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Reviews for Two Swords, One Heart

By : kimisan
  • From ANON - Venus on August 31, 2005
    i like it a lot, scratch that, i love it!!!!
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  • From purp1ebabe on August 31, 2005
    yay a lemon!!! lol ne ways i can't wait till next chapter so plz update asap
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  • From ANON - Sei-san on August 30, 2005
    Yay! You responded to my rewiew...And don't worry Vivian-sama; I'm blonder than you (technically speaking, I'm a brunette but whatever) and I just noticed in my last review I spelled your name wrong (super sorry!!) and the word 'little'. Sigh. I'm such an idiot! Urg. Oh my, you finally did it...The lemonade is in the fridge! If you would pardon the pun... You spent twenty chapters creating the lemonade and adding the sexual tension that those characters sorely needed! Whee! I'm so happy that I'm estastic...er, same difference! I was waiting nearly forever for this day....Okay, maybe a week...LESS than a week! Haha~! Ooh, I wish I was brave to post on this site, but I'm always the coward! Aiyah! Well, I, for one, can't WAIT for the next chapter...I'm surprised that Hiei didn't say anything to embarrass Kagome yet! Ah, Kenshin's still the polite bishie, as always! Squee!! Wow, this review is waaay shorter than my other one, but ah well! You didn't seem to have any grammatical errors in Ch. 20, but truthfully I was waaay more into the lemon than looking for mistakes! I'm such a horrible perfectionist...Haha~! I think it would be...fun if they missed the new moon and had to stay there another year! Maybe this fiction would be the one to break the 60 chapter mark! Sigh. Such a blissful brain I have!! I look forward to the next chapter Vivian-sama, that I do~

    =^~^= Thanks a Buncha for this wonderful lemon and story, Sei-san=^~^=
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  • From DarkRainFiend on August 30, 2005
    Oh how lovely it is to log on and find a good fic updated with a yummy lemon :) And quite a nicely written one at that. I am wondering what Hiei's thoughts on all of this are. I know he isn't opposed to sharing a mate since he is youkai, but I wonder if he will broach the subject? Can't wait for another update.
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  • From ryukotsusei on August 30, 2005
    Mmmm very good Lemon there, quite tasty. I wonder what Hiei's thoughts are on what happened between her and Kenshin. I imagine there is going to be quite a bit of jealousy on his part. Good chapter, update soon please.
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  • From ANON - Sayuri-chan on August 30, 2005
    Wonderfully written lemon. I love the lack of words, because it was just the nature of the situation. Words weren't needed. It was another excellent chapter, and I can't wait to read more from you. =)
    Sayuri-chan
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  • From ANON - lady kio-tye on August 30, 2005
    Your Stories: Two Swords, One Heart; The path to hate; and sight of the blind are really good. I hope you are able to update them as soon as possible.
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  • From ANON - sara on August 30, 2005
    mmmmmmmmmmmeeeeeeeooooooowwwwwww. this ia a tasty fanfic. please write more. yum
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  • From purp1ebabe on August 30, 2005
    oohh how i would love to be in kags position at that moment!!! plz update soon
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  • From ANON - Sei-san on August 29, 2005
    Hello, Vivan-sama! My name is Sei-san; I am a big fan of your writing (your quick updates spurred me to become one =^-^=) ever since that Kuro/Kag/Youko fic 'Dreams of You' (I think it's called; I have such a horrid memory...it's not even funny!) I feel bad for not reviewing or responding to your stories, but...*sighs* I'm never good at these things...haha~! Well, I can't say that this fic disappoints me, because, simply, it doesn't!! Two Swords, One Heart is a...a...gosh, I can't explain it or give it a good adjective! It's marvelous, superb, all that and a bag of Cooler Ranch Doritos!! I love Kagome (she's my all-time favorite character...Honestly, the show should be renamed 'Kagome' instead...but maybe I'm too radical! Lol.) I love Kenshin. I love Hiei. So, all in all, your story is the perfect thing for me. Seriously, I'm such a fanatic of this story. I wake up each morning, go see your story, squeal over the three new chapters you spew out, read them, and then fall back asleep because everything else is so boring at my house. I know, I'm tre obsessed! Oh, I hope you aren't freaking out because I centered my whole existance on your fictions....Aiyah, I'm so not good at writing reviews; I tend to gush out my feelings (as you and all the other people probably can tell)! You do have an odd way of joining sentences together. Just a comma, no conjuction words. That's something that could be fixed just by replacing the ',' with a ';'! I also have a question. Where is Kenshin's polite speech? In the English dub, he always goes 'that we should/shouldn't', 'that I do/don't', 'that she/he should/shouldn't' and in the Japanese version, he does basically the same thing...only in Japanese, obvious! Haha~! Even though Kagome is a litte OOC, I really don't mind because you make Kagome stronger and tougher. I thank you for that! Chapter 19 blew my mind!! Poor Kagome...seeing Kenshin naked...She must be mortified! Oooh, I can't WAIT for the next chapter!!! I never want this fiction to end! But, alas, all good things must end! So I'll be waiting for your next great fiction! Maybe a fan fiction with a Yuusuke and Kagome pairing? Please?

    =^~^= Insanely Obsessive, Sei-san=^~^=
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  • From ANON - Sayuri-chan on August 29, 2005
    Surprise is right! *lol* Wonder what's gonna happen next...;) Update soon...this is a terrific story. ::heart ::

    Sayuri-chan
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 29, 2005
    its gettin really hot now ohhh please say kags gonna have her way wit one of them soon i really cant wait for some lemon i really enjoy this fic but r u still gonna be working on the kur/kag/korunue one??? ne way please update this fic ^^
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  • From DarkRainFiend on August 29, 2005
    Ohhh...now that was just evil! I think Kagome needs to just pounce on Kenshin. It would help them both out considerably. Besides...how could she not want to?

    Excellent chapters. I really hope to see another update soon :)
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  • From ryukotsusei on August 29, 2005
    *SNickers* Bet she wasn't expecting that at all. Naked kenshin... *drools* Wonder what she's going to do now? Please update soon, can't wait to find out.
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  • From SayuriNakamura on August 29, 2005
    I so heart this story. It is so good! I don't like it that Kagome thinks they both lied to her, but if I was her, I would probably think the same thing. Looks like she's going to need some more proof. *grins hentaily* Now who makes the first move? I believe it would have to be both, double the pleasure, double the fun? XD Well, I hope you update soon. This story is amazing and I love it to pieces! =)
    Sayuri-chan
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