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Reviews for A Hanyou's Lust

By : Darkstarr
  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on March 02, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on June 03, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on April 06, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From XxSangoxX on July 27, 2006
    um... you have MAJOR format errors... just thought you should know what you already know

    haha
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  • From ANON - stegy girl on November 01, 2005
    i like that very much but u did mess up a few tims umm on it u kept doing it from inuyashas point of veiw then normal point of veiw u put somthing like i velt her velvity lips against mine she pulled away "kagome" he said in a pain filled voice or summin like that but other wise it was GREAT cant wait 4 the next chapter
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  • From ANON - Hanako on September 22, 2005
    i love this story, i hop eyou make inuyasha come to his senses.=)
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  • From yashafan1 on September 16, 2005
    Ok, I like the general premise of your story. You write well, but it's hard to read your story. The sentences should be sepearted not bunched together. Very difficult to read.

    Also, I suggest getting a beta to help with the grammer and spelling. Again, you write very well, but the story needs structure. It can be so much better than it is now. Believe me.

    Inuyasha seems to be keeping in character, Kagome is a bit off, but still believable. I am looking forward to reading more of your story.
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  • From ANON - stegy on September 08, 2005
    ok i reveiwed now will u pleez update thanx peace
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  • From ANON - bettychan on August 31, 2005
    Love the story. Can't wait to see what happens next. Hint: go to openoffice.org. It's just as good as Word, if not better. And it's free. I recommend it to everybody.
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  • From ANON - lkj on August 30, 2005
    that was good keep going
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  • From ANON - not bad on August 30, 2005
    pretty much what my name is update soon!
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  • From ANON - Meep! on August 30, 2005
    Good story i liked it review soon

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  • From ANON - Keyeky on August 30, 2005
    OO; Nice.. xD
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  • From ANON - alicia on August 30, 2005
    please make more story

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  • From ANON - Anon on August 29, 2005
    Inuyasha is an asshole so why is Kagome accepting him?

    You could use a beta reader. You have lots of spelling errors and you need someone to help with your grammar. But before you do that, you might want to have someone help you with the story since you are not giving the characters sufficient motivation for the way they are acting. It is not believable and they are out of character.
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