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Reviews for Innocence?!

By : tergad
  • From ANON - hiei on September 30, 2005
    yo great job on the last chapter the kids name could be a little better oh btw only some spelling errors. also you should do a inuyasha and rin i think it would be funny has hell if sesshomaru fond out death to inuyasha lol.
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  • From ANON - Muem on September 29, 2005
    HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! That was funny!!!! update! *poor sessy* ~.o
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  • From ANON - Muem on September 29, 2005
    HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! that was FUNNY!!!! keep writing and i'll check every five minutes til' u post!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - hiei on September 28, 2005
    HAHAHA i love it can't wiat for the next one.
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  • From ANON - Muem on September 27, 2005
    DUN DUN DUN!!! dude... i can't w8 2 read bout' Sessy and the 'word'. HAHAHAHAHAHA!!! GO RIN!!! neways... thx 4 keeping ur promise- and i can't w8 4 2marow!!!
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  • From ANON - yashanfluffy on September 27, 2005
    poor Sesshy...reminds me of a cartoon on deviant art where Sessh has a rosary on and Rin is sitting him I think Inu would get a kick out of Sessh being in the same situation
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  • From ANON - Muem on September 26, 2005
    U'D BETTER GET A COMPUTER!!!!!!!!!!!!! I WANT ANOTHER CHAPTER DAMNIT!!!!!!! hurry up!!!!! and, u'd better keep ur promise. ~.~
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  • From ANON - Muem on September 24, 2005
    come on! hurry up! i love this story- i wanna no wat happens next!!!!!
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  • From ANON - kiotana on September 13, 2005
    that would be so funny if we can get a rosery for sesshomaru^^
    update soon plz!!!
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  • From ANON - animegirl007 on September 13, 2005
    Inuyasha wouldn't be Inuyasha if he didn't say something smart ass about Sesshomaru and Rin.....I can't wait to read about the nine months.....keep going....
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  • From ANON - Mmoirai on September 13, 2005
    Hello!

    I am really liking how straight forward Rin is in your fiction! Sexy! Wow! Pregnant her first time having sex! What a drag, but to have Sesshoumaru's baby...hmmm...Next chapter please.
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  • From ANON - AAR on September 11, 2005
    keep going. I want ot know what happens.pwease. I know but damn people give her some kudos.
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  • From Janomaru on September 09, 2005
    update pleeeeaaaase i really like the idea
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  • From ANON - animegirl007 on August 28, 2005
    good lemon!!!!! Sesshomaru didn't waste any time did he.....I can't wait until the next chapter.......
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  • From ANON - crumb on August 26, 2005
    Agh, I hate it when people submit incomplete fanfics. Not just incomplete ones, but incomplete short ones. It's not even long enough to review.
    You're doing a really good job so far, I just wish you would read over it and spell check it (found a few errors, which takes away from setting the scene for the reader) and maybe add a little more before cutting off and saying you'll finish later. There's so many fanfics out there, most people won't come back to a continued fanfic if it's this short. You have to really get into it to bother coming back for ever few paragraphs you post.
    Sorry for being negative, this story really does have potential.
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