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Reviews for sango's pain

By : setossoulmate
  • From FreaKyKinKy on January 09, 2008
    .......................... You shouldn't even try..
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  • From queenwitch6 on February 08, 2007
    When you write a story you need to add details. I think I would like the story line if it had more of a form to it. The way it is now is boring. You don't tell how or why thay got closer or how long they were to together. You just skipped all of the story and went right into the point. Keep trying and I think it can be good.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 18, 2006
    ....
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  • From ANON - Iyasu on October 12, 2006
    What the hell was that besides a jumbled mess? Go. Work. On. It. Now. That was the worst "fic" I've ever seen.
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  • From ANON - LaLaMoon on December 23, 2005
    Keep working on an update. Cause I'll be back.
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  • From ANON - miss_panties on October 24, 2005
    u gonna continue this? its really cool...i luff it
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  • From ANON - Sango on September 18, 2005
    This is a good story, but to be honest, it needs alot of work. Everything is crammed into one paragraph and that makes it extremely hard to read. Also, you need to watch your spelling and capitalization. If you want, I can be your beta. I am not the best writer, but I can at least help you by checking your spelling and grammar. If you need me to beta your story, just send it to me as an attachment. My email is Sango916@hotmail.com
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  • From ANON - nihilatrix on September 08, 2005
    Nice premise, bad spelling and capitalization, no paragraph breaks...a bit of reworking and lengthening, and this could be good. I'd suggest a beta reader though.

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  • From ANON - Sesshy\'s Black Fox Demoness Sango on September 01, 2005
    make it longer and more detailed please
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