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Reviews for Waiting on a Wish

By : Quillwing717
  • From ANON - SilverPhoenix21 on November 21, 2005
    I love this story! The plot is great and everything. I can't wait until till you update again. Good luck on your project! I have to do one myself.
    I hate doing them! :mumbles while throwing books: hehe anyway...
    Ash
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  • From ANON - Cynbad146 on November 21, 2005
    Next chapter! Next chapter! I vote for working on the next chapter! You do such wonderful work. The story is progressing very nicely. It surprises me that InuYasha will leave Kagome, as worried as he has been. Yes! I think the story will have more roller coaster rides to it if Kagome is accidently knocked up. My little pea brain is trying to outguess what is going to happen next. I am wondering if Naraku will show his tentacled and slimey face next . . . and what made Sesshoumaru kill the human (Naraku's henchman.) You know we love it when Sesshoumaru loses his temper. ("Must keep control . . . ahhhh, @#*!, you will die!!!!! and I will not break a nail doing it!!!") He is such a show stopper. I have no criticism, just want to say how much I enjoyed the chapter. Yes, you can still write!!!! Thank you, Cynbad146
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  • From ANON - Ravi on November 19, 2005
    This is an awesome story so far. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - drake220 on October 03, 2005
    this got unfairly and terribly BURIED under the whole 'you-must-add-a-disclaimer' thing. update it again in a little while and that way all your fans can realize. thank god i went all the way back! but:
    this is your FIRST LEMON!?!?!? it's mind blowingly explicit and yet delicate and sensitive. Very tactfully sexy. No crudeness and that fits perfectly into the whole mood of this story. And the ending was hysterical.
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  • From ANON - Nire-Neko-sama on October 01, 2005
    Oooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was simply delicious!!! If that is what you consider a first time lemon, then I'd love to read one with more experience. Wow!! That wasn't bad at all. Everything was just right. And how did I know that Kagome's mom knew that InuYahsa was there LoL!! Oh I simply adore this story!! I can't get over how good this is!! I love it!!! You are so talented!! I think your way of writing is gorgeous and that you need not change a thing. And special thanks to Blackberry as well!!

    I love it!! I want more!! Can't wait!! ^_____________^

    Nire
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  • From ANON - seashell on October 01, 2005
    Yes! I got my lemon thank you! But I didn't get my marking, *sob*, oh well hopefully that means another lemon.
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  • From ANON - LauReN on October 01, 2005
    That was a very good lemon. ::claps:: It wasn't grody and despite the ferocity it was supposed to mean, it seemed romantic. I liked it alot. And this chapter was funny too. What does 'osuwari' mean?

    ~LauReN
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  • From ANON - IamReven on October 01, 2005
    Ok, I just reviewed this fic, and as I was reading through some of the other reviews, one of them mentioned that you are writing Sachi as well! I've been folowing that fic since the first chapter and have kept it in my favs regardless of how long the new chapters take. I LOVE both of these stories. Please continue to take your time and do right by them. Believe me, they are both worth the wait. The only problem is now that I've sampled of one of your lemons, it's gonna be a challenge to wait it out for the next one. OOOHHH, THE ANTICIPATION.
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  • From ANON - IamReven on October 01, 2005
    That was a truly awesome lemon, definitely one of the best I've read. I'm really enjoying this fic, so KEEP IT COMING!
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  • From ANON - Peacemaker on September 30, 2005
    Another incredible chapter and the lemon scene was done just fine. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
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  • From drake220 on September 26, 2005
    do you know you actually had me nervous that inu was wounded?!?! That's how great that description of kagome's strained nerves and terror was! Brilliant! Love it!
    do you write this out chapter by chapter or is it all written adn just being beta'd?
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  • From ANON - LauReN on September 25, 2005
    Oh thank god! He didn't die!!! Atleast, I think he didn't die. It was the Windscar, right? The giant wave of power? At first, I thought it was spiritual, but then you said that it left grooves in the ground and little of the demon left. So it was like :click: Windscar. You're a very good writer! What about Sachi though? I like that one as well. Keep up the good work! :gives thumbs up:

    ~LauReN
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  • From ANON - a somewhat annoyed friend on September 25, 2005
    first off, this is not meant to offend you or be mean or anything of the sort. i've seen this story on mediaminer, and your a few chapters ahead there. i can understand that you didn't post this all at once, so as to keep people reading, but since you haven't updated on mediminer recently i was getting concerned that you weren't working on the story. anyways, love the story, definately the best i have ever read.
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  • From ANON - NireNekosama on September 25, 2005
    The first thing that comes to mind is AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(That's a good thing)

    My goodness those last three chapters were awesome as usual. I cannot get enough. I might just go back and read them again in case I missed something. One small question: Does Kagome have the Shikon no Tama in her body? Is this whatever Kaede is sensing in Kagome? Just wondering. I especially loved the part where Shippou created a little diversion to get InuYasha's ice cream (Kawaii!!!^_^). And sorry I didn't reveiw last couple of times but now I'm going to make up for that. Also is Sesshoumaru going to make an appearance again?(Just love the guy)

    Hm...

    Well I can't think of any other questions I have so I guess I'll end this. I love you work, you are so talented. I wish you the best of luck!!

    Until next update!

    Nire
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  • From ANON - drake220 on September 22, 2005
    This chapter had some truly great lines. My fav was probably "Sometimes the darkness gave more than the light." That adn the entire scene with Shippou adn Kaede in thier PJs? I was hysterically laughting. great job as usual.




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