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Reviews for The First Inuyasha Shorts

By : penpaninu
  • From Sieg on September 11, 2008
    Interesting you seem to be a decent writer. I like the storys they were intriguing. Keep up your good work.

    ~~Sieg
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  • From kookookitty on April 14, 2008
    check wickipedia... you wrote 'ofuda' one of those charged slips of paper miroku throws at youkai enemies.
    # Sentō (銭湯, Sentō), a type of Japanese communal bath house
    # Ofuro (お風呂, Ofuro), a type of bathtub commonly used in Japan
    # Onsen (温泉, Onsen), a Japanese hot spring traditionally used for public bathing

    chapter 1. i guess they both know now, embarrassing for them both.

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  • From freelke on April 14, 2008
    Thanks for posting so many chapters so far. I really enjoy reading your story!!
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  • From ANON - foxyshippo_luver on January 04, 2006
    That was a great fluffy!! Keep up the good work!!
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  • From ANON - Lill on December 20, 2005
    Very good! Sweet, detailed....I like it!

    Heh...MELIKE! ^_^
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  • From ANON - smurfsicle on December 18, 2005
    you definately need to make this either longer or make a sequel! very good! please continue it!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 17, 2005
    ok, it was good, and i really liked the plot idea, HOWEVER, it would have seemed a tad more plausable had it been a little longer, ands maybe if he didn't have his dream right after she had had hers. but its still good the way it is.
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  • From Kittycat69 on September 09, 2005
    i love your storie! plz update!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 05, 2005
    lol! that was hilarious!! you should make a second chapter/ or sequel!
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  • From ANON - zabchan on September 05, 2005
    whoa. this is the best fanfic i've read all night.

    fluffy, but fluffy with a twist. someohow, NOT having them screw made it that much better of a fanfic. i felt so THERE, i could almost hear inuyasha's gentle breathing and see the way he strained when he dreamed. awesome job.

    i can even see inuyasha's "deer in headlights" expression when kagome discovers him beside her. and what a powerful yet simple gesture of kagome's acceptance! (having him sleep beside her, that is.) and one can't help but compare that reaction to what sango would have done if in the same situation with miroku...slapslapslapslap..etc.

    very warm and fluffy, but not to the point of gagging, i have nothing but praise! this works as a one-shot but i'd adore it if you'd write more!
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  • From ANON - bob on August 28, 2005
    awwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Rawben on August 26, 2005
    ohhh.. that was too good! and so cute! but you gotta keep goin! what about when they see each other next?? something like that *definitly* changes a relationship! ;) but it's still a good oneshot if you want to leave it... *sigh*... ;) lol, anyhow, yey for you! it was good! ;)
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 25, 2005
    You do know that 'ofuda' means prayer scroll or paper charm, right? You have misused the word. An 'ofuda' is what Kagome's grandfather throws at Inuyasha and what Miroku throws to repell demons.

    I don't know what you thought it meant but you misused it.
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