjoy the ride and then forget to pay the driver.
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