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Reviews for A Hanyou's Lust

By : Darkstarr
  • From ANON - kyaria on August 29, 2005
    For large blocks of text with incorrect paragraph structure and poor grammar, I give it a '2'.
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  • From ANON - pat on August 29, 2005
    liked it but u better update oh and i loved it

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  • From ANON - animepunk93 on August 29, 2005
    oh come on you need to updatw must find out what happens next
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  • From ANON - IG-88 on August 29, 2005
    Please update.
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  • From ANON - CrimsonYoukai on August 29, 2005
    Nice start...BUT alot of spelling errors and the paragraphs
    need to be enforced. Other than that, it's pretty decent.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 29, 2005
    I like this story please update soon ok. thank you
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  • From Darkstarr on August 29, 2005
    Hey Author here i forgot to mention i dont accept flames but i could use some advise good or bad just no flames and i think those who have read and reviewed....im posting this cause im not sure how to check my reviews hehe silly of me eh? well i will get the next chapter up asap ^_^ thanks again
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  • From inufan625 on August 29, 2005
    There is no need to be so rude, grammer teacher... That said, breaking your story up into paragraphs even if it is only to seperate dialogue from the body of the story would make it much easier to read and much more enjoyable. Anyway don't let people who have nothing better than to go around talking down to others for their enjoyment get you down. You can't get better at anything without practice. Keep working on it and feel free to email me if you want some suggestions or someone to look over your work.
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  • From ANON - grammar teacher on August 29, 2005
    Let me introduce you to an new and exciting concept. It's called the "paragraph". Now I know it sounds scary but it would really make it easier for anyone to read your story. As it stands it's just a pile of words...and I refuse to read crap that someone can't even bother to punctuate. Get a beta reader, borrow a grammar book, pick your teacher's brain for a detail or two about that "paragraph" concept and try again when you won't be wasting our time.
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  • From ANON - kj on August 29, 2005
    awww that was sweet please keep going.
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