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Reviews for The Captive Bride

By : cyancat
  • From ANON - Dream_Toxin on January 24, 2006
    Oh that was so sweet and tender and sad at the same time! I loved it espically when Ayame was giving Sesshoumaru the 411 or the 3rd degree whatever it was she was giving it to him like he deserved, can't wait till the next update!
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  • From ANON - Mmoirai on January 22, 2006
    Wonderful work. When I read the chapter title I thought, 'oh no...please don't let the baby die!' but we all knew that Rin's mother wasn't doing so well, so I'm so glad the new twins have arrived healthy, and I cried when Rin's mom died. When she told her mother she was going to be a grandmother, the waterworks really started up. I have to go blow my nose now. Can't wait for your next update.
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  • From ANON - yippie on January 22, 2006
    Yippie
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  • From ANON - Ren on January 22, 2006
    Good work, keep it up! :D
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  • From ANON - Hannah on January 21, 2006
    Awwww.... this was sooo sad but yet so happy..... hehehehe sesshomaru is going to be a daddy..... lmao can't wait.... please update soon....
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  • From ANON - kagome2004 on January 21, 2006
    omg omg omg omg that chapter was awesome keep it going
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  • From ANON - Jenna on January 21, 2006
    Keep updating -- best chapter yet!
    i'm just Loving it!
    -Jenna-
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  • From ANON - Ana on January 21, 2006
    Oh that was wonderful. Sesshy can be such a bastard. Is Yashie being allowed to see Kags yet?
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  • From ANON - Akasha on January 21, 2006
    Wow that was a great chapter! Can't wait for more of them!
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  • From ANON - babe_galanime on January 20, 2006
    continue plz. sess/rin rocks

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  • From ANON - Anon on January 20, 2006
    I dun't know if I'vw reviewed ur story yet but I have read it and think it is awesome! ^.^! As for the name... Boy: Ryoku (means power) Girl: Kimiko (my fave Japanese name) or Chikara (strength) kk BYE! --Judo
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  • From ANON - Redlightspin on January 20, 2006
    take some random letters from each of their names mix them up and you have a baby's name now get back to the story it's good
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  • From ANON - Sarah on January 18, 2006
    Since Ayame means " Iris" Kohana means " Little flower" i think its appropriate, since it will be a little baby Ayame. I also like Akina "spring flower ", Yuri "lily "


    And if you decide that you wish the baby to be a boy, Tomo"twin", could be used. Then you could decide that the baby be almost an exact replica of Koga. Kane "tribute, warrior; the doubly-accomplished, golden; man, the eastern sky; beautiful" i liked as well. But... your choice. I have a lot more if your interested.
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  • From ANON - evilducktape101 on January 17, 2006
    *reaching for the computer screen* 3 days left...

    by the way, you said it was based off the plot of your mom's old romance book...what book is it? if it is anything like your story, i wanna read it...
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  • From ANON - Mmoirai on January 16, 2006
    Also...

    Gekkani = 'in the moonlight'
    Niji = 'Rainbow'
    Mist = 'Kiri', 'Enmu'
    Color / Colorful = 'Teishoku'
    Night / Nighttime = 'Yoru', 'Yabun'

    First and middle name???? Niji Gekkani
    Teishoku Kiri
    Teishoku Kiriyoru

    First name?? Kiriyoru
    Gekkanikiri

    Hmmmm....yikes this is tough!
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