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Reviews for Two Swords, One Heart

By : kimisan
  • From ANON - Anon on June 21, 2008
    I think this story is forgotten. Four/Five greatest female writers forgot about their stories ....
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  • From Mishka on January 04, 2008
    Is this story forgotten? I remember the other great chapters (Yay!Hiei, Yay! Kenshin, Super YAY! Kagome) and was wondering if you were set on editing and posting or if life had taken you hostage?
    I also noticed your other stories were pretty much abandoned, please tell me you'll update! *puppy eyes*

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  • From Digitechno on November 21, 2007
    Hii.. I would just like to say this story is absolutely terrific. I started reading it awhile back but i didnt get all the way to the end of the chapter list. Just recently i came upon it again and low n behold its gone T-T. Any idea when the revision/rewriting is gonna be done? Could u post maybe the chapters that r done? o.o; Love ur work i cant get enough.. seriously >
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  • From ptbear on April 04, 2007
    Interesting. Update soon. Can't wait to read how they meet and what happens with each one.
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  • From ANON - madmiko on December 07, 2006
    Me again! I am interested in what kinds of changes you think you will make while revising this. Are you just looking at writing style/grammatical crap? Or are you thinking of actually changing some events? Or people? Because I've got to tell you, I think you hit all the right notes the first time. The absolute ONLY thing that ever struck me as even a tiny bit off was Kagome's language. I did have to laugh a few times at her swearing. I think you wrote her with enough backbone that she didn't have to be quite so abrasive. I know you were playing her off against THE MAN: HIEI HIMSELF, but I did think a little more softness might have broke him down faster. But when it comes to style and little writing errors, that stuff never detracts from a good story for me. And I cannot wait to finally see what you have planned for the ending. Obviously the bad guy will need to be recaptured/killed. Yukina's "problem" resolved. (Though that's just a side story for me.) Hiei needs to fess up to Kagome like a real man, er demon. Kagome will have to bear poor Kenshin a child he can really bond with. And there needs to more hot Hiei/Kag, Kenshin/Kag, and Hiei/Kag/Kenshin scenes!! YEEHA! Any timeline in mind for this story? And, which one will you tackle next? Inquiring fans want to know!! Again: thanks for coming back to this!!
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  • From ANON - madmiko on December 07, 2006
    OMG!! I am so excited that you are working on this again!!! You have no idea how often I re-read all you posted. Love, love, love this story! Thank you, thank you, thank you!
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  • From ANON - Pink Fuzzy Elephant on November 24, 2006
    This sparks my interest *nods* so I'll be back ^__^
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  • From ANON - kawaii-miko on November 23, 2006
    WOW
    sound real good cant wait to see the first chap
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  • From ANON - Ryukotsusei on November 23, 2006
    Glad to see you are working on this one again. It's always interesting to see how a persons writing style grows from when you first begin. I loved this story before and I'm sure that I will enjoy even more so with the added detail and scene changes you have planned. Can't wait to read more, update soon please.
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  • From ANON - Sapphire on July 31, 2006
    Alright, apology accepted ... now ... are you planning to update Two Swords, One Heart?
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  • From ANON - Haywire_Hakaze on January 16, 2006
    @ 40

    *Sigh* It seems I'm not signed in more often, nowadays... Oh, well.

    Geezus, me likey. See, I'm one of those people that like the rough stuff. Adjectives like "mercilessly" and verbs like "slammed" or "plunged", and WHOO BOY I'm a happy camper! XD

    I understand Kagome's confusion with Hiei. It DOES seem like he only wants to rutt and got carried away. But we all know better, ne? Of course, Kenshin hasn't shared his thoughts about loving her, either... Eh, I dunno. I'll just wait and see how this goes.

    Oh, one helpful hint. Please be careful with your punctuation and sentence fragments. They make the story less smooth and hard to follow. Thanks bunches!
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  • From ANON - Haywire_Hakaze on January 16, 2006
    @ 13

    Tee-hee, I love this so far. Ugh, I sound like Eri or Yuka... Oh, well. Anyway, this is cute so far. I love Kenshin (haven't seent he series in quite a while, just like YYH) and Hiei, too, so I like the idea so far. But poor Kagome. No other women to be with, alone with two sexy guys that "don't want to be near her". *sigh* It gets better, I hope. ^_^
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  • From ANON - kages on December 16, 2005
    i really like this story i cudn't help but be drawn to it, i cudn't stop until the last chapter please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Badkitty on December 07, 2005
    Great story! Not sure why I never read it earlier but it is really really good. It's very original and holds it's entertainment throughout all the chapters. I love Kagome and Hiei pairings and adding Kenshin into the mix just made it that much hotter. Please continue on and update soon! >^..^
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  • From ANON - VB on November 01, 2005
    Of course I forgot about this triple cross which is good too but I like the other better.
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