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Reviews for Waiting on a Wish

By : Quillwing717
  • From ANON - drake220 on September 07, 2005
    ::whistles:: I wonder what all the patrons in the restuaruant thought, looking out the windows and seeing Inu adn Kag practically having sex on the porch! hehehe! DAMN but that scene was hot!!! H.O.T hot hot hot!!!!! Very well described. Also, your OC's are great- realistic and enjoyable.
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  • From ANON - drake220 on September 06, 2005
    Sango is one protective friend!! hehehe! good for her! I love how you described Inu's thought process. it was very well done.
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  • From ANON - Bathory on September 06, 2005
    This is an awesome story, deserving of about one million positive reviews... sorry I can't give you that, all I can give you is this one very appreciative review. This story defines sexual tension, but there is a great romantic undertone to it that makes it more than just a (fantastic) lemon build-up. Those pesky little things like spelling and grammar are taken care of (things that some fanfic writers seem to think unimportant) and I am genuinely, nail bitingly curious where you are going to go with this story... I see the possibilities going in so many directions.

    You are a very good writer - I have read both the stories you have up ~ I hope you continue with the other story as well ~ and I see a commanding writing style, wonderful characterization, and interesting possibilities as related to plot a common theme in both stories. I hope you keep with the writing and updating, and even maybe turn your thoughts outside of fanfiction into more original works... you obviously have the talent for it.

    Best Wishes
    Bathory
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  • From ANON - lithium88 on September 05, 2005
    another great chapter! ^_^ i'm really intrigued by ur story. i can't wait to see how everything unrolls. u have talent at writing, hah but i dont think u need me to tell u. anyway great story! i'll be awaiting ur next update! til then, t.c. bye!
    lith*
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  • From on September 05, 2005
    I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT! It should get more reviews damn it! God I can't wait until the next chapter. I enjoy how you are unfolding this story. I can't wait until Inuyasha and Kagome finally get togather. I feel bad for Inu though, but Kagome is a woman with dignity and she's right....you can't give yourself to someone you don't really know. Poor Inu. And don't beat yourself up...you have amazing citrus skills. I wish I could write like you. I can't even write a kissing scene! Anyway...a job well done. Pat yourself on the back.
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  • From on September 05, 2005
    Holy ****!! Now that was interesting. The summary was really good and that's what intrigued me to read the prologue and boy was I shocked! I'm going to read the next chapter now if you don't mind...I got to find out what happens!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 04, 2005
    I seriously love this fic, it's well written and original, and incredibly romantic... I am looking forward to future updates, and wish you only well in your writing of it
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  • From ANON - seashell on September 03, 2005
    Excellent story, must update soon please!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - cu-kid on September 03, 2005
    I have a feeling my reviews will start getting all repetative, because, by the end of the chapters, all I can think is, "Wow...that was...beautiful." ^_^
    I loved the 'fight' scene between Sango and Inu. Wow, she really wailed on him...that was kind of funny.

    So, awesome chapter and, of course, can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - lithium88 on September 03, 2005
    nice chapter once again. it's quite intriging how inuyasha seems to have an obsession with protecting kagome. but i wonder wat it is he exactly wants to protect her from. anyway, i hope you continue with it!!! love this story so far, and i can't wait for your Update!! til then! t.c. ^_^
    lith*
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  • From ANON - srg1 on September 03, 2005
    Sigh.... This is so good!!!!!! Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - srg1 on September 01, 2005
    This is very good!!!!!!! It feels warm and fluffy!!! I can't wait to read the next chapter! Please update soon!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - drake220 on September 01, 2005
    this is fabulous! I mean, a really really well concieved, well written and well executed fic. It's a joy to read. Intelligent, sexy, plot AND character driven. Honestly, this fic is a big enough miracle to be put into the Bible. Great job!!!!! (i'm adding this to my fav. it's that good.) PLEASE update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - lithium88 on August 31, 2005
    hahaha... aww poor shippou... hah nice chappy! ^_^ i didn't think they would move so fast.. but hey! i'm not complaining! *grins* anyway!! i'm still lost... so does inuyasha remember kagome from their past life? .. or... eh *is lost* but oh well!! i like this story anyway. excuse my insolence, it's late.. i love where u're taking this story so far, you have a vivid way of writing that just makes everything flow smoothly. update soon, cuz it's getting good!! ^_^ till then! t.c. bye!
    Lith*
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  • From cukid9 on August 31, 2005
    Great, beautiful, fantastic! ^_^

    It's irritating, isn't it, when a chapter writes itself? I find, though, that sometimes the best stuff comes from those chapters. Inuyasha seems to know what's going on (he does, doesn't he?), so it makes sense that he would move fast. I think the actual timing of the lemon will depend on how long you plan to make this story, and how much tension you want between them. I'm not sure there was anything I particularly disliked about this chapter. The scene at the orphanage was good -introducing Shippo and mentioning the Thunder Bros- I like how you have incorporated the original story in this. The scene outside Kags' apartment was hot and had me holding my breath.

    I would say, so far, great story. I'm really looking forward to seeing how this unfolds. Keep it up!
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