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Reviews for Gone Swimmin'

By : Quickening
  • From DarkInuLord on December 27, 2007
    I'm surprised I never read this, but I s'pose this was during my internet hiatus.

    It was fantastic, definitely got my blood 'pumping'. If you catch my drift. I'll be checking your profile for more! Keep up the good work, and all that good stuffs.
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  • From ANON - butterflysuki on January 26, 2006
    Great job! Cute and sexy. Enjoyed it very much!
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on September 06, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - ldymoonluvsinuyasha (not logged in) on September 05, 2005
    What can I say, I loved this one shot, I got the plot, Inuyasha naked, heat wave, cool water, Inuyasha is naked, I would want to be in this story too, bring on the heat wave if I can get a moment with Inuyasha!__!

    Anyway, it was well written and the angst was really realistic and good. I like how Inuyasha thoroughlly embarrassed still stood with his arms crossed over his chest stating to Kagome the obvious attraction he had toward her. I just loved the whole innocent things they experienced together before they became aware of the "making love" thing. It reminds me sort of of my first time. *blushes*

    ldymoon
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  • From ANON - InuGrrrl on September 03, 2005
    Loved it! What a goggle and WAFF fest. LOVED the handjob, heh.
    Nicely done!
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  • From ANON - queen bean on September 02, 2005
    this totally rocked, no joke. The characters acted like in the manga, the thought of sweaty Inuyasha (gurgle). I loved it! fantasy is all about experiencing the moment... you don;t always need a huge story to get feelings and fantasies across. You really, really need to keep writing.

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  • From ANON - Anon on September 02, 2005
    If fan art is what inspired this fic, we simply must send you more lovely art of Inuyasha. SERIOUSLY! This is a truly quality piece that manages to put a new spin on 'the bath scenario'. I enjoy the way both Kagome and Inuyasha managed to stay in character; most authors give Inuyasha a silver tongue to match that hair of his. He was both cocky and self-conscious which is EXACTLY the way he is in the series. And except for a short crying spell (which was necessary to advance the plot), Kagome wasn't a simpering schoolgirl. She got angry more often than sad, and THAT is very her. Not to mention that I could fully see her using that precise 'twisted logic' to justify oggling Inuyasha.

    Simply gorgeous. I really hope you get inspired by this couple again. You write for them incredibly well.
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  • From ANON - fallenangel7583 on September 02, 2005
    very cute. very well written as well. i loved it! you really nailed down inu and kag, i think. so many fics have them all gushy when they first see eachother instead of the actual character reactions. i think, honestly, that if it was more of a hentai show, this is how it would go down. inu forced into admiting stuff and still being his slick self about it and kagome simply red as a tomatoe throughout the whole thing. props for a well written one shot!!!
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  • From ANON - AmberEyez on September 01, 2005
    extremely yummy. I just love the way you write..... fabu!
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  • From ANON - drake220 on September 01, 2005
    that bottom AN was hysterical. I loved this! Hysterical with a really hot sex scene and an adorable ending! Great job!!
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  • From ANON - lizzy on September 01, 2005
    Very good One shot. I LOVED IT! Best Lemon I've read in a long long looong time.
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  • From ANON - inufan625 on September 01, 2005
    Who cares about plot honestly... But seriously this was really cute and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.

    It was too funny and I laughed out loud at Kagome's thoughts...'Nice dick. Can I touch it' priceless.

    Anyway you have a nice style and I hope you will find yourself further inspired. I will look forward to it. I think this could be a great starting place for a series of connected one shots.
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  • From ANON - penpaninu on September 01, 2005
    GREAT STORY! well done and well written....GREAT!
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  • From ANON - sara on September 01, 2005
    ddddddddddrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrroooooooooooooooooooooooooolllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll. omg. that was so sos. yummy. what i would give to have been kagome. the best one-shot i have evr read.
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  • From ANON - Kat on September 01, 2005
    I liked it!!!
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